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Published: 2009-03-13 23:39:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 19651; Favourites: 236; Downloads: 289
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Description Sorry folks...totaly fucked this one up! Lol, these endoskeletons def. deserve better. I'm gonna have to take another shot at them. But for now, this will have to do...

I don't know where I messed up...colors, compostion? Too busy? Damn burning night scenes are tough!! Oh well. I'll take on an easier task to make up for this one.
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Comments: 76

ZWYER In reply to ??? [2010-01-29 18:55:24 +0000 UTC]

word

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Robaato [2009-10-19 10:33:23 +0000 UTC]

Dude, you're fuggin' top notch!

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ZWYER In reply to Robaato [2009-10-20 16:56:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks, man!

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scruffyronin [2009-06-09 17:24:16 +0000 UTC]

WICKED! I wish I did this!!

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NeonRockingVisuals [2009-04-22 17:53:54 +0000 UTC]

there is nothing wrong with it!
the terminators looks so deam cool!

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NYX-34 [2009-04-22 17:25:39 +0000 UTC]

Don't beat yourself up like that! This is a spectacular image of one of my fav movies! You did a wonderful job displaying all the T100's, because you have developed your own style to draw them like that, and it really works! There is one thing you could improve though, the blast shots look too much like paper cut-outs. Maybe if you made more spiked blast edges and softened them up a bit... you could do that. It's only a suggestion.

Again great work and continue cranking out these arts, they're really awesome!

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ZWYER In reply to NYX-34 [2009-04-24 16:04:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the input! I appreciate all the help I can get!

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Lycan90 [2009-03-31 19:21:21 +0000 UTC]

Take it easy, dude.
It looks cool.
I especially like the use of warm and cold light.

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ZWYER In reply to Lycan90 [2009-04-01 17:05:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Kmadden2004 [2009-03-25 22:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Don't beat yourself up, man, there are plenty of people here (myself included) who wish they could draw Terminators as well as that.

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Gingashi [2009-03-20 00:15:54 +0000 UTC]

Do you watch the Sarah Conner Chronicles? It's a great show, getting me really into terminator!
This is very cool man! Wicked gatling guns. The bg and the blue light work really well, creates great mood. I agree with others comments on maybe more intense contrast- but great job!

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ZWYER In reply to Gingashi [2009-03-20 14:26:06 +0000 UTC]

I haven't seen that series...kinda bugged by that girl from Firefly, but am soooo looking forward to Salvation!!

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Gambear1er [2009-03-17 20:41:05 +0000 UTC]

I can hear the industrial music creeping in when i look at this ...great piece

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ZWYER In reply to Gambear1er [2009-03-17 23:49:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, man!

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Gambear1er In reply to ZWYER [2009-03-24 16:55:12 +0000 UTC]

fo sho'

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elKoi [2009-03-16 13:56:21 +0000 UTC]

What Mel? You did great here !

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ZWYER In reply to elKoi [2009-03-16 17:04:23 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Thanks! I didn't realize so many people actually liked it. Quite a relief!

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elKoi In reply to ZWYER [2009-03-17 01:08:55 +0000 UTC]

You may be a lil bit too harsh on yourself, but that's ok we all do that from time to time.

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TheGreyNinja [2009-03-15 22:50:45 +0000 UTC]

lookin' good! only thing that slightly throws me off is how there's the blurred burning on the right, and straight to the left are these hard edges on the smoke.. maybe have the smoke transition a bit into being blurred? just a personal pref. thing. always love your drawings though. really strong, simple stuff.

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ZWYER In reply to TheGreyNinja [2009-03-16 17:06:30 +0000 UTC]

Good call! Since everything in the background is blurred, having the smoke trail off into a blur would help emphasize that. Thanks!

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Honky-Voodoo [2009-03-15 15:37:15 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what you're bitchin' about, I like it. A valiant effort sir.

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ZWYER In reply to Honky-Voodoo [2009-03-16 17:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks voodoo! Much appreciated.

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Honky-Voodoo In reply to ZWYER [2009-03-17 01:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem.

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MysteryofAlbesila [2009-03-15 10:21:05 +0000 UTC]

nice

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JJConway [2009-03-15 08:30:10 +0000 UTC]

You're crazy! I'd totally put a huge poster of this on my wall!

