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ZeroSkyler — What Remains
Published: 2013-10-22 13:44:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 623; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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Description Staring through the polished glass
   Pressed against a plastered wall
  Listening to quiet taps
   On the roof where raindrops fall

   Cold remains of broken dreams
 Lost within a concrete sea
   Clench the fists that caused the cracks
But it's the glass that shatters me
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Comments: 9

Matt-Hahnes-ARO [2013-11-11 02:51:19 +0000 UTC]

absolutely amazingly beautiful. i love it!

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ZeroSkyler In reply to Matt-Hahnes-ARO [2013-11-11 16:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou for your support

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Projekt-Zodiac [2013-11-08 04:54:33 +0000 UTC]

wow... this goes very deep. Good work. 

Very emotional, not happy emotions, of course.

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ZeroSkyler In reply to Projekt-Zodiac [2013-11-11 16:39:18 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou for your support

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Projekt-Zodiac In reply to ZeroSkyler [2013-11-11 19:31:41 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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ghostcrab311 [2013-11-02 21:03:54 +0000 UTC]

wow - i really liked this. you really captured that trapped feeling of things just not working out in any good way. well written!

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ZeroSkyler In reply to ghostcrab311 [2013-11-03 05:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou for the compliment stay tuned for more

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ToXiC-Science [2013-10-22 14:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work!



...but i think youve got a grammar mistake in Vers2 Line2 (Sorry for beeing a grammar nazi xD)

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ZeroSkyler In reply to ToXiC-Science [2013-10-22 14:33:30 +0000 UTC]

fixed*

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