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Your-Evil-Lil-Minion — Our Happy Ending....

Published: 2011-06-07 11:41:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 2296; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 9
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Description This should have been the ending to Pocahontas!! I almost cried when i saw pocahontas 2 i dont care what is historicaly accurate Pocahontas and John Smith deserve their happy ending!!!! so anyway this is how i think it should have ended: (btw Rolfe hasnt arived there yet muahaha!! )
John is in London healing from his gunshot wound and has been trying to find out when the next ship is going to sail to "The New World" he hops aboard one with perfect timing,for his wound has almost healed completely. and the wind blows past his face and the waves crash underneath all he can think about is her, Pocahontas.

Johns Pov

"How ya holding up lad?" Lon asked me concerned.

"Alright, I guess, Im just hoping she hasn't moved on or forgotten me," I replied sadly.

"Ahhh, your John Smith for cryin out loud! How could any soul forget you!" Lon said encouragingly.

"Yeah John, not much of chance she moved on from you!" Thomas added.

"Ah, Thomas your such a suck up!" I joked pulling Thomas's hat over his eyes.

Thomas chuckled readjusting his hat. "Say John,what was the name of her friend again?"

"Who? Nakoma? Why do you ask Thomas?"

"Oh, no reason i just like to know the names of people,you know, I dont want to seem rude or anything...well im going to see if there is anything to eat, yall want anything? Okay be right back!" He ran off.

Lon laughed loudly, "The boy's more smitten than you eh, Smith?"

I laughed with him.

......Many weeks later(I dont really know how long the trip takes xD)

We're finally there. Memories come rushing back as I smell the fresh clean air. I wonder where she might be. I see a group of her people waiting on the shoreline. We unloaded onto the rowboats and rowed to shore. The Indians appeared nervous,but they had every right to be on account of what happened on our last trip. When they saw me step on land they all began to mumble to eachother in a language i couldn't understand. One young man ran off and disappeared into the dense forest.

"John what's all the ruckus" Ben whispered.

"I'm not sure" I whispered back.

Then, over the horizon appeared the same man that ran off a moment ago and the chief. The chief, the father of the woman I loved. Once he had reached us he spoke...to me.

"John Smith, Brother, you've returned" he said in a welcoming voice.

"Yes sir, and we come in nothing but peace sir." I said respectfully.

He smiled warmly. I then notice Nakoma dragging a woman along with her. The woman's head hung low and her shoulders slumped. As they got closer i could hear their voices.

"No, I promise it's really him come on I'll show you" Nakoma spoke excitedly dragging her along.

"Nakoma, it can't be him," she lifted her head, it was Pocahontas. "He's dead, it can't be"

"No Pocahontas, Look!" Nakoma said sternly.

She looked up and her slumped posture straightened into her graceful stance that i remembered so clearly. She slowly approached me. She put her hands on my cheeks and looked intently into my eyes i stared back into her dark brown, almost black,beautiful,almond shaped eyes.

"Pocahontas," the chief spoke.

She dropped her hands and looked towards her father.
"It is him." he said warmly.

"John?" she said her voice cracking.

"Pocahontas," i said barely above a whisper.

She put her hand on my face again i cupped her cheek with one hand, and pulled her close with the other.Our lips met and she kissed me with a strong passion. We broke away and tears poured from her eyes.

"Hey, none of that now," i whispered kissing each tear.

"John i thought you were dead!" she said tears continuing to stream down her face.

"We were all upset when we heard news that you had been killed." Powhatan said. " But no one more than my daughter." and in a big voice he said. "But now, the one who saved my life and nearly lost his has returned! Tonight we feast in his honor!"

Everyone cheered loudly.

During the feast I noticed Thomas looking at Nakoma quite often. And sometimes she would notice and look back at him and he would then awkwardly look away or pretend to be looking at something else.

.....Afterwards.....

"Come with me" Pocahontas said grabbing my hand.

We walked in silence through the woods until, she took of running.

"Pocahontas?" i shouted. She laughed loudly.

"Come on John!" she shouted running back and tugging my hand.

"Pocahontas i can't run with my wound you know," i said pointing to my side. She looked at my side and her face fell.

"You still have that?" she asked and before she knew it i had taken off running. "John!" she shouted. I laughed. A moment later i saw her rush past me, i had forgotten she was almost twice as fast as me. She stopped and waited for me up ahead. Once i had reached her,she sat down and i joined. The sky had almost gone completely black and the stars blazed brightly. We talked,about everything that happened when we were apart. We were lying on our backs now staring at the stars.

"I think Meeko misses your food" she giggled.

"Well of course the rascal does" i said with a chuckle. "....Pocahontas?"

"Yes, John" she said looking into my eyes, I didnt want to look away.

"I love you," i said in a low whisper.

She leaned forward and our lips connected, i relished at how soft her lips were, she pulled away and said softly, "I love you more, John Smith," and with that she settled on my chest and fell asleep. I smiled and i fell asleep with my sleeping angel tucked safely in my arms knowing we had ourselves a new beggining and of course our happy ending.

Well that was longer than i expected it to be xD oh well this couple deserves it!! but yeah as you can see im not the best writer i tend to get an F on every essay/paper i turn in but i still manage a B in english xD

anyways.....COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pocahontas is (c) Disney
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Comments: 9

gibbs615 [2015-05-20 20:21:58 +0000 UTC]

Well done Now this is how Pocahontas 2 should have went down What concerns me is that one part when Smith found out that Rolfe had fell in love with her. I'm surprised Smith didn't act all pissed about it However Rolfe was acting more understanding about her choices and what she had to do Anyway,still this is a good alternate story of how it should have happened 

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SacredBlueWolf [2012-07-06 05:53:58 +0000 UTC]

I have read this somewhere before, not quite sure where, I love it though

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Kiuesque [2011-09-29 13:33:32 +0000 UTC]

They deserve their happily ever after. More than any Disney couple I think

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PrincessOfCorona [2011-09-13 07:00:45 +0000 UTC]

owwww... I love it. I love it so much both the story & the art.
Besides thanks for commenting on my pocahontas art. I'm very happy that you're doing an art for it.

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Your-Evil-Lil-Minion In reply to PrincessOfCorona [2011-09-20 03:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow thank you!!
and your welcome im excited too thanks for letting me make one

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MightyMorphinPower4 [2011-07-07 22:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Beabiful and adorebaler work here

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Your-Evil-Lil-Minion In reply to MightyMorphinPower4 [2011-07-08 03:51:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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chericherry [2011-06-07 22:54:35 +0000 UTC]

I mightily enjoyed reading this!

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Your-Evil-Lil-Minion In reply to chericherry [2011-06-07 23:36:34 +0000 UTC]

Good then i did my job!! Im really glad you liked it!!!

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