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Now this is beautiful. Took me a while to find out the meaning behind the critique categories in FAQ, so hopefully this'll be more accurate.
For a start, I'd give "impact" a high mark. My