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YouInventedMe β€” the dance has ended
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Published: 2019-10-23 12:01:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 709; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 0
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Description and it's okay, love
let him sip his own poison
you need drink no more
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Eefera [2019-12-09 05:09:30 +0000 UTC]

This. I just read Tiger--eyes piece that she posted recently, and even though this one was written long before it, it was eerie how they fit together. I love it when that happens.Β 


This is really beautiful.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Eefera [2019-12-10 03:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. <3 Tiger--eyes covered all I could say about this one (and more) in her own response. She's more than a little responsible for the glut of submissions from me in your notification center.

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Eefera In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-12-10 04:25:26 +0000 UTC]

I figured as much. πŸ˜‰
It is really special to see two excellent poets inspiring each other. Thanks for letting us read them.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Eefera [2019-12-10 04:28:14 +0000 UTC]

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Tiger--eyes In reply to Eefera [2019-12-09 13:58:14 +0000 UTC]

I love that you’ve noticed this. Being trauma bonded with the man I married has fueled a lot of poetry between Shane and Iβ€”those desperate ones from me; unfaltering support and reminders from him. And, because I’ve never been someone who can just rip the bandaid off and have it be done, this is a conversation that’s been going on for a long time now. Both of our galleries are scattered with breadcrumbs.Β 


you do not have to danceoh love
get out of chaos place
stop this eating fumes
and sparking off
into the same
cold concrete walls
find your breath
love
make your own elixirs
pour the old ones out
onto
his flames

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Eefera In reply to Tiger--eyes [2019-12-10 04:27:55 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could shower this comment with love. This is how human beings should treat each other, holding space and reminding each other that we are loved and valuable. ❀️ I process in a similar way, raw feelings poured out on a page. And if that is what helps you heal, don’t let anyone tell you to stop writing that way. ❀️❀️❀️

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booknerd110 [2019-10-24 21:11:43 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of my ex. He cheated on me, and I'm pretty sure he's drinking his own poison now

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YouInventedMe In reply to booknerd110 [2019-10-25 03:44:32 +0000 UTC]

Sorry to hear it. Humans don't treat each other nearly well enough.

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booknerd110 In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-10-25 11:48:37 +0000 UTC]

I was kind of relieved to break up with him lol. He was about as dramatic as a teenage girl on her period. And no, they don't. I feel the world would be so much more simpler if people would be kind to one another and just mind their own business lol

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NotWithoutHonor [2019-10-24 02:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Excellent

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YouInventedMe In reply to NotWithoutHonor [2019-10-24 04:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much.

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Ask1Vegeta [2019-10-23 21:47:01 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe In reply to Ask1Vegeta [2019-10-24 04:57:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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APoorUnfortunateSoul [2019-10-23 20:38:46 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe In reply to APoorUnfortunateSoul [2019-10-24 04:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot.

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APoorUnfortunateSoul In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-10-24 18:44:35 +0000 UTC]

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LiterarySerenity [2019-10-23 19:28:28 +0000 UTC]

Bravo.

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YouInventedMe In reply to LiterarySerenity [2019-10-24 04:57:59 +0000 UTC]

<3

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xlntwtch [2019-10-23 16:45:15 +0000 UTC]

...

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YouInventedMe In reply to xlntwtch [2019-10-23 16:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Eliza-Thorvalds [2019-10-23 14:45:30 +0000 UTC]

this is quite well said
your talent clearly shows through
I'm duly impressed

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YouInventedMe In reply to Eliza-Thorvalds [2019-10-23 15:47:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I appreciate the complimentku.

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