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Hi, ^^ well, here is the next page ^^ I hope that you liked it and enjoy it ^^Please pay more attintion on this page, because it is one of the keys of the story as we go further ^^ .
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Thanks a lot, I would like to draw the next page now, ^^ so I hope you can wait for it, if not , I hope you'll enjoy seeing it later at anytime ^^.
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Ok sure I'll see afterwards at some point..
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Take your time ^^.
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Exams are finished now
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I am glad to hear that ^^, I hope you've done well ^^.
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Yeah, I did alright......How are you?
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I am glad to hear that ^^, I am fine thank you ^^
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Glad to hear that you are well!!!
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ME too. ^^
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I like this story line Younes, it is very compelling for the person to want to read the next chapter. You have created something really good and the typing is easy to read. You know I love your lines and you did not disappoint on this panel you did some really nice art with your story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Dygyt Alice
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Thank you so much, ^^ I am really glad that this was easy to read for you ^^ cause someone just told I don't understand anything, or he told me, I have a lot of grammar mistakes and such >_< . Well, my real langauge is not English, so it's a bit hard for me to be that good to make everyone understand a more complix sentences fom me, so that's why I am planning to make everything I write is easy and such ^^ to read atleast ^-^
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If people cannot put your words to the people they belong too it is not your fault. It is obvious English is not your first language but that makes up way too many people on deviantART. So the person who was doing the complaining either does not understand your work or cannot translate. The mistakes others make because they are making the effort to write in English is what helps me read everyone's work on this page.
If you still have only one person complaining laugh it off, it is not worth the effort. You are creating good works and enjoying yourself do not let anyone take that away from you.
Dygyt Alice
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Well, I think you might be right, but the one who complained was an English speaker >3< . He or she said that if I want any help with the grammar I can ask her or him . But that's really OK with me ^^. from the begining I wasn't that good at English, Will I don't know how I can percentage my English knowledge ^3^.
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Listen Younes you got those watchers because they like you. I too could have helped you if you had wanted but your characters would not sound the same. The way you speak and the way you draw tell the story good enough for me. There are way too many people on dA whose first language is not English, I have two friends in Indonesia who translate as well and I do not have a problem understanding them either.
So I might read a sentence twice how many times do you have to do that? It is just who you are, plenty of people would have helped you if you wanted. That includes me but your art would not be the same. Stay the way you already are and people will understand.
Dygyt Alice
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Thanks a lot ^^, your comments and being with me is the thing that helps me ^^. thanks a lot for it ^^,
You can see page 4 now if you like to ^^. I hope that you will enjoy the story so far ^^.
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Whoa...this page looks so professional!!! *o* Like the shading and interesting dialogue~! This is really turning into an awesome opening chapter for your manga ^^
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You can see page 4 now ^ ^ I hope you'll like it and enjoy it ^^ .
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Oh O_O hello, my friend ^^. Thank you so much for concedering this as a pro work :3 . XD
Thanks a lot, well, I hope that you'll enjoy the whole story then ^^, I am going to try very hard to take my time drawing every single page of this story ^^, because I really want it to be the best story I created until now ^^.
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I'm loving the story so far XD.
I liked it how he said what the rings are in like story mode and lots of ... uhh ... boom! @| *Don't know the word xD*
And then fades to a "Well... you are right anyway.." xD
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XD, well, as you saw, the elf doesn't know how people are calling the rings users and such, you'll know much more later ^^. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story ^^. and have a nice day ^^ .
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You can see page 4 now ^ ^ I hope you'll like it and enjoy it ^^ .
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So far so good ^^. The only thing bugging me is the dialogue grammar. But other than that, you are establishing a very solid entrance plot ^^
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You can see page 4 now ^ ^ I hope you'll like it and enjoy it ^^ .
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Thank you so much, well I have to say, I am very sorry. I am not an English speaker, but I do learned English, and really I am doing the best I can do about the grammar, because this story I made it first on my own Language so I am translating it after all. Thanks a lot for the comment though, I'll try to do much better grammar later ^^ so you can enjoy the story much more . ^^
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lol ah I see. If you need any help for translation grammer or anything I'll help you out ^^
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Thanks a lot ^^. the thing is I don't know the story lines until I draw the page XD . so I kinda not even planning what I am going to say on every pannel XD , but later with my story lines things I think I may do them much more better ^3^ .
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Oooh. Things are getting interesting even more interesting than before. I like their attitude. And the dialogue is really cool 
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Thanks a lot ^^, I hope that you'll enjoy the rest of the story, at least this whole chapter . ^^
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I really like it! I like how you put enough drama inside the story.. and how you explan things... though i love the drawling still the most... amazing job!!!
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Thanks a lot ^^, I am glad that you liked it ^^.
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yep!!! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks a lot, I will as I really hope ^^ .
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