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Yudhaikeledai — Flippy Concept
Published: 2011-05-24 15:59:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 3414; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 121
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Ahem... Seriously, I don't know what to say about this... This is supposed to be Flippy in my cartoon-anthro style. Ain't perfect I know, but this is better than those stupid sketches that I did like... dozens of times
And I just can't draw a bloody M-16 rifle without looking at the source (I try to not look at M-16 pictures, and the result is: epic fail)I always wanted to try to draw Flippy in my style, and finally I'm able to do it even though it is still as crappy as ever
Oh, by the way I actually planned to add a cigarette on him but its certainly not child friendly so I leave it 
Oh well, so here it is, a crappy rendition of Flippy trying to look cool but instead looks like an idiot... Need feedback please
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Comments: 16
It's not bad. Needs some improvment, but not bad.
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the hands are a bit too small (or the head is too big?) and the right arm looks weird...... but overall nice work
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Oh, the head was meant to be on that size. But the hand... I fail at drawing arm and hands... I FAIL!!! Must need more practice I'd say...
But thank you so much for your critique! I'll be sure to note that
Teach me on how to draw limbs please
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teach you? umm.... sure. but HOW?
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Any good techniques to draw hands? Such as size, length, or those kind of stuff? Just writing please (on the comment panel). Kalo agak susah ngejelasin dalam bahasa Inggris, pake bahasa Indonesia juga nggak apa-apa
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well I... uhh... I dunno how to explain the techniques
Give me some time, maybe I'll find out the techniques.
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Oh, Okay then! Still, I have to thank you for wanting to help me! Thank you banget
Just take your time
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Hmm.. the handle is a bit too far forward on the gun, but other then that, you did an excellent job with it. I like your expansion into shading.
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Whew... good thing that you dropped the cigarette idea...
Anyway, overall design and colors are fine. But, the rifle seems to be kinda... plain. I mean, a little bit more details and it should appear nicer.
You seem to getting better with the folding parts.
Misc. question: (pretty stupid in my POV)
Btw, for this pic (only), I noticed that some parts are not colored. Did you forgot to color it?
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Hehehehe, good thing, those stuff are not healthy and are certainly not recommended for people
Oh, you mean the white thing on Flippy that looks like uncoloured? It was meant to be his under-shirt which is white so that is intentional. The one on the Rifle on the other hand, is me overlooking the details
Thanks for noting that out! Will improve on it
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Yep, reminding me of the old Tom & Jerry, where some scenes are cut out in recent airings due to having cigars...
Well, I often look at something so closely to see something... uh... well for those that didn't actually notice it. That's why I said that was a stupid question...
Anyway, hope you'll improve! ^^
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