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Destorious [2017-10-07 20:14:03 +0000 UTC]
gahh so kawai
~SPOILERS BELOW~
To bad he died cri.
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yui-churro In reply to Destorious [2017-10-08 06:52:25 +0000 UTC]
ahh i know !! he was one of my favourites too
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MrEloda27 [2017-10-07 11:01:30 +0000 UTC]
Your art style makes me think of that anime (and video game) with college students trapped in their school.
Not in a bad way of course, it's not bad.
The anatomy is pretty good (Even if it can be better on some points like the left leg on the first drawing where it is thinner than the other and the lower half of the chest which is a bit to big at my taste, usually for men the upper part of the chest is bigger than the lower one)
The colours are good and go well together, i really like the little pink spots on the articulations, it's really cute i think.
But i think proper shady really lack on that drawing, maybe a background more complex would make this less lacking like in the persona 4 illustrations.
And the lining is a bit sloppy but this will get better by itself with time i think.
But hey, this is just my thoughts, feel free to follow my advises or not, you have your own way to think what pretty is after all.
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yui-churro In reply to MrEloda27 [2017-10-07 11:07:38 +0000 UTC]
hahah thank you! and he is from that game ^^ these are just rough drawings though;;;;
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yui-churro In reply to MrEloda27 [2017-10-07 11:13:51 +0000 UTC]
yeh,, but thank you again nobody ever gives me critique ;; im grateful ^^
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MrEloda27 In reply to yui-churro [2017-10-08 09:19:27 +0000 UTC]
Well thank you you, nobody takes my critiques without saying how much of a horrible person i am and doubting of my capacity to think.
Some peoples are funny when they get treegered because someone haven't a positive thought on their drawings.
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