Draderath In reply to Whisper292 [2019-05-26 09:52:59 +0000 UTC]

I've read this story and the others before and enjoyed them greatly. I found them again as I've gone through a skyrim craze while role playing my own character in game. If I've time I would enjoy writing my own story but back to yours: characterisation is wonderful, each character recognisable as both your own version and the one in game with quirks and habits all their own. The settling is brought to life and I can visualise where we are based on the details you give, which for me is key. World building is a vital part of any tale (in my humble opinion).
I will keep reading and comment if I find more details that stand out.

Keep writing

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Whisper292 In reply to Draderath [2019-05-27 16:43:55 +0000 UTC]

Your philosophy is exactly mine. There's nothing better than a character-driven story. I want my readers to know and feel my characters, and the NPCs. 

I agree on world building, too. I feel I cheated a bit with the fanfiction because Bethesda already built the world, but I did my best to make it mine. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and I do want to hear your honest opinions, even if they happen to be negative.

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Draderath In reply to tablelander [2014-01-08 13:43:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you great shots btw. Happy new year

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tablelander In reply to Draderath [2014-01-09 04:04:22 +0000 UTC]

and to you as well

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Draderath In reply to poptartruby [2013-08-21 19:07:19 +0000 UTC]

That's okay, thank you for the great artwork

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Draderath In reply to ShadeofShinon [2013-03-03 17:49:47 +0000 UTC]

no problem, i'm reworking my old pokemon fiction to repost. so with that time watching awesome art work is a fav of mine.
know anybody interested in a team rocket fic? i need an audience for feedback. if that is okay?

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Draderath In reply to LeonDoodlez [2012-08-01 16:28:30 +0000 UTC]

no probs, tanx for the two cool nuzlockes

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Draderath In reply to AkiraHikawa [2012-07-23 14:12:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the badass spider. sure i'll check out your drawings, its people like you would make me wish i could draw my own stories... i will try

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Draderath In reply to Ereseth [2012-07-10 06:36:39 +0000 UTC]

same i got a 2.1 which was awesome but same about the dis for me too, but i've thought about it and decided yes it's sad but i'm happy i got my 2.1
cheers for reading it for me

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Ereseth In reply to Draderath [2012-07-10 13:02:18 +0000 UTC]

Woo we can be 2.1 buddies! Well done you

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Draderath In reply to Ereseth [2012-07-10 18:38:38 +0000 UTC]

well done to you Ereseth you bamf

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Draderath In reply to Ereseth [2012-05-31 18:10:10 +0000 UTC]

it's okay we have been busy. i hope all is well with you. please comment on the story while you read, i love reading feedback.
you have a lot to see. check it out!

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Draderath In reply to ZestyDoesThings [2012-05-12 08:57:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah son. the boys are back in town, hopefully.
thanx tobo, they finally wake up and realise that he is the villian we need. that why he is called BOSS.

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ZestyDoesThings In reply to Draderath [2012-05-14 08:11:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, they are learning! I hope they make a big part of the game, the new villians were always a bt wishy-washy

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Draderath In reply to ZestyDoesThings [2012-05-14 08:53:51 +0000 UTC]

exactly, Giovanni is thr original villian, their best that was mysterious, and the surprise gym leader. we need him to remind people of who made us really want to fight the villians

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ZestyDoesThings In reply to Draderath [2012-05-15 20:50:44 +0000 UTC]

Oui oui!
It would be amazing if jesse and james made it in the game... but i doubt that

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Draderath In reply to Tekki-Shodan [2012-05-05 13:17:08 +0000 UTC]

awesome glad you like it. leave comments if you want, it all helps to have feedback.

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Draderath In reply to karuuhnia [2012-04-26 15:39:15 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome i love your comic and thanx for the Llama badge

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Draderath In reply to Ereseth [2012-04-17 22:44:09 +0000 UTC]

nai nai, sup sister.
you found me, awesomes. I'll check out your stuff tomoz, u shall be my friend.
feel free to check out ma stuff

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Draderath In reply to ghettoXD [2012-04-17 19:29:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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ghettoXD In reply to Draderath [2012-04-18 12:43:33 +0000 UTC]

your welcome and they are really good XD

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Draderath In reply to ghettoXD [2012-04-18 13:03:48 +0000 UTC]

aaawwww. thank you, you are very kind. I am glad you liked reading them. feel free to give critism if you think there is something that could be changed or made better.

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ghettoXD In reply to Draderath [2012-04-18 15:58:23 +0000 UTC]

your welcome XD
there is nothing to change there are so AH-mazing and excellent

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Draderath In reply to ghettoXD [2012-04-18 16:05:06 +0000 UTC]

really? no grammar mistakes or weird phrases?
I know i'm not bad at writing but i'm not perfect.
still thank you for liking the story.
how did you think i protrayed the gym battles and fights?
boring or good?

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ghettoXD In reply to Draderath [2012-04-18 16:06:52 +0000 UTC]

it was really good and there was no grammar mistakes or really weird phrases

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Draderath In reply to ghettoXD [2012-04-18 16:37:02 +0000 UTC]

excellant, i am glad. prepare for more story coming to you soon. we see the shit getting real.
endgame approaches.
ready the tissues, Team Rocket are badasses expect sorrow and rage.

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ghettoXD In reply to Draderath [2012-04-18 18:33:00 +0000 UTC]

any time XD

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Draderath In reply to SilverVanadis [2012-04-15 20:58:06 +0000 UTC]

your welcome. loving your soul silver its awesome. if you have the time i'd appreciate comments on the story i'm uploading.

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