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Description Ayule's life has been filled with moments of intense emotion, but this was one of the most significant: burning the quarry/concentration camp he spent most of his young life at.

His family had been part of the group of rebel vortians who fought back against the Irken Empire's all-controlling grasp. When he was a year old, his family was captured and imprisoned in a concentration camp. His dad died during the initial conflict, leaving Ayule with only his rebel face tattoos, his mother, older brother, and a tattered green scarf. Until he was about 15, Ayule worked in the concentration camp, doing menial labor in mines and quarries that easily could have been done by machines, but the Irken Empire wanted the prisoners to struggle with redundant tasks as punishment for rebelling.

When Ayule was 14, his mother was having serious health conditions and was unable to keep up with most of her labor tasks. Ayule tried to pitch in and help her with them, to avoid the savagely critical eye of the prison guards, but eventually it wasn't enough--returning home from a day of work, he learned his mother had been seen as unfit to keep, and she was taken where all sick, injured, or elderly prisoners were taken: the furnace.

Grief made the anger in him, that had been smoldering all his life at his situation, finally spill over. He got more violent and angry at everything. When he learned his fellow prisoners were planning an escape, he was in on it without hesitation, ignoring the fearful, cautionary advice of his brother, who refused to attempt to escape, seeing it as an instant death warrant. At age 15, Ayule participated in a revolt and escaped from the camp with a group of other prisoners, out into the surrounding forest...in itself a prison, as it was massive, cold, and unforgiving. But the escape leader had contacts on the outside--A path to follow for safety. The escape through the forest was hellacious; the irken guards didn't hesitate to launch heavy fire into the trees after the fleeing prisoners, and the majority of those escaping did not make it--and there was plenty of skeletal evidence still laying, half-buried, in the surrounding forest to show that previous escapes had not worked, either.

By a stroke of luck, Ayule made it out of the woods with a few other prisoners and the revolt leader, a couple of days later. A boat was waiting at the edge of a massive ocean: Ayule thought he was now going to be free, start a new life...but freedom came with a price. The boat captain and crew informed him that he and his other prisoner escapees would have to work as indentured servants for a while, as payment for their freedom. Ayule was furious that the revolt leader had not informed him or the others about this cost, but he was stuck with the choice.

Ayule ended up stuck under the thumb of multiple employers for the next couple of years, doing whatever he was told, transported to different places, with himself and others around him struggling with the vicious temper he had that never died down, no matter how often it was punished. Eventually though, his freedom was won; meaning, he finally lost his temper and killed a ruthless employer, stealing a ship and flying off to a lawless planet to lay low for a while, quite done with being a slave to anyone.Β 

During his stay on a lawless planet (Think Tortuga, from Pirates of the Caribbean), he quickly learned the art of theft and skulduggery, and got very good at it. Networking, bribes, and threats ended up landing him a reputation on the streets; then, gradually, partnerships...then a couple of employees. Then his own ship, then a crew, and things grew from there.

At age 25, he had grown himself a pretty successful, if dark, lifestyle. And he still had something left to do.

One day, once he was very well-prepared and had enough manpower, he headed back to the concentration camp that he'd spent most of his life in...murdering as many prison guards as he could, releasing as many vortian prisoners as he could (Which wasn't very many, since their general population had dramatically decreased over the last decade) then setting the whole place on fire, with as many irkens as possible still left in it.

And there he left it, burning and smoldering, finally vindicated.

WOW SORRY FOR THAT TEXT WALL THERE LOL The story just kept coming out :'DD Gives some insight as to why he has such a terrible disposition, though!

Ayule (c)
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Comments: 42

SarrachFieldMedic [2019-11-19 12:35:46 +0000 UTC]

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SarrachFieldMedic [2019-11-19 12:33:22 +0000 UTC]

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Zerna In reply to SarrachFieldMedic [2019-11-19 17:38:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! <3

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SarrachFieldMedic In reply to Zerna [2019-11-19 17:41:40 +0000 UTC]

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Zerna In reply to SarrachFieldMedic [2019-11-20 14:35:50 +0000 UTC]

more on the way !Β 

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Furious-Frog [2018-08-30 20:28:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww poor little vort , he had it so rough but at least he saved the vortians who still remained...Β 
I'd hug him but he'd prolly bite mAh face xD

This is a very beautiful picture definitely see the emotion in this one. The colors just bring it all out dramatically.
Fire is my least favorite element, but he found it very handy in this situation, eh?

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Zerna In reply to Furious-Frog [2018-08-31 17:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah he had a rough little life indeed

Thank you though! Much appreciated

And yes lol he finds Fire to be handy in ...quite a lot of situations.

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Lena9016 [2018-08-30 06:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Payback is the best.

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MissSillyAngel [2018-08-29 22:17:59 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!! <33

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Zerna In reply to MissSillyAngel [2018-08-30 02:08:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks! I've got a bunch more full-colored art in the works ,wheee.

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MissSillyAngel In reply to Zerna [2018-08-30 02:11:16 +0000 UTC]

OHHHH!! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THEM!!

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Zerna In reply to MissSillyAngel [2018-08-30 04:22:37 +0000 UTC]

aww well thank you :"DΒ 

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THE13THARROW [2018-08-29 22:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Great story and illustration and I now have a better understanding of why Ayule is the way he is.

When so much has happened to someone, there's no choice but to either fight or move on.

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Zerna In reply to THE13THARROW [2018-08-30 04:31:02 +0000 UTC]

yeah he's got some sad history as to why he is the way he is.

