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[2014-11-11 17:01:52 +0000 UTC]
(Peru)
# Statistics
Favourites: 28; Deviations: 19; Watchers: 51
Watching: 184; Pageviews: 4527; Comments Made: 893; Friends: 184
# About me
Name: Catalina Amanda VargasNicknames: Amanda, Cat, Cata
Age appearance: 20
Real age: 406
Weight: NONE OF YOUR BUISNESS.
Height: 5'6"
Country representation: Peru
Current religion: Catholic
Hair: Roan Red
Left eye: Red
Right eye: Grey
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# Comments
Comments: 390
Hola, senora, can I help you-
Β // Admin is too lazy for accents //
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// It`s not my bday ._. //
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Try for the watch ovo ))
//takes her hand and kisses itΒ
Good afternoon.Β
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Q-quΓ©...?
// confused blink //
// blushes //
outofchurros; It's not a peoblem, friend~!
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How are you?
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Muy bien-
// she's confused //
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//tilts head
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I said very good.
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I know but you seemed upset.Β
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I did?
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Yep.Β
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Oh. You must be mistaken-
// chuckles a little //
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Oh- Sorry! //apologetic smile
Do you want to eat anything?Β
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Eh?
Sure?
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I'm sure! I'll pay~
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Ah... Alright then...
// I s2g if ur planning fLUFF- //
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There's a nice restaurant I know if you want to~
//friendly non romantic fluff to be precise
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// gdi //
// shrugs //
Alright.
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//goes with her to the restaurantΒ
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// follows? //
// idk //
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What will you eat?
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Uh... Well, I don't know...
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There's seafood and fast food.Β
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// still doesn't know though //
// admin is an indecisive person, so that pretty much makes Cat indecisive as well |D //
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//waiting for her patiently
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I don't know, you choose.
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//orders two apple pies
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// oo yum apples //
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[ No need to be rude or harsh at all, but I do not think people from Peru are Italian or have Italian names, are animal hybrids, and have white hair and pale skin. And it's weird not to tell the weight. It doesn't matter. To be honest, it kinda shows how lazy you were to not research height/weight Β ]
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// It'd take a while to explain
// but I've been constantly changing her design, and haven't exactly gotten to posting the changes and editing her info
// I'll get to it though
// and for her skin colour, I didn't have the right pencils at the time
// and her last name
// her hubby is Italian
// and yes I am lazy
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[ It doesn't matter. You could have at least typed the actual info
Her hubby is italian
so she's automatically paried with an ItalianΒ
Self insert to be honest, because Peru and Italy don;t have alot of relations ]
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// I'm just gonna say right now
// The relationship started a while ago
// Sorry if she seems a little off
// I'm completely remaking her anyways
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[p stAREsΒ
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you did the diffrent eye color thing
done bye hah ]
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// bc
// she's heterochromic
// like me...?
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[ i commAND PROOF
Plus, it very rare and over used ]
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lmao I see u everywhere
u go wren
500 cookies for u )
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outofchurros; ugh, okay, listen. I'm still fucking working on her, she is a work in progress. What does it matter that she has two coloured eyes or white hair or wtv, it is possible. Maybe she dyed her hair, maybe she wears contacts, you don't know that. I'm pretty fed up right right now with how you're acting, amd besides, I'm not sending you a picture of myself, you don't need to see me. And for your imformation, I'm extremely proud of her. You criticize her, you criticize me. You insult her, you insult.
Ever heard of the saying 'Do onto others as you would wish they would do onto you'? Well guess what, I'm doing onto you as you did onto me. Now can you piss off before I blow a fuse?
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Yes, but tell me about Peru
without looking it up )
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// Jesus Christ, are you TRYING to piss me off? Listen, I haven't had the chance to yet //
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Are you?
B
but then why did you make the oc before the research )
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// God just //
// leave me be //
// I'm working on it //
// editing an acount over mobile is difficult //
// even more so when your pc doesn't fucking work and has a virus //
// I'm working on it dammit //
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lmao critiquing =/= insulting
but if u need it nicely put, this oc isn't the best
while her first names do make sense, her surname does not. according to Spanish naming traditions she can keep her own surname and take on her 'hubby's' or sometimes not at all. something that could work better would be Antonio's surname bc u know, he was her coloniser?
next, her hair colour. well, roan, I'm pretty sure is used to describe horses and I suggest u change that. Peruvians are mostly of Spanish or native Amerindians or a mix and it'd make sense for her hair to be darker brown or even possibly black. red hair isn't exactly common tbh
her eyes
well oh god, I'm not going to rant on this, but heterochromia is very very very rare in humans. complete heterochromia is even more rarer. and plus, it's a genetic mutation of very common eye colours and red and grey eyes aren't very common eye colours.
and just
the odd eyed oc screams mary sue I'm very sorry
now her weight, I wont say anything bc tho u can just go to a bmi index measurer, a lot of ppl get lazy
her height seems far too tall
if I'm correct 5'6'' is 167cm
the average male Peruvian height is only 164cm and women are 151cm which would be 4'9''
now that's what I got from the info u put up on ur profile so I can't talk about her personality BUT with this so far, I think u should put a bit more work to make it more realistic first )
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