eagletalon007 In reply to Eggheadcobra [2014-03-29 21:09:03 +0000 UTC]

Ah well first off let me go off and say that I've been dead on fanfic for some lengthy amount of time so I haven't worked on my story's at all. However I have still been reading story's as well as yours and I think you have a good story on your hands. But I think your not putting most of the focus on Kat since she's the main protagonist of the game. We know more about Kat then we do Raven and Yunica (Not a lot of character development for them). But it's your story and opinion. 

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Eggheadcobra In reply to eagletalon007 [2014-03-29 21:20:55 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate your thoughts But wait, you said "your not putting most of the focus on Kat". But you also said there's not a lot of character development for Raven and Yunica. I'm a bit confused

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eagletalon007 In reply to Eggheadcobra [2014-03-29 21:30:30 +0000 UTC]

I was refereeing to the game the whole story was about Kat while Raven and Yunica where more of supporting characters with not to much screen time. 

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Eggheadcobra In reply to eagletalon007 [2014-03-29 21:34:04 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh alright. Well I aim to change that with Distant Struggle (: I want Raven, Yunica, and Syd to have their fair share of screen time with the fanfic.

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eagletalon007 In reply to Eggheadcobra [2014-03-29 21:54:08 +0000 UTC]

I see, well I hope you will be able to finish it. By the way I do plan on going back to work on my inFamous Kat when I'm not busy.

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Eggheadcobra In reply to eagletalon007 [2014-03-29 21:58:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm working no episode 9 right now. And I look forward to your fanfic (:

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eagletalon007 In reply to Eggheadcobra [2014-03-30 17:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I appreciate it.

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eagletalon007 In reply to Pyroantiform [2013-08-08 08:10:58 +0000 UTC]

No problem just keep doing what you're doing.

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