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[2012-08-15 02:35:04 +0000 UTC]
"Mother of Machines"
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# Comments
Comments: 255
... a little late, but
Thank you for the Fav
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My pleasure, Caller
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I eagerly await your next piece!!!
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My pleasure, your work is fantastic and deserves the love
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Hey,
thanx a lot for the
I hope you find something in my gallery that you like. Currently, I'm uploading a lot of German writing. Sorry about that. But I try to upload other stuff that's not in German soon.
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No worries! You uploading in German means I get to practice reading it, so it's all good heheheh
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Okay. I didn't know you understand some German. Feel free to read any of my writings
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Then I keep my fingers crossed for you
And if it's too difficult to read my German stories, there are some English texts in my gallerey, too
Yes, thank you, I had a really good time while on holidays
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I'm glad to hear you had a good time! That's what counts!
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Yes, thank you
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My pleasure, it's a wonderful photo!
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No problem. You're great, and deserve every one of them !
Keep it up, and have a great day
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Hi there!
I just wanted to say thank youΒ so muchΒ for the watch! You just made myΒ day!Β Β
I'm so happy to know that you like what I do! I hope you have a wonderful day xx
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My pleasure
Can't wait to see what you come up with next !
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You're very welcome
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Thank you for the Fav! How did you like Inevitable?
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You're welcome
It was well-done, overall ! The one thing I think takes away from it however is the climax. It seems... so sudden. But everything else, the build up was magnificent. You could feel the stress of the character, it was infectious ! I'll have to read it again, but I was honestly astonished such a short text had such intensity !
Really good read !
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The whole thing got trimmed down MAJORLY because of the word count restrictions of the contest I wrote it for. My plan is to eventually write a larger peice featuring the creature, and that will have a much different feel.
I posted another horror piece featuring the creature around Halloween, hopefully the lack of word count restriction helps:
Unalterable
Β Β Β Β Β Slap...slap...slap...
Β Β Β Β Β The sound echoed off of the buildings around Chloe, the quiet noise deafening in the eerie silence. Something small and panicked pulled at her insides, sending childish shivers running up and down her spine, but she pushed the feeling aside as she bolted down the empty street.Β
Β Β Β Β Β It's still behind me, she thought, which means I've got a clear path ahead. She hazarded a quick glance over her shoulder, satisfied when she didn't see anything. The creature hadn't moved at anything over a determined shuffle yet, and she was confident the endurance she had built up over years of police work meant she could outrun it.
Β Β Β Β Β Her foot hit something slippery as she was distracted, Chloe tumbling to a painful stop on the concrete sidewalk. She scrambled up onto her knees, disgust rolling over her as long ropey strands of slime Β
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Excellent ! I'll take a look at it soon enough. I've been a little bit busier lately, but I'll be sure to make time for it
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Hey, I saw that you have some literature in your gallery. So if you're looking for literature critique, you might want to check out my group
There we exchange literature critiques on a regular basis.
You find the rules here: The Rules - English
If you have any questions, just ask me or send a note to the group
If you're not interested, that's also okay
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Likewise, your work is awesome
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My pleasure, your support is equally appreciated
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Thank you for wanting to affiliate with us over at I'm sorry that we have been having issues connecting together. I've not received any notifications in the group so I sent you an invite to speed the process up. I'm combing through looking for the errors in the admin section again. So I'll let you know if it was a problem on our end. Again I am sorry for the inconveniences this may have caused! Thank you again for your patience! Crossing fingers that this works! I haven't had issues with sending them yet!
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jonwassing referred me to you, and the intent behind your group is something I'm really interested in. It's tantalizing, and I'm interested in taking a more active role in the community thanks to it
But, either I didn't receive any notification, or I accepted without ever replying to you (in which case shame on me). I have to admit I've never been in this position before ever since being admin...
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Well I sent the invite your group Short-stories. I haven't seen you pop up in our affiliates yet. So I guess it must've expired. I sent you a new one you should receive it in your group inbox. I also sent you a personal invite to our group. We accept everyone and anyone at any skill level. The group auto-accepts joining. Let me know if there are still issues.
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It worked this time !
Thank you very much, I look forward to contributing to the group however I can
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Thank you for joining! I hope we can help you guys out too!
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The pleasure's mine, keep up the fantastic work
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How wonderful it was that everything meshed so perfectly, thank you for writing it. I'm still at somewhat of a loss for words !
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How can I help? Help you find the words.
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They'll come to me eventually, they always do
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