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[2002-08-13 21:46:30 +0000 UTC]
"be nice"
(Cocos (Keeling) Islands)
# Statistics
Favourites: 13; Deviations: 7; Watchers: 91
Watching: 14; Pageviews: 19849; Comments Made: 369; Friends: 14
# Comments
Comments: 166
your deviations are in storage and i didn't save them to my computer and now i feel like i can't come back here. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE get back to me. i have to come back to these occasionally.
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King Vitamin - Have Breakfast with the King! I recall that ad from my childhood with great fondness. No better sugary cereal was ever sold to children. I once got three plastic snowmobile toys from boxes of that cereal. !
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thanks to you i started reading bear parade, tao lin, etc. and got published on 3 am.
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Hey, where are you now and what are you doing? I tell people about your poetry and piano playing quite often. It's nice to read some of your new stuff. Even if you have to do it yourself, you should try to get a book published.
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I hardly comment on anything anymore (and I have no excuse) but I thought I'd let you know, you've always been one of my favorite writers on this thing. Glad to see you've stuck around.
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i like your writing, reading it makes me want to write more too. ^_^
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I have become ever so mildly addicted to your writing, and had to comment! The imagery is wonderful. It jars, it flows and it feels right. I particularly like 'Untitled Sonnet 1'.
You will be avidly watched.
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~kingvitamin
adam
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HOORAH! congratulmalations!
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Your poetry is magnificent... or however you spell that word... keep 'em coming!
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and how are you, sir? Come out of that iron box and visit CH!
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ah, now i know why you suddenly started liking him.
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Yes, and that aliens are real and other such conspiracies.
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I was going to send along my comments on your poem from the suture workshop, but in looking back over them I actually covered everything noteworthy I said and then went beyond that in the discussion. If you need it I can still send it, I don't think there's anything new in it. <3
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You have an interesting style that I like a lot
I will stop typing this now.
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haha, that's entirely unexpected, but don't fret, it wasn't that good of a piece anyhow. Thank you for taking the time to read it in the first place.
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*sings* king vitamin... have breakfast with the king... king vitamin...
thanks for making me think of my father.
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I arrived on the scene a bit late, though it looks like you still poke around every so often. Wanted to say, I've been reading, and I have a great deal of respect for your work.
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your words are fresh and refreshing. please submit more of them.
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Hope you are alive and well, chum. Haven't seen you in a bit, just stopping by to wish the best.
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So, I finally got a list up and running for the Link of the Night. If you're not on it (as in, don't get this message, and you want to), shoot me a note, or leave a message or just somehow let me know. Same goes for the instance that you want off the list - please let me know.
Happiness , by .
The Interview , by .
Rusting Bridges of Suburbia , by .
So, I did some peruzing, and earthed up these three pieces.
Happiness is beautiful in its own simplicity, and has a subtle kick to it that I find lacking in a lot of reading these days.
The Interview is an interesting little for-the-stage piece that I found myself cracking up over, all over the place. There's some great humor and dialogue going on here, as well as some great subtle toss-ins for the actors to experiment with. Something I would love to see performed.
While Rusting Bridges of Suburbia might be a little ho-hum subject-wise, the rhythm and control of meter that ~ honestbrutality has accomplished here is impeccable. It takes a lot of practice and a lot of control of vocabulary to get a good rhythm in a slam piece these days, and it's done beautifully here.
Get writing, fuckos. *jesusbite
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I like what I see, what at a glance I can. Hope to return some day too.
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t hanking you greatly..
i naturally disagree with some points, but these stem largely from style.. the points on te sonnet were justified... and i've been wanting to work on it for a while..
the kick in hte teeth should help spur me to edit.
danke schon
danny
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