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UniKelpieOwl [2017-09-28 16:32:28 +0000 UTC]
What a sweet idea!
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SaphireDragon16 [2016-07-25 11:27:10 +0000 UTC]
The idea of cute little dragons being attracted to flowers is a much more pleasant thought than mean bee dragons being drawn in by the flora, so just be careful when you're holding out flowers. Although I'm happy that you were somehow inspired by that piece and thank you for the mention.
Yay, you finished it, I was looking forward to how you would create a draconic dragonfly and you're right; he is very cute and sweet looking.
You seem to have put a lot of thought into the composition and lighting in this piece, I particularly like the flames at the end of the tail and the lighting that you have along the dragon's tail looks amazingly done, and accurate, and with that dark shadowing in contrast to the fire-light I think it adds some nice depth to that area. I also like how you have similar colouring again on the head area too, with more well placed lighting and shadowing.
The wings are nicely done with good resemblance to dragonfly wings, I like how with the use of dark red fading to orange and bright and pale yellow you have given the wings a glow to them, with that thought in mind I imagine gatherings of these dragons during a night scene would be like seeing lots of vibrant fireflies...hmm...firefly dragon might be cool...going off track oops. xD
I think the background is very suiting for this scene, and the dark blue makes a great contrast to make the dragon stand out, I also love how you have added in black and uneven layers to the background making it more interesting. I think the flowers look lovely with a nice variety of purple hues with some pink, for improvement I think so fiery hues on the petals would help add more realism to the piece, and would also add some more colour to the flowers. Also some darker shading just beneath the dragon on the centre of the flower might look nice too and add more depth.
Besides those few things to the flowers the only area that I can critique is the anatomy of the dragonfly, although I like the design I think the dragon's head is a little large for the body, and although the shape of the head does help with the cute look I feel like it might looked nicer if it were a bit more slender, other than that I would mention the feet, but feet are always a pain to draw so I won't so much about them. xD
Just my opinion. Overall I think you have a interesting dragon design with very well thought through lighting and shading on this piece, I do love firelight reflecting across the body, great work!
~critique by Inspiring Creation group
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ZiskaJa In reply to SaphireDragon16 [2016-07-25 14:50:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your feedback!
You are absolutely right about the claws. I eventually just got annoyed by them and hoped, that they wouldn't be the center of attention.
Designing the head was the most difficult part for me. I barely ever do any such thing on my own, so you are probably right, that it should be slimmer. I made it so large on purpose, hoping it would make it seem more like an insect, since they have really large heads.
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ZiskaJa In reply to SaphireDragon16 [2016-07-26 05:40:36 +0000 UTC]
They really are a pain... The only reason there is a second flower there is because I got so annoyed with the second pair of legs and decided to draw something that would cover up the place where they would have to be. Didn't quite work out...
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Emerald-Thrakena [2016-07-24 22:09:02 +0000 UTC]
Hi Fran, this is so very cute! and a wonderfully unique and creative piece done from Saphire's drawing.
I like the way you have textured the flowers and the colors you have used for them. the upward curl of the large flower draws the viewers eye right up to the dragon fly. Great lead in to the painting from the left that holds the viewer attention on the main subject.
The dragon fly reminds me of a very tiny fairy dragon. The colors you have used for it are very eye catching and complimentary with the use of warm colors against cool colors. They give it a great fantasy atmosphere.
The details in the wings are so very good.
Love the shape of the head and the eye gives it great personality.
The only thing that I can see is I think the background being so dark against the dragon fly makes the sky look like it is right up against the dragon fly. There does not seem to be a distinction between the horizon line and the sky around the tail of the dragon fly . (Only a composition comment) That may have been very intentional on your part though.
I think you have done a very creative and very well done water color painting that captures the imagination of any one who loves fantasy art.
Critique by Inspiring Creation.
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ZiskaJa In reply to Emerald-Thrakena [2016-07-25 05:48:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for taking the time to critique me.
Thank you for your feedback on the sky. Can you explain to me, how you think I could have archieved to push the sky further into the background, while still using dark colours? The dark colours are the only thing that are intentional about the background, the rest came as it went.
I imagine the dragon to be fairy size also.
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ZiskaJa In reply to Emerald-Thrakena [2016-07-25 14:46:01 +0000 UTC]
I don't think you were wrong at all about your critique. I just looked at a few photos, and even at night the horizon is brighter than the rest, on most of the photos.
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Emerald-Thrakena In reply to ZiskaJa [2016-07-25 16:42:02 +0000 UTC]
I didn't go and look at photos which I probably should have done. But I learned a valuable lesson here. To take into consideration other things than just the first impression before making a critique. Do a little homework and research first. lol
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ZiskaJa In reply to Emerald-Thrakena [2016-07-26 05:38:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for looking these things up for me! I had no idea about that. I will try to pay more attention to that in the future, because I am very fond of dark backgrounds.
I do think, that if we need to start researching every time before we write a critique, it makes this work far to stressful. So it's absolutely ok, if you just go whith your gutfeeling. More often than not, your gutfeeling will turn out to be right (as it did) eventhough you may not have known exactly why.
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ArcticIceWolf [2016-07-24 20:15:43 +0000 UTC]
ich find den süß!
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diosrubra [2016-07-24 18:10:47 +0000 UTC]
lol i was going to do something similar lol more inspired by a photo of a dragonfly i had though beautifully done maybe put a bit more texture on the centre of the flowers though great detailing on the wing and flame like tail and the back seems to go missing in one segment. beautiful colours look forward to more
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ZiskaJa In reply to diosrubra [2016-07-24 18:38:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your advice! I think you are absolutely right about the flower. I added some texture on the flower with blue and red inkroller, and also added some details on the wings.
The segment without yellow or red colour is on purpose, since I thought, that in its position it would neither be touched by the light of the flames on the head nor the tail.
I'm really looking forward to your version of a dragon fly.
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