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3wka — The Legend of Ember - Night during the Day

Published: 2012-03-03 21:20:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 612; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 6
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Description So, after all this time, I've finally finished the next part of TLoE I hope you'll like it ^^


After a while, the sky turned black. It was even more dark then during the night. The whole village was ready and they just waited. Everyone was looking in the direction of the portal.

Rose: (whispering) I'ts starting to get scary.

Ember: (whispering) Don't worry, as soon as we see the dark dragons, we'll hide.

The village was silent, the dragons were standing still and kept on waiting. The silence was broken, when they saw the dark dragons in the horizon. Kyn quickly flew to Rose and Ember.

Kyn: You must hide! Now!

Ember and Rose: Ok!

They went back to the tent. Kyn turned around and looked at the black dragons with a lot of anger. After a few moments, Kyn shouted:
Attaaaaack!!! Don't let them reach the village! Show them no mercy!

Everyone charged without hesitating. As soon as the dark dragons spotted the villangers, they shot fireballs and toxic gas. The villangers noticed the attack in time, so they managed to dodge it and kept on charging, till they got close enough. Then the real battle begun. Every dragon started bitting, scratching and doing whatever they can to hold their position. But nobody noticed how two dragons slipped through. They flew to the village and started walking around and searching for something. The two dragons went from one tent to another, searching all of the tents. A bit later Kyn noticed them down there and flew down to check it out. The dark dragons were searching a tent and suddenly heard a voice.

Kyn: What do you think you're doing?

Dark dragon: It's non of your business!

Kyn: Since this is the village I live in, it makes it my business.

Dark dragon: I don't think you can stop us, so I'll tell you this - We're under the orders of Hade.

Kyn: Hade?! He's still alive?!

Dark dragon: Well what did you expect? He's our master - the master of Darkness! You can't get rid of him easily.

Kyn: (thinks) How can he still be alive? After all this time? What is that slimeball up to now?

Dark dragon: We can't waste any more time with this grandpa! We have to find Embe- *Gasps* He wasn't supposed to hear that...

Kyn: Ember? What do you want with him?

Dark dragon: Shut up old fool! You already know too much!

Right when he said that, his accomplice released a cloud of toxic gas, but Kyn was too close and got cought up in it. With his last breath, Kyn shouted:

EMBER!!! RUN!



*To be continued*

Well this part is pretty long Sorry that I've kept you waiting for so long...
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Comments: 28

Dragockon [2012-03-08 14:05:29 +0000 UTC]

Poor Kyn, still this is awesome! Really exiting too.

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3wka In reply to Dragockon [2012-03-08 14:17:37 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about Kyn I think I told too much already xD

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Dragockon In reply to 3wka [2012-03-08 14:51:24 +0000 UTC]

XD, Okay lol. Thats fine with me

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Krazzulimaii [2012-03-07 02:04:48 +0000 UTC]

Looks awesome

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3wka In reply to Krazzulimaii [2012-03-07 13:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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Krazzulimaii In reply to Krazzulimaii [2012-03-07 02:05:08 +0000 UTC]

The drawing, I mean. I haven't read it yet, but I bet it's good

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TUGABR [2012-03-05 22:50:23 +0000 UTC]

wow, beautiful drawing!

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3wka In reply to TUGABR [2012-03-06 13:31:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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Barrocco [2012-03-04 23:45:46 +0000 UTC]

interesting ... :3
I am wondering what will happen next

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3wka In reply to Barrocco [2012-03-05 10:10:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad it's interesting ^^ I'll try to submit the next part as soon as I can

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Barrocco In reply to 3wka [2012-03-06 00:40:52 +0000 UTC]

Looking forward to that.

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Otterpop-YT [2012-03-04 00:59:52 +0000 UTC]

This is great. I'm loving the story even more now!

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3wka In reply to Otterpop-YT [2012-03-04 08:26:49 +0000 UTC]

Glad to hear it ^^

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Universe12 [2012-03-03 21:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Looks good and the story is nice. Though, you could 'spice it up' with some better descriptions.

If you want, you can note me the description details and I can improve it a little. Also, I now tricks in commenting so I can do things like this: Hello Hello Hello

So. I can italiicize (forgot how to spell it exactly ) the words when someone speaks and all.

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3wka In reply to Universe12 [2012-03-03 21:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Well, this part took me some time just because it had a battle scene, where a lot of dragons took action, so I've gone over my head many time to come up with a way to write it...

Well, now you can just copy the story part, make those effects and send it to me. I'll see what comes of it

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Universe12 In reply to 3wka [2012-03-03 21:50:41 +0000 UTC]

Well, ok but I will change the wording to improve it but the general idea will be the same.

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3wka In reply to Universe12 [2012-03-03 21:51:26 +0000 UTC]

ok

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Universe12 In reply to 3wka [2012-03-03 21:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Gie me about 15 minutes before I finish it.

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3wka In reply to Universe12 [2012-03-03 21:52:55 +0000 UTC]

Okay

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skaidragon [2012-03-03 21:39:58 +0000 UTC]

nice

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3wka In reply to skaidragon [2012-03-03 21:40:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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skaidragon In reply to 3wka [2012-03-03 21:42:21 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome and please check out my dragons!

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iiDragonfantasyArt [2012-03-03 21:30:04 +0000 UTC]

I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT PART JGREIOPKEWF This is an AWESOME story !

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3wka In reply to iiDragonfantasyArt [2012-03-03 21:32:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ I have a lot of work on my shoulders , so I'll just try to finish it as soon as I can

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iiDragonfantasyArt In reply to 3wka [2012-03-03 21:37:07 +0000 UTC]

take your time! :3

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Phineas7Stephany [2012-03-03 21:23:33 +0000 UTC]

;O AWESOME!

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3wka In reply to Phineas7Stephany [2012-03-03 21:25:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks You like the story?

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Phineas7Stephany In reply to 3wka [2012-03-03 21:47:03 +0000 UTC]

I do!! it better than mine!! lol!

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