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jacksonhawkin ♂️ [21916274] [2012-05-01 21:03:23 +0000 UTC] (Unknown)

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# Comments

Comments: 32

despacidont [2023-02-16 03:53:02 +0000 UTC]

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TurntechGodhead12 [2019-10-20 20:55:29 +0000 UTC]

I’ve looked through all your work. A change in point of view might benefit your work. Third person is good for exploring the thoughts of more then one person. But the scenes you show usually mainly focus on just one person for quite some time. First person can give a much more detailed look into the mind and personality of the single person. It might work well in a mental transformation, letting the reader see just how much the character’s mind is changing. Second person can be good for the scene itself, so it would give more attention to the physical transformation.

I hope at least some of this helps you in some way. I know you are looking for feedback before writing more, which I completely understand.

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venandigren [2019-08-09 17:48:18 +0000 UTC]

what happened to Candy

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jacksonhawkin In reply to venandigren [2019-08-15 09:17:45 +0000 UTC]

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venandigren In reply to jacksonhawkin [2019-08-16 20:18:11 +0000 UTC]

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apocolypse1011 [2018-10-26 23:33:13 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait for more.

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jacksonhawkin In reply to apocolypse1011 [2018-10-30 09:00:31 +0000 UTC]

I have to disappoint you, nothing on the writing table right now..

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FredRichi69 [2018-05-27 16:22:47 +0000 UTC]

Nice gallery =) (Smile)

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jacksonhawkin In reply to FredRichi69 [2018-05-29 08:38:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man!

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xmarilix [2018-04-12 14:47:44 +0000 UTC]

I miss your stories n////n

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jacksonhawkin In reply to xmarilix [2018-04-13 14:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for saying that Marilin.
Although I have tons of new story ideas, I am not planning on writing anything soon. To be honest, I have always found the amount of feedback a little disappointing, which kind of took away my drive..

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golbezguy In reply to jacksonhawkin [2018-08-14 03:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Hey I know it's months later, but have you considered trying out writing shorter captions on a tumblr page? A lot of people have found nice followings there.

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jacksonhawkin In reply to golbezguy [2018-09-12 06:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Totally forgot to respond, I’m sorry. Your comment definitely made me thinking, still considering it. The thing is I do like the longer, more detailed captions a lot more myself..

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golbezguy In reply to jacksonhawkin [2018-09-18 20:43:44 +0000 UTC]

Well I can say I've enjoyed all of your work thus far. No matter your preference I'm sure I'd still follow.

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jacksonhawkin In reply to golbezguy [2018-09-20 08:12:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man, really appreciate it

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RMK99 [2017-04-27 04:08:07 +0000 UTC]

When next tg story/comics ?

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jacksonhawkin In reply to RMK99 [2017-05-03 10:23:25 +0000 UTC]

I still want to finish up the story about Cassy, and I have tons of other ideas for stories,
but sadly I have had very little time to work on all of it. Sorry, no promises for now.

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Miiabc [2017-01-21 22:13:37 +0000 UTC]

Where do you get your pictures from?

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jacksonhawkin In reply to Miiabc [2017-01-22 08:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Everywhere i guess. Most of them on instagram though, and theperfectboobs.

Thanks for your interest!

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fredfred5150 [2016-10-30 18:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Love me a good bimbo caption, you've got quite a few!

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jacksonhawkin In reply to fredfred5150 [2016-10-30 20:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, really means a lot! Love your 'Unique' btw!

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fredfred5150 In reply to jacksonhawkin [2016-10-30 23:12:42 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome, feel free to write something for her ;) (Wink)

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jacksonhawkin In reply to fredfred5150 [2016-10-31 19:08:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm actually more looking into photo sequences, to guide my stories and have multiple phases of a transformation. If you're ever planning on creating a sequence, I'd like the idea of a collaboration, and to write a story with it.

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fredfred5150 In reply to jacksonhawkin [2016-10-31 22:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Ah so your focus is on the transformation side. Mine is more on using the results of the transformation ;) (Wink)

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KesharaNarme [2016-06-08 22:12:55 +0000 UTC]