karzonix In reply to nerdsman567 [2020-04-06 18:12:19 +0000 UTC]

Holy fuck, feels like forever since I've used this account... Update may be in order. 

No problem my man. 

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karzonix In reply to rkane31174 [2017-04-30 05:05:51 +0000 UTC]

correctumondo my friend.

You probably understand what a Succubus is. Chances are you've heard rumor floating around the internet of a fictional land they call Felarya which is a wilderness stalked by giant man eating women. A ton of vore fiction surrounds it so it might not be exactly my thing. But I can give the basic premise. Keep in mind this is just one of many stories of its kind I'd actually like to turn into a series, it's just this particular one I'm not sure I could do justice.

ACROSS THE DIMENSIONS: MAYHEM IN FELARYA.

We all know Felarya's a pretty lousy place to go camping. Too bad the guys in charge of booking didn't hear, or couldn't read. Because thanks to them, a band of bumbling pals just looking to take the week off and do some camping find themselves in the midst of a land stalked by seductive man eaters.

And what misfortune: Alex forgot the extra rain jackets, their might not be enough marshmallows to share between them and their hosts, Collin and Jasper only brought two extra playstation controllers, Ivan, Henry and Jodie only brought their own fishing poles, and don't tell James, but did someone say something about a 50 FOOT man eating Succubus?! Here's hoping he won't try to bail out on his dirtbike. More likely he would hurt himself before he got far.

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rkane31174 In reply to karzonix [2017-04-30 05:15:16 +0000 UTC]

An interesting and humorous premise for a crackfic.

I do know what a succubus is, having played Monster Girl Quest. (I highly recommend it. The story is fantastic!)
While I have no experience with Felarya, I have looked it up. I understand most of what it is about.

In addition to needing more information about all the characters, I do have a few questions.
How are they getting there for their camping trip, and why can't (don't) they immediately leave?
Having two extra Playstation controllers implies having a Playstation. How does one power a console on a camping trip?
Why wouldn't James bail on this trip? He seems like the most sensible of all of them.
Most importantly, how should the story end?

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karzonix In reply to rkane31174 [2017-04-30 06:34:30 +0000 UTC]

CHARACTER BIO TIME!

JAMES WALKER: A glasses wearing, black hoodie clad bad tempered teenager of dark hair and slightly dysfunctional sanity. Most of this hotheads (who hails from Chilliwack B.C.) time revolves around keeping Collin and Jasper in line, riding his dirtbike, and drawing to his hearts content. He also sports some VERY colorful language. (Example. "THE FUCKING FUCK YA FRUITY TWATBAG RUSTY CUNT BUCKET DOUCHE CANOE!? WHAT WAS THAT FOR!?") He possesses an intense fear of Demons of literally any type, and he cannot tolerate Succubi. (He's fought interdimensional beings who could've destroyed the universe, but a mere Succubus turns him into the biggest baby. Yeah, his mates also agree that's a little odd.) The keeper of the Omega Pencil. A magic pen with the capacity to bring whatever he writes or draws in his book to life. Which might have something to do with how he came to the interdimensional plains.

JODIE DEANS: James walkers best friend and companion through thick and thin. No matter how ridiculous the situation. He's a lot more chill than his best friend though, and often doesn't think much of gigantic monsters. He is also inhumanly adept with electric guitar, and he and his band, The Hells Angels, strive for universe wide recognition. He likes his women like he likes his wings: Hot, as is evident by Penny, his girlfriend. He is also tagged along by Sarah, his sporty little sister. He is the carrier of the Magic Satchel.

ALEX HENDERSON: The Hells Angels shy bassist, and closest friend of Ivan or Ragezilla. Alex, of German/Scandinavian origin, is a character who makes up for his inability to swim with the unwavering loyalty he brings to the table. With as timid and shy as he tries to present himself as, always seems the chick magnet at the end of the day. His secret? Well he's got a multi-purpose robotic right arm that makes his playing skills insane for one, but lets just say there's more than that which is robotic on this guy. He is also stupidly easy to arouse. One centimeter of cleavage, he's got a hard-on he cannot hide or get rid of till he rubs it out. And he has to do that pretty far away: Because he puts out like a firehose, which must be why sperm banks like him so much.

