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wild4matt [2009-01-18 09:00:21 +0000 UTC]
It's not too bad, but it wasn't the Eurythemics that sang that song...it was Rick Springfield. I'm a child of the '80s, what can I say? LOL! Plus, if Kakashi really had amnesia, I think they would have sent someone with him to keep him from getting lost and such. Just a thought...
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zoenian33 In reply to wild4matt [2009-01-18 17:07:10 +0000 UTC]
ya but u no tsunade. she expect ppl 2 b able to get around if she gives them the right instructionz.by the way, i really thought that it was the eurythemics cuz my frendz mom was playing one of their cd's in the car on the way 2 the beach last summer.
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Greed-kun [2009-01-17 23:31:39 +0000 UTC]
lol, I like it except for the OC, I don't like Filler Characters unless she's absolutely crucial to the plot
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zoenian33 In reply to Greed-kun [2009-01-18 00:25:51 +0000 UTC]
oh, don't worry, ill figure out some way to make it happen.wat do u think of a short serie bout tobi and the other characer?
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Greed-kun In reply to zoenian33 [2009-01-18 02:46:45 +0000 UTC]
I didn't read that one yet
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zoenian33 In reply to Greed-kun [2009-01-18 03:01:56 +0000 UTC]
i no. i havn,t finisged WRITING it yet. i was asking if you liked the IDEA.
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Greed-kun In reply to zoenian33 [2009-01-18 03:04:02 +0000 UTC]
^_^U oh, sure why not? Not really into fanfiction, I like fanart more, in case you haven't seen my gallery
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zoenian33 In reply to Greed-kun [2009-01-18 03:12:11 +0000 UTC]
Gd cuz i'm almost done and 4 a change of pace i have it all planned out that tobi beats the living shit out of deidara cuz deidara deserves it 4 wat he did.
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Greed-kun In reply to zoenian33 [2009-01-18 17:49:37 +0000 UTC]
What did Deidara do? (other then kill Gaara and Manda, and try to kill Naruto and Guy and Neji and Lee and Tenten and Kakashi and Sasuke)
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zoenian33 In reply to Greed-kun [2009-01-18 17:56:54 +0000 UTC]
HE messed with tobi's emotions in my fanfiction, and he's always trying to kill my tobi.THATS WAT U GET WHEN YOU MESS WITH MY TOBI!!!YOU GET ASSUALTED IN A FANFICTION!!! AND WHEN THAT HAPPENS NOT EVEN MASASHI KISHIMOTO CAN SAVE U!!!
I have spoken.
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Greed-kun In reply to zoenian33 [2009-01-18 18:01:11 +0000 UTC]
o_O ok, ok, but keep to Deidara's personality, don't have him cower in a corner scared shitless of Tobi. Keep him his real overconfident self, I've read lots of fanfiction where Tobi, decides to kick Deidara's ass with supreme Uchiha power and Deidara is a scared little girl, remember he's the guy that lost both arms and still took on 7 Konoha shinobi
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zoenian33 In reply to Greed-kun [2009-01-18 18:09:35 +0000 UTC]
well atually i WAS going to basically have him scared shit-less in a corner.0_O isn't it weird that i was about to do exactly wat u told me not 2 do? but anyways, i'm REALLY REALLY srry but i just don't think its fair that tobi has 2 endure all of deidara's teasings. but don't worry he'll be more afraid of the fact that Tobi(TOBI!) is cursing him out and has basically turned into a living hell-creature. but leading up to that event he is totally dei-dei.
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Greed-kun In reply to zoenian33 [2009-01-18 18:11:18 +0000 UTC]
Deidara WILL kick ass right?<_<
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zoenian33 In reply to Greed-kun [2009-01-18 18:22:11 +0000 UTC]
ya in the next chapter. Tobi innocently sez somthing offensive about itachi, then deidara repeats it while laughing, then kisame walks in,sees deidara laughing at itachi, then attacks him. and since u asked nicely, deidara will win and go do somthing else. actually ill have the entire organization in the room and then hve tobi say somthin offensive and have evrybody start yelling and the kisame and dei dei will fight.
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zoenian33 In reply to Greed-kun [2009-01-18 18:41:26 +0000 UTC]
ya im almost done with the first n im gonna work xtra hard 2 finish it!
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zoenian33 In reply to Greed-kun [2009-01-18 19:48:50 +0000 UTC]
yayaya i only have 5 characterz left to include!
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