-JJ

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ZWYER In reply to JJConway [2009-03-16 17:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, man!

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JohnOsborne [2009-03-15 07:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Fuckin Awesome

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ZWYER In reply to JohnOsborne [2009-03-16 17:07:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, sir!

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JohnOsborne In reply to ZWYER [2009-03-16 22:03:19 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome

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Samuca [2009-03-15 02:31:36 +0000 UTC]

A 3-man necron unit with assault cannons!? Gimme a break - that's 12 strength 6 shots with rending. Overpowered I say.

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ZWYER In reply to Samuca [2009-03-16 17:08:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, they teleported over. They got gauss gannons, woot!

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dio-03 [2009-03-15 02:03:07 +0000 UTC]

this is definitely not a faliure in my book, just making that clear.

onething, and btw this is so miniscule you don't even have to pay any mind to, is that you could have fade another layer of gun blast efect on each of the guns, to give it more sensation of movement, since there is kinda really a solid object.

other then that, you fail no one, man. keep this shit up.

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ZWYER In reply to dio-03 [2009-03-16 17:09:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, dude!

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Mourdryu [2009-03-15 00:42:41 +0000 UTC]

im sure its bad cuz its ur Pencil/paper/ wateve r..lol

jk..nice work .

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ZWYER In reply to Mourdryu [2009-03-16 17:09:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Mr-King55 [2009-03-14 16:44:08 +0000 UTC]

i love it composition is good, lines and colour are good everything is cool. the only thing that bothers me is that the light sources from the aircraft are soft while the blue reflection are hard and angular. awesome work! xx

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ZWYER In reply to Mr-King55 [2009-03-16 17:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the suggestion. That does make alot of sense. The lights would be animated, so a harder/sharper finish would be more appropriate. Thanks for the help!

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Mr-King55 In reply to ZWYER [2009-03-16 22:32:02 +0000 UTC]

i love that you take peoples opinions into account, its the mark of a great artist! x

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Genta49 [2009-03-14 12:18:03 +0000 UTC]

Rock and Roll!! \m/, ^_^

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billythebrain [2009-03-14 08:52:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm digging the composition and palette, but I agree with a few people here, you need more hard highlights on the metal. Also the depth of field looks a little inconsistent with the building being blurred but the further ship not. Still, as usual man, this is a sock rocker. Any chance of getting the uncoloured lines to play with? I'm a bit of a colouring whore.

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ZWYER In reply to billythebrain [2009-03-16 17:11:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comments. Yeah, alot of people had suggested that. I'm gonna have to fix it. As for line work, I didn't save that version! But, I'll do it for the next piece, and if you want the line art, let me know. I'll start saving the unflattened files.

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billythebrain In reply to ZWYER [2009-03-16 21:03:29 +0000 UTC]

"Didn't save that version"?! I thought everyone was like me and had a hard drive full of unflattened .PSDs Seriously though I'm sure I'm not the only colourist out there that'd step over their own grandmother to get their hands on you lines. But don't worry about saving them as unflattened. A JPG will be fine. Any colourist worth his or her salt knows how to seperate the lines from the bg.

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ZWYER In reply to billythebrain [2009-03-16 21:36:28 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Thanks for the compliments. Actualy your the first person to have asked for the lines. I'll def. send you some files of my next stuff if you want them. Just let me know!

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billythebrain In reply to ZWYER [2009-03-16 21:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Did you want me to let you know for each piece? 'Cos judging by the rest of your work I'd be up for colouring anything you've done.

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ZWYER In reply to billythebrain [2009-03-16 22:04:57 +0000 UTC]

I have a seperate folder in my gallery of some the older ones I did. I think I submitted a few line arts there. Your more than welcome to try those for now...they're kinda old though.

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JoeMDavis [2009-03-14 07:08:30 +0000 UTC]

Damn this is so cool!! Great job as always!

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ZWYER In reply to JoeMDavis [2009-03-16 17:11:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, man. Lookin' forward to more your stuff!

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JoeMDavis In reply to ZWYER [2009-04-12 22:43:16 +0000 UTC]

ditto!

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LaurenMontgomery [2009-03-14 03:15:14 +0000 UTC]

Where's Christian Bale?

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ZWYER In reply to LaurenMontgomery [2009-03-14 05:28:43 +0000 UTC]

pfffshhh...He was too busy yelling at someone.

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