IVAN/RAGEZILLA NIKOLAI: Not a human, but a Kaijusaurus of Russian origin. Kaijusaurus are humanoid/monster experiments that resulted in a kin with dark grey scaly skin, fire breathing, antlers jutting from their heads and sharp teeth, as well as a frightening ability to turn into 50 story fire breathing monsters in times of intense rage. Ivan serves as secondary guitarist for Hells Angels. While little is in fact known of him, he and Alex share a particularly close friendship, and his staunch demeanor and iron determination make him a valuable friend. And while he is called "Ragezilla." As a nickname, in truth he never really gets that mad over the little things and usually is quite chill and keeps to himself mostly. It's when a threat to his mates arises that the problems start. Ivan has an appreciation for anything fast, loud and petrol stinking, as is evident of his Harley. Was his idea to bring a trailer of four quads with them thankfully, so it won't just be about fishing and dodging Succubi. He wields the primal dusters.

THE TWINS: Collin and Jasper are the classic competitive twin brother duo: They'll fight over everything and then nothing. The brotherly duo who hail from the British isles aren't really bad people, they just are a little immature and tend to forget the bigger picture, which is why they are James's favorite people to shout at when angered, which he often is. While Jasper is more into rock and such, Collin is a heavy rap lover, using his capabilities to come up with rhyming insults to arouse his brothers ire. Both however are huge video game junkies and can certainly hold their own in a fight with laser shooting pea-shooters, granted that is they don't decide to have an argument or fight instead.

HENRY STONE: Jodie's cousin and drummer for Hells Angels. He has a bit of an unhealthy love for dangerous stunts. (Motorbike jumps, shooting himself from rockets the like.) Also a bit of an uncle figure to Sarah as she and her brother were displaced from their family in youth. While he can get a little cocky at times, and find himself in situations he didn't prepare for beforehand, he nevertheless is certainly not weak. And has no problem making up his way out of things on the spot. He wields the Ultros shield which is entirely indestructible and can also turn into a shield, a laser gun, a sword, even a coffee machine.

PENNY MORRIS: Jodie's girlfriend and occasional collaborator with his band via piano and voice. She also serves as the doctor for the pals, and although she does enjoy the nutbar packs company, she does question how often they should be hurting themselves. She's a very inquisitive type, and believes there to be an answer to every question. Which is why she is investigating ancient documents concerning who might be responsible for the Omega pencil's creation. She is also the one trying to convince James to "End this story, so he could continue his own." Just to hint at a bit more of James' character. Her weapon is the Katana of Justice.

SARAH DEANS: The tag-along and primary brains for an entourage of friends who otherwise have none. When she isn't helping them, she can often be found hoverboarding, skateboarding, snowboarding, skating, rollerblading or playing any kind of sport. She has a very free spirit about her, with little regard for authority, though that probably is her greatest weakness as some authority she does need to watch over her. But all the same, she's one tough cookie, and if you wanna kick her ass, you gotta catch her first. Her weapon is the mighty slingshot.

Well they don't leave at once because they mix up the information of where their going. (For example, they thought they were going to camp felled trail, but they took a wrong turn, and now it's Felarya instead.) How they got there? Since Felarya's an interdimensional world, they got their via amulet of infinity: A stone that lets them travel dimensions. So TONS of things could've gone wrong.

Collin and Jasper probably hook the console up to the camper van to power it and the Wi Fi, which of course they didn't count on being nonexistent.

And the only reason James doesn't bail? He might be sensible, but he'll do it out of terror. And if he's scared to death, he'll likely make no logical decisions and hurt himself instead. So it's up to the group to make sure he keeps his cool.

I think the story should end with all of them getting safely home, and James saying something along the lines of "I'd rather rip off my dick and throw it in the river than visit that hellhole again."

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rkane31174 In reply to karzonix [2017-04-30 07:37:04 +0000 UTC]

That's... a lot of characters. They also have a lot of strange items.
I feel like this can go in too many directions for me to get a handle on.

Was there a general idea of a series of events that you had in mind?
If you tell me what's supposed to happen in the story, I can probably write it.
Otherwise, we can work out the general plot ideas together.

I'll probably use a sentient narrator, if that's okay with you.

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karzonix In reply to rkane31174 [2017-04-30 18:02:05 +0000 UTC]

sure why not? 

