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!!! If you find a mistakes, please let me know!!!
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Those holographic interfaces look great, though I have an issue with the ship. It doesn't look Mass Effecty in my opinion. It resembles a human XX century shuttle too much.
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when you go behind enemy lines, your ship must be reliable like... a human shuttle
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Hey, that's a great quarian comic! Like it very much ^^
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I love the shading in the page and holographic pulpits from the first picture^^
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Thank you! I was drawing the first picture all day x_x
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On a second note, this really looks like a legit Mass Effect Comic. You must have experience with making comics or something.
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Where? I don't understand!
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I mean you're doing a great job!
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Oh wow, this keeps getting better and better. Love the art.
In the first speech bubble I suggest saying "We're landing soon."
It sounds better than just saying "Landing soon."
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Thank you for the help! I'll replace it
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"You may to speak, Bal." - Doesn't make any sense. I think what meant to say was: "You may speak, Bal."
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Thank you very much for the help
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This was really good, but since you said you wanted us to tell you about mistakes,
When you say "Speak Lt. Bal'Reebot" it should be "Lt. Bal'Reebot speaking".
"Gather in the room meetings" should be "Gather in the meeting room".
and
the word you wrote as "Capitan" is spelt "Captain".
But this was a great comic
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Thank you very much for the help, my friend!!!
I fixed it
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