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THE13THARROW In reply to Zerna [2018-08-30 04:56:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, most do have a sad history and that is what a majority of my characters have.

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AngelineWolfHedgehog [2018-08-29 21:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Wait, what happened to his brother after refusing to attempt to escape?

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Zerna In reply to AngelineWolfHedgehog [2018-08-30 02:06:57 +0000 UTC]

He stayed behind at the camp--and Ayule never saw him again, even when he went back to the place. He doesn't know if his brother escaped or was killed, and doesn't really care anymore.

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AngelineWolfHedgehog In reply to Zerna [2018-09-03 21:54:22 +0000 UTC]

...Oh. That's saddening, seeing that his brother was maybe trying to be kind to Ayule and could have done this out of caring for his little brother. It's a shame though.Β 

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Zerna In reply to AngelineWolfHedgehog [2018-09-04 13:48:31 +0000 UTC]

it is a shame---Maybe Ayule will run into him again, some day

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AngelineWolfHedgehog In reply to Zerna [2018-09-10 19:20:17 +0000 UTC]

I hope so. And I hope the meeting will go well and they would recognize each other. I have these chills that if they were to meet, something wrong would happen. Also, I wonder, how Ayule's brother has changed over the years.

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Zerna In reply to AngelineWolfHedgehog [2018-09-12 03:01:56 +0000 UTC]

I might go into drawing that, some day >w>

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Fistron [2018-08-29 19:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Sad, but good story.

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Zerna In reply to Fistron [2018-08-30 02:07:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Fistron In reply to Zerna [2018-08-30 04:51:14 +0000 UTC]

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CrypticCodex [2018-08-29 16:17:13 +0000 UTC]

I AM SO GLAD TO HAVE THIS BACKSTORY FOR AYULE! Someone hug this man, please and thank you! Life has really punched him in the gut and kicked him around, hasn't it?

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Zerna In reply to CrypticCodex [2018-08-30 13:45:52 +0000 UTC]

yeah he's had a pretty bad life all around, overall :"D Made him into the vengeful little thing he is today.

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CrypticCodex In reply to Zerna [2018-08-30 15:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I can't say I blame him tbh. Stuff like that makes it pretty hard not to get vengeful through, you know?

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Zerna In reply to CrypticCodex [2018-08-30 22:26:59 +0000 UTC]

It sure does

Just means he needs a cinnamon roll to show him how nice things can be >w>

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traycon300 [2018-08-29 13:37:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow. I...I actually feel for Ayule. Poor guy, having gone through all that. No wonder he's, well...a complete jerk.Β 

I'd hug him, but I'm afraid he'd punch me or something...XD;

-t3

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Zerna In reply to traycon300 [2018-08-30 04:33:43 +0000 UTC]

yeah he did not have a happy life >w>

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Honey-Bunn-Boi [2018-08-29 12:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Your work is so breathtaking omg

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Zerna In reply to Honey-Bunn-Boi [2018-08-30 04:31:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Honey-Bunn-Boi In reply to Zerna [2018-08-30 04:44:53 +0000 UTC]

You’re welcome!

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CancerousVillain [2018-08-29 10:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Finally some good fucking food (eaTS THIS POST)

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Zerna In reply to CancerousVillain [2018-08-30 04:31:49 +0000 UTC]

XDD amazing

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Colorfulmoongato [2018-08-29 06:43:00 +0000 UTC]

I remember seeing you work on this I think or just flip through it in a stream. Still looks amazing, and I do like a good revenge story.
Pretty neat coincidence, I was listening to Black Sabbath's Iron man when this popped in my inbox.
It fit Ayule pretty well, I mean just read the lyrics or hear the song with the twisted guitar going


I am iron man


Has he lost his mind?
Can he see or is he blind?
Can he walk at all
Or if he moves will he fall?


Is he alive or dead?
Has he thoughts within his head?
We'll just pass him there
Why should we even care?


He was turned to steel
In the great magnetic field
Where he traveled timeΒ 
For the future of mankind


Nobody wants him
He just stares at the world
Planning his vengeance
That he will soon unfold

Now the time is hereΒ 

For iron man to spread fear
Vengeance from the grave
Kills the people he once saved

Nobody wants him

They just turn their heads
Nobody helps him
Now he has his revenge

Heavy boots of lead

Fills his victims full of dread
Running as fast as they can
Iron man lives again

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Zerna In reply to Colorfulmoongato [2018-09-01 16:43:44 +0000 UTC]

oh man those ARE fitting lyris wow hahaha. Great coincidenceΒ 

and I am impressed you remember this from a livestream! This was worked on QUITE a long time ago >w>

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Colorfulmoongato In reply to Zerna [2018-09-02 03:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeup yup yup,nIt's a classic Ayule image one doesn't forget.

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Darkling-Ryn [2018-08-29 06:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow - Gorgeous work!! I love the cinematic feel. The detail of the fire is first rate too.. and that is a great wall of text lmao. Very detailed story about Ayule! Really compliments the cinematic look of the drawing, not to mention the dark forestry in the background. Love your Vortian style by the way!Β .Β 

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Zerna In reply to Darkling-Ryn [2018-08-31 04:46:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you! Glad someone liked the text wall, at least XD

much appreciated! Vortians are fun to drawΒ 

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Darkling-Ryn In reply to Zerna [2018-08-31 04:48:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I think it compliments the work - something like this definitely needs a story to go with it!

Absolutely! Vortians rule

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Zerna In reply to Darkling-Ryn [2018-08-31 16:58:50 +0000 UTC]

Much appreciated!

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