As for a bit of a rough plot: The group lands in Felarya. Their first discovery there are giant footprints, and Jasper assumes it probably means "Some big fans for Hells Angels." In spite of Jodie's misgivings of the place, Henry feels certain they are in the right spot and they set up camp, with Collin and Jasper heading inside the van to play video games. James, in spite of feeling nervous, decides to go rip around on his dirtbike for a bit to put the giant footprints out of his mind and heads off while Sarah and Penny take two quads offroading, and Ivan, Alex, Henry and Jodie go fishing. While blazing a trail, James ends up running into      www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php… which results in a chase. 
Getting a bit desperate, he takes the bike into the burrow of www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php… thinking it was a tunnel, but crashes inside.

The fishing party meanwhile seem to be having some decent luck, but trouble seems inbound as something won't stop rocking the boat, and causing them general mischief. (I.E. being soaked, the like.) When Alex lands a REALLY BIG bite, which turns out to be www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php… who stubbornly refuses to give them back their fishhook. After Jodie loses a sass battle with the giant mermaid who won't stop looking at him like he's medium rare, Alex makes the right decision, and through his robotic hand turns their rowboat into a jet ski to get them going faster, with Anko in hot pursuit. The chase takes them over a waterfall, where they fall goodness knows where to.

Meanwhile When James comes to again, he finds Aurora checking out his now kinda beat up ride with an eye of curiosity. After a slight misunderstanding that startles both, she timidly asks him of his business, and he introduced himself as James walker and that he was trying to find his way back to his camp when he had a bad run in with Lily. Penny and Sarah then enter the frame, calling for James. After getting his dirtbike working, James bids the giant Naga farewell, and heads off to search for his friends amid the wilderness of Felarya. 

Collin and Jasper, having forgot their game to fight eachother, their ruckus gets the attention of Lily, who had previously tried to kill James. Though the taunting, laser shooting duo turn out to be more than bargained for. After the standoff when she questions their reading ability. (Assuming they planned all this.) they explain that neither of them can read, which unfortunately leads Collin and Jasper to forget the giant, vengeful fairy and fight each other instead. Taking advantage of their distraction, she takes them to interrogate them further. but that's when James, Penny and Sarah get back, and before she can kill either, Sarah fires a slingshot round at Lily as a warning shot, ordering Collin and Jasper to be released. With the vengeful fairy warded off, the lot now head out to recover the rest of the gang, who turn out to have ran into www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php… James, upon realizing this to be a Succubus, tries to run for it, but is stopped by his friends, more or less out of concern for his own safety. 

Penny, upon realizing her boyfriend is about to be devoured by a giant succubus, does not take this lying down and in spite of her size, gives Iridan a beating she won't forget soon, while the party rigs the boat to pull it back to camp. After a Benny-Hill style chase sequence involving all giants involved thus far, they find themselves all reunited back at camp, but with their hosts also looking down upon them. Amazingly, Collin and Jasper manage to enlighten them on the glory of "Hells Angels. Greatest show unearthed." and the band ends up introducing them to heavy metal music. With their hosts satisfied, they decide in the end that since they survived Felarya mostly unscathed, it would be more respectful to let the nutbar pack go.

Upon getting home, the group remarks on their trip, with James expressing he might never set foot outside again, but being proven once more wrong when Collin and Jasper smash a water balloon over his head, resulting in him chasing them outside.


So whatchya think?

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rkane31174 In reply to karzonix [2017-04-30 21:06:56 +0000 UTC]

It seems doable, for the most part. I have other questions though.
The way you describe things, it seems more like you're pitching the story to the executives, and less like you're delivering a storyboard.
I still need some things cleared up.

You say that the group "lands" in Felarya.
I would probably be wrong to assume they came by aircraft, although that would be pretty sweet.
You also mention that they have a van. Is this more of a work van or a camper van?
Additionally, how do they get the quads and dirt bike out there? Do they have a trailer?

When Alex and Jodie are fishing and encounter the giant mermaid, you say that "Alex lands a really big bite."
Does she literally bite the hook? Or does she just steal it and refuse to give it back?
What do you mean when you say Jodie has a sass fight with her, and how does he lose?
As for Alex getting them out of there, you say he "turns the rowboat into a jet ski."
Is he literally changing the structure of the boat, or is he just generating a source of high speed propulsion?
Also, you mentioned that Ivan and Henry were fishing as well. What were they doing all this time? Were they just somewhere else?

James is in the cave with Aurora, and you say they have a "slight misunderstanding that startles both."
What exactly do you mean by that?

