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Z3phyra In reply to Knowledgeseeker01 [2013-07-22 02:55:11 +0000 UTC]

haha, sorry for taking so long to get it to you.

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Knowledgeseeker01 In reply to Animeliebe [2013-07-22 02:21:15 +0000 UTC]

In my story, Asuna is known as Akio and Kirito is known as Kirita.  You will see a few other genderbent characters as well, such as Lisbeth to Leonardo and Sachi to Heihachi.  However, there will be other characters who remain the same gender, such as Klein, Suguha, and Kayaba.

Be sure to check it out when you have a chance. 

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Z3phyra In reply to Animeliebe [2013-07-21 20:38:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks took me quite abit of sketching to get that result

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Z3phyra In reply to Omnimon1996 [2013-07-21 20:38:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you >.<

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Omnimon1996 In reply to Z3phyra [2013-07-21 23:59:25 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Knowledgeseeker01 In reply to Omnimon1996 [2013-10-07 04:18:17 +0000 UTC]

The fanfiction story this cover was made for is currently up to five chapters.  Would you be interested in reading and sharing your thoughts?

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Cyberweasel89 In reply to Knowledgeseeker01 [2017-04-19 03:59:12 +0000 UTC]

I actually would! I just found out about this from, full disclosure incoming, the "D-Cup Distress" article of TV Tropes. I plan to read this hopefully tomorrow or so and I'll review every chapter with a play-by-play of my thoughts! Promise!

Or, if you'd prefer a more private thought-sharing, I can arrange for something like in Notes or PMs, maybe even Skype or Discord if you'd prefer my reactions in IM format as I'm having them.   

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Knowledgeseeker01 In reply to Cyberweasel89 [2017-04-19 10:54:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you'll be pleased that the story is now 23 chapters long, and Chapter 24 is a work in progress.

Getting reviews for the chapters would be ideal.  I like the idea of getting 23 chapters.  Anyway, I'm sure you'll notice that my writing improves a fair amount of the years of writing this story or at least I hope it did.  One thing people got mixed feelings on was the first person narration which appears more in the first bunch of chapters than in later ones.  Additionally, I did some narration that gives ideas of future events that I definitely avoid doing in later chapters.

I would be happy to get your reactions to certain things as well.  That'd be fine with me too, and it might be fun reading them.

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Cyberweasel89 In reply to Knowledgeseeker01 [2017-04-19 18:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Sure! Look forward to 23 reviews!

And yeah, I imagine you got better and ideas changed. That happens with long-term stories.

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Knowledgeseeker01 In reply to Cyberweasel89 [2017-04-21 21:13:46 +0000 UTC]

I hope they'll be good reviews, but I definitely want you to be honest.  Anyway, I definitely know I get better as time goes on.

Certain ideas have remained consistent while others have been changed.  It is good to have an overall plan or general plan while allowing for some alterations.

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Cyberweasel89 In reply to Knowledgeseeker01 [2017-05-25 21:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I haven't reviewed chapter 2 yet. Been a lot of things going on. >_<

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Knowledgeseeker01 In reply to Cyberweasel89 [2017-05-25 22:02:28 +0000 UTC]

That's okay.  As long as you can get to it eventually, that will be fine.

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Cyberweasel89 In reply to Knowledgeseeker01 [2017-05-25 23:00:39 +0000 UTC]

I will. I've had chapter 2 tabbed ever since in fact, just so I don't forget. >_<

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