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deathsheir [2014-01-18 04:43:41 +0000 UTC]
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I have to say that this certainly is an interesting piece. It really hit me seeing Derpy, or Ditzy which ever name you call her by, about ready to cry. How could you do such a thing Twilight? Anyway, it hits me hard, looking at this, almost like it could be an actual scene in the show, and that's nice.
This is my first time seeing this kind of style, and I have to say, it's visually pleasing. Though if anything, I would say Derpy's (Ditzy's) mane is a little too bright, and distracting for me. My eyes keeps wanting to focus on her forelocks more than any other part of the image. It's a little unsettling for me.
The style itself is completely new to me, and actually works quite nicely. The scene, as I mentioned earlier, does feel like it would fit in an episode of "My Little Pony" some where, though where that is exactly I'm not sure.
I deducted points in originality for two reasons, and then gave a point back for another reason. The first reason for deducting points is common for me, and that is the fact it is based off an already existing piece of work. Serious question; if "My Little Pony Friendship is Magic" didn't exist, would you have still drawn this? The second reason, is the canon characters. Even though for a scene like this I can not picture any other ponies involved, it still doesn't change the fact that I see the canon characters everywhere. However, the reason I gave points back, is because of the scene being non-existent in the show, or else where that I have seen.
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ManithMagesinger [2013-10-29 17:14:36 +0000 UTC]
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Aw poor Derpy, I love imagining the conversation in these types of pictures, I pictured Derpy just about to take a bite out of the muffin, when suddenly, a bolt of magical energy makes contract with the muffins and turnes it into an orange, Derpy then frowns to in which a very embarrassed Twilight approaches her and apologises, begging her not to cry, I wouldn't be able to live with myself if I made Derpy even the slightest bit sad, that face is just so heartwrenching. Love the coloring a lot as well, very pleasing to the eye, and blends very welI with the bright tones and the finish of the shadows is spectacular. But the most eye catching thing of coarse is the orange which is good because it is the subject of this piece, overall very balanced and appealing piece, with loads of personality, very well done.
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SapphireShine42 [2013-10-06 05:08:17 +0000 UTC]
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This is wonderful! I thought it was a muffin with too much batter in it at first, but then I realized it was an orange. The manes are so detailed, the background is as well. I love it! I love the shading and the shadow, ooh, I only dream to draw with your wonderful skill! The texture, everything about this drawing is top-notch. The vision is absolutely clear, the idea is very creative, your technique was obviously great due to the way the final drawing turned out. Now's the impact. I was talking about the orange, which is great in texture, and color, but it's a bit too big to be an orange. I'd never wish this wasn't ever drawn!
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Yulyeen In reply to skytheloxables [2013-05-06 09:02:17 +0000 UTC]
I mostly do commission but sometimes I do requests for simple drawings. I only do it when I want it. But you can ask me commission at any time! ^^
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skytheloxables In reply to Yulyeen [2013-05-06 22:09:19 +0000 UTC]
Okay... Can you draw my character Rainbow Sparkles [link]
Fighting Chrysillis with Celestia
Ps. Sparkles is an alicorn with brown mane and tail with rainbow tips
and her hair style is kinda like a pony tail but with parts going behind her ears
like put your hair in a fake pony tail and take parts from the side and put them behind ur ears
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Barefoot-Panda In reply to darklordAWSOMEDUDE [2012-11-29 10:39:54 +0000 UTC]
This is in reference to the bit from the episode Too Many Pinkies where Twilight was trying to use a spell to turn an apple into an orange but Pinkie kept ruining her aim and the spell was bouncing all over the place and hitting random things. This was no comment on Derpy's intelligence but, instead, meant to convey that Derpy would be sad if her muffin was randomly turned into an orange.
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Mahzum In reply to Ashley-Mae-Phillips [2012-11-26 22:34:28 +0000 UTC]
(spoiler?)
As for the muffin design, it plays to Twilights experiments in turning apples (and accidentally other objects) into oranges.
The apologetic look from Twilight relates to Derpy's love for muffins, and she now has an orange instead.
..... I'm guessing this is the story behind this.
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cronosdage In reply to Ashley-Mae-Phillips [2012-11-26 20:46:47 +0000 UTC]
I don't know if you can edit your critique much, but in the sentence "The color style seems like a clash or realism and cartoon animation," the word "or" should be "of."
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Ashley-Mae-Phillips In reply to cronosdage [2012-11-27 00:05:03 +0000 UTC]
I can't edit the critique at all. I apologize for the error in grammar.
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QuickAGiantRabbit In reply to Ashley-Mae-Phillips [2012-11-26 16:21:28 +0000 UTC]
Have you seen Season 3 Episode 3? It feeds off that.
Also, I too think it is beatuful.
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strongbad-joe132 [2019-09-19 21:31:52 +0000 UTC]
It's okay, Derpy. Just pretend it's a muffin.
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RednessShadow [2017-04-30 15:02:17 +0000 UTC]
what do you use to make your drawings?
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Velocityraptor28 [2017-03-02 09:12:31 +0000 UTC]
Orange you glad it's not a lemon?
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DraginKYle44 [2016-03-30 01:26:36 +0000 UTC]
CUTEΒ
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Aaron235 [2015-06-22 00:36:13 +0000 UTC]
Just look at that nose scrunch! ^^
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Sugar-Dazzle [2015-04-20 13:52:28 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, congratulations for being so brave xD 7 HOURS DAMN !
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TransformersG1fan [2015-01-15 23:32:53 +0000 UTC]
Twilight just didn't know went wrong
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TheKyuubitoid [2015-01-02 02:35:16 +0000 UTC]
An orange? This is pathetic.
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ShyModd [2014-12-22 05:01:07 +0000 UTC]
at least twilie tried!!
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DashBlitzLove [2014-12-05 03:59:10 +0000 UTC]
poor derpy
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datmontague [2014-10-07 01:33:40 +0000 UTC]
ahhh
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CrazyGraeHawkatoo [2014-08-15 04:48:38 +0000 UTC]
I saw this on a friend's page as her ID.
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Wollica [2014-07-18 18:00:51 +0000 UTC]
Bad ... BAD TWI
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deli73123 [2014-06-09 00:17:54 +0000 UTC]
And then Twilight looks away for two seconds and it's a muffin again.
An orange-flavored muffin.
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InvertedSlime [2014-04-23 23:41:19 +0000 UTC]
Poor derpy, ever gets her muffins. D:
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Yonderness [2014-04-21 00:22:51 +0000 UTC]
(I am even slower than you are, with FAR less pleasing results.)
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