Colin and Jasper forgetting their game to fight each other, I'm going to assume they just started yelling and brawling mid game.
Does Lily pick a fight with them, and then they retaliate? Or is there a verbal argument first?
"After the standoff when she questions their reading ability. (Assuming they planned all this.) they explain that neither of them can read, which unfortunately leads Collin and Jasper to forget the giant, vengeful fairy and fight each other instead." What does that even mean? Why would she question their literacy? Are they illiterate? What does that have to do with her?
When Lily "takes them to interrogate them further", is she taking them to another location? Or is she just holding them?
Colin, Jasper, Sarah, Penny, and James head out to find the rest of the group. Where is the rest of the group?
I know Iridan got them, but where are they? How are they found?

How does Penny defeat Iridan? I know she has a katana, but these creatures are massive.
Personally, I would like her to perform a Saitama jump and falcon punch the crap out of her.
If that's unacceptable, let me know.
How do they "rig the boats" to get them back to camp? Are they just tethering them to the quads?
How long does this chase go on? It would seem difficult to outrun creatures so massive.
When you say it involves all the giants thus far, does that include Aurora? If so, why?

Of course, here's the biggest question: How do Colin and Jasper "enlighten them to the power and beauty of heavy metal"?
They were just involved in a heated chase scene. As soon as the group stopped, they'd just get eaten.

Keep in mind that any questions you can't answer, or choose not to, I'll probably just make up something completely ridiculous.

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karzonix In reply to rkane31174 [2017-04-30 22:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Before I get too carried away, let me make one thing clear: The stories of James Walker and his friends are very subject to any amount of ridiculous content. 

They have both a camping van and a trailer to haul the offroad vehicles. Hells Angels as a band already is a big hit, despite not being universewide famous, so they use most of the money they make off their shows and ticket sales to buy whatever they desire for themselves. 

I'd say the mermaid steals this hook, and refuses to give it back. 

And by sass-off, that basically just means Jodie telling "Living sushi." to take a hike before they use the boat to ram her away. So basically trying to psyche her out and failing miserably. And by fail, he reminds her that she's hungry on accident. 
Alex creates a means of high speed propulsion. His right arm is robotic, and can transform into literally any practical device for every occasion.
Ivan isn't really saying much, only looking on in either horror or awe. He doesn't really speak much English, so he probably is muttering astounded in Russian. Henry is trying to back up Jodie, but he can't really think of anything abrasive enough.

As in, it at first scares Aurora that her "Prey." Is not in fact dead, and it scares James that he is sharing a burrow with a massive snake/woman. James tries to make a break for it, but thinking him a threat she is on him very quickly, but spares him when he demands to be let go.

Lily picks a fight with them for sure, very unwisely. And she's questioning their literacy, because it might be something like "Didn't either of you do any research? It's not safe for your kind here!" And Collin and Jasper are both TERRIBLY illiterate. They probably don't even understand the meaning behind the sign to a women's restroom unfortunately. It's kinda like saying to someone something like "There's information going around that this place is dangerous, didn't you catch any of that?" She intends to take them to another location. 

Their kinda deep down in sort of an underground lake in the midst of a big cavern. It's dark down there, and Iridan probably pulls a lot of tricks on them to single them out. As for how Iridan is defeated: I love the Saitama jump idea. I might say she does more than that, so she can give everybody else time to rig the fishing boats up to the quads. They probably place two side by side, jerry rigged the two together so they'd move and operate in sync with two riders, and tie the boat to the backs of them. (Their the kind that have those decks on the front and back for mounting stuff like spare gas, a chainsaw, etc.) 

The chase might not be too long, but they give these big creatures the slip by not just going in a straight line. Some of them might use a vine to trip their pursuers, Sarah might fling slingshot marbles while Collin and Jasper shoot spitball lasers. And Aurora only got involved probably because she thought it was a big game of tag, and wanted to join in. 

Collin and Jasper probably stopped them with something like "Woah, woah woah! Ladies! Do NOT tell us you were just chasing Hells Angels around this place you love em so much! You've heard yourself a taste of Hells Angels right? No? NO?! Well sit on down there, and we'll tell you about the new kings of music!" I know it might be a ridiculous premise, but they kinda have to make them forget about hunger, and get more curious about this multi-dimensional band Collin and Jasper speak of. 


Keep in mind also these are all just rough ideas for what could be said and done. Because it's sorta supposed to be ridiculous, I encourage anything else that'd help that along.

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rkane31174 In reply to karzonix [2017-04-30 22:39:17 +0000 UTC]

Trust me, if I write this, there will be ridiculous content!

If they have money, then that makes some of my plans more viable.
Oh no no no, there's nothing to be worried about...

I don't think Jodie is the smart one. You can't exactly ram a giant mermaid with a rowboat.
Also, wasn't he supposed to be the chill one? Ah well, maybe it was his hook that was stolen.
I know you said it was Alex that "caught" her, but this would make Jodie's behavior slightly more understandable.

Lily picking a fight with Collin and Jasper makes sense now.
Just one thing: are they in the van when this happens? If so, how does Lily fit inside?
Maybe they're both outside under the canopy. That would solve both problems.

I get how Iridan can possibly take them to the cave. She has magnetic powers and can fly, so she probably grabbed the boats as they went over the waterfall and carried them off.
Sarah probably found them using a GPS tracker, since she's the brains of the operation.
The sentient narrator will lampshade the fact that GPS shouldn't work since there are no satellites over Felarya.
Alternatively, it can be a long-range tracking beacon on the van.

Penny does the Saitama jump and falcon punches Iridan in the belly, causing her to spit out Jodie.
She then jumps from Iridan's belly and catches Jodie in midair before doing a frontflip and landing on her feet, the impact breaking the stone she lands on.
Using her katana, she fights off Iridan long enough for everyone else to rig up the boats.
Katana is titanium, so Iridan can't magnetize it.

The chase scene will probably jump the shark.
I'm not gonna say how, but it may have to.

I have a better idea of how they'd stop the monsters.
As they get close to the van, Sarah mentions that she recently hooked it up with a "Hypersonic Omnidirectional Quantum Wave Frequency Blast Emitter".
No explanation of what it does, but the tone that she needs is on her ipod, which she left in the van. No time to get it.
The quads have music players (because why not), so they decide to try putting in one of their albums and hooking it up to the device's remote feed.
The ensuing blast of "raw musical awesomeness in its purest form" causes all the monsters to drop to the ground in bliss. (Crazy science devices, amirite?)
They manage to get everything packed up and ready to go before the song ends.
This gives Collin and Jasper an opportunity to explain to them what they just heard.
Maybe they ask for another song before letting them go, which they decide to play live.
What do you think about this?

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karzonix In reply to rkane31174 [2017-04-30 23:05:18 +0000 UTC]

I love all of it. It feels exactly like how I imagine James Walkers adventures to be. Ridiculous, because they work. And its not the only one of its kind I imagine he embarks on. James and the nutbar pack share tons of adventures. All of them ridiculous, but in the end friendship gets them through all of it. 

I love this new ending. Especially because there is a place they could have got this device from anyway: The Magic Satchel. Essentially it holds literally everything you could ever want or need. So it's madly practical. I might add James uses his pen sometimes as a weapon itself, and just to give you a few ideas, he can pretty much draw or write whatever weapon or ability he wants. But the deadliest? When he gives himself "The powers of the chosen one." Trust me, it sends any monster running like a scolded dog. So yeah. The ending? I couldn't be happier with it. If only this were an anime now. Hee Hee. 

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rkane31174 In reply to karzonix [2017-04-30 23:22:40 +0000 UTC]

No, she doesn't pull the HOQWFBE out of a bag, the device was built into the van.
When she remotely triggers it, the top of the van opens up and a giant beam emitter thing pops up, which is why they can't use it until they get close.
As for the satchel, they will certainly use it during the chase.
They'll use mines, oil slicks, grenade launchers, gatling turrets, and all sorts of stuff to slow down their pursuers.
James would be on his dirtbike, so he'd probably give himself some sort of shotgun and wield it Terminator 2 style.
I don't think I'd need to use power of the chosen one here, but I might have them escape a particular situation by turning their vehicles temporarily into Bullet Bills (like in Mario Kart.)

I feel like this should be written in multiple chapters.

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karzonix In reply to rkane31174 [2017-04-30 23:41:58 +0000 UTC]

(Gets up amid a fit of laughter.) I think your right.

And James while doing so just casually gives himself a set of shades to complete the look. And just remember one thing for the chase: There can be no shortage of explosions. I wonder if when they first encounter Iridan, and she sees a potential easy meal out of James, he should have some kinda line like "Hands off my ride you'll scratch the paint off!" 

I love it. All of it. 

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rkane31174 In reply to karzonix [2017-05-01 00:44:49 +0000 UTC]

You're right, James MUST have sunglasses for that scene.
I'm not sure about the quantity of explosions, but their presence is assured.

I feel like I can write this, but it's going to take time.
I can't even say how long it'll take. My work is not consistent at all.

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karzonix In reply to rkane31174 [2017-05-01 00:48:45 +0000 UTC]

ah don't feel to self conscious. My work is the FARTHEST thing from consistent, it sometimes feels like I post something once in a full moon if you know what I mean.

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rkane31174 In reply to karzonix [2017-05-01 01:36:02 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean.

If you want, you can take a look at some of the other things I've written.
It might help you get a sense of my writing style and decide if I'm the right person for the job.

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karzonix In reply to rkane31174 [2017-05-01 02:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Well team Kickyerass sounds a lot like something akin to what James Walkers friends would call themselves. The writing style seems like what I'd imagine would fit, and the dialogue seems pretty reminiscent. Keep something in mind: James and his friends can be VERY abrasive. And some of their insults/catchphraises will probably come across as entirely outlandish.

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rkane31174 In reply to karzonix [2017-05-01 03:25:18 +0000 UTC]

The closest thing I've written to an abrasive character is Ol' Chuck.
In terms of the PMD2 fanfic, I plan on rewriting the earlier chapters to fit the characters better.
The rewritten first chapter and the fifth, sixth and seventh chapters are probably the best indicators of his character.

So how about it? Do you think I can pull this off?

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karzonix In reply to rkane31174 [2017-05-01 03:27:00 +0000 UTC]

I think it's totally up your alley. 

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rkane31174 In reply to karzonix [2017-05-01 03:41:05 +0000 UTC]

I can probably handle it, but as previously mentioned, it will be some time until it's done.
In the meantime, I'll watch you and let you know when I have any beta chapters you can read.

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karzonix In reply to rkane31174 [2017-05-01 04:22:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks bro, can't wait to see it.

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rkane31174 In reply to karzonix [2017-05-04 01:13:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh, a few things I forgot to ask about.

How does James first encounter Lily?
Does he encounter her somewhere? Or does she find him by investigating the noisy bike?
Also, how big is Lily? Is she massive too?

When Alex, Jodie, Ivan, and Henry are fishing, how many boats are they using?

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karzonix In reply to rkane31174 [2017-05-04 02:35:09 +0000 UTC]

The fishing foursome are all using one single fishing boat, big enough to fit all of them. (Perhaps for a bit of trivia, it was Alex's idea to use pieces from his tuna sandwich as bait, which worked, but Anko was seriously offended.)

As for James encountering Lily...
There doesn't really seem to be anything going around about how tall she is really, so I just assumed she was as big as other fairies in Felarya, which varies, as they apparently size-shift. So i'd probably settle on 100 feet. (In the words of James Walker, "HOLY CODFISH! LAY OFF THE PROTEIN DRINKS PAL!")

As for how he encounters her... I'd say he was just offroading, minding his own business, yipping and hollering with adrenaline rush when some other fairies that had size-shifted to insect size started pestering him, and he gunned it for what he thought was a much more open path. Unbeknownst to him, he was entering fairy territory. She probably heard the 4 stroke literally MILES away, and since I don't imagine dirt bikes to be popular in Felarya yet, the sound was completely foreign to her. So she went for a closer look. And she DID find the source of the noise, probably in kinda a low lit forest path where James was riding and whooping as hard as he could.

As for James? He only noticed her when she put a foot forward, and kinda tripped him and his bike if you will, sending him flying over the handlebars. Course, when he came out of the resulting daze, he went to pick up his bike and tell her off. ("YO GIGANTICA! YOU EVEN SEE ME COMING?! WATCH WHERE YOUR GOING NEXT TIME!") He realizes just then who he is talking smack to. 
 

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karzonix In reply to karzonix [2017-05-30 06:49:00 +0000 UTC]

(Another tiny piece of trivia just for shits and giggles: When Iridan takes the fishing foursome to her hideout, Henry is simply joyful to be back on the ground. "Listen Gigantica. I love big girls, I really do, but heights scare me absolutely half to death. So for the love of whatever Demons worship do NOT do that to me again, almost gave me a heart attack.")

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 04:58:56 +0000 UTC]

Greetings sir, and thanks for stopping by my little corner of DA. 

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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 05:09:21 +0000 UTC]

i'm jonathan. it's nice to meet you

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 05:11:30 +0000 UTC]

Karzonix is the name, you can call me Karz for short. And please. The honor is mine. 

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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 05:16:13 +0000 UTC]

i see. i'm a roleplayer, builder, spriter, drawer, writer, meme maker and the loud house fan.

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 05:19:49 +0000 UTC]

I myself am a roleplayer also on occasion, but I usually am a writer and manga-inspired artist who'd love to learn to animate. I can't really name anything I'm the hugest fan of, because I'd probably say I kinda like it all. Mostly because I drew many ideas from many different sources, to end up with the story you see on my page. 
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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 05:21:37 +0000 UTC]

i see. i understand

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 05:40:07 +0000 UTC]

Hell, you might see a trace of a loud house vibe in this. karzonix.deviantart.com/journa… A bit of a story concerning my central characters ancestor. 

Grew up in a family with no brothers, only many sisters. Ring any bells?

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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 05:41:25 +0000 UTC]

i see. so many sisters. he's kinda like lincoln loud

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 05:44:11 +0000 UTC]

Now imagine Lincolns face if he could hear that the premise of his life helped inspire the Legend of this colossal warrior. 

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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 05:44:42 +0000 UTC]

it looks kinda cool

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 05:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Course however, his tale is only one of many. And he was only the first of his line. 

His descendant, whom you probably have seen in work of mine that you faved. (Thanks BTW.) Has the kingdom of his ancestors to save, nothing to lose, and everything to gain. If he could only master himself though... 

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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 05:48:17 +0000 UTC]

i see. so wanna roleplay in comments or notes?

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 05:53:44 +0000 UTC]

Let me ask a question first. Are yours story based, like mine? (I do post apoc, sci fi, fantasy on occasion, the like. I'd LOVE to do a western themed one.) 

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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 05:55:17 +0000 UTC]

well my story is that i was adopted and sent to earth and trained by polokus from rayman then i live with lincoln and his sisters in the loud house plus i have the power of the ten tailed beast

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 06:05:15 +0000 UTC]

I have many OCs that I switch between at will. If you give me overnight, I could probably have a VERY sick western/post apoc RP for you to try out. I just need to sit on it a bit. Mostly the outlaw part. I got one, (Being Diamondback Johnny.) And so far, thats pretty much it. I got some ideas concerning a guy whose kinda "Western Hannibal Lecter."  

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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 06:06:10 +0000 UTC]

ok then well i have some OCs too

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 06:11:42 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to see how they fair on the Diamondbacks turf. Hssssssssssssssss....

Ah I'm too good. 

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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 06:12:49 +0000 UTC]

i see. wanna see them?

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 06:15:14 +0000 UTC]

dont see why not. 

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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 06:18:48 +0000 UTC]

jonathan the wizardman by funnytime77 Spline the dark trickster by funnytime77

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 06:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Diamondback Johnny smiles deviously. "Fascinating..."

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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 06:23:39 +0000 UTC]

thanks. ready?

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karzonix In reply to funnytime77 [2017-02-26 15:42:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm gonna probably have to draw a map later, because I'm gonna try and do this open world, but let me see if I can jut down a story first.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=JBkRe_…

Your journey takes place in the burning sands of the Midwestern Wasteland, which itself was once part of a powerful empire known to the world as The United Republic. Incessant war and brutal drought have dried up the oceans entirely, leaving only vast canyons and completely isolating your home. Both water and oil must be drilled for now, and fought for. Some have taken up arms over these precious resources, either to try and claim it for others, or for themselves. From settlement to settlement, rumors and whispers shoot back and forth like bullets of the terrifying outlaws who now govern this lawless land. 

That of course, is where you enter the equation. 

You, or whomever the west can call you, start in the northern desolation. Many, far and wide will need your help, especially those who live under the tyranny of the vicious criminals who now dominate every corner of the Midwest. And you can save them. It's just a question of courage. That if you can prove yourself not afraid to step toe to toe even with the sandsnake Diamondback Johnny himself. 

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funnytime77 In reply to karzonix [2017-02-26 16:02:09 +0000 UTC]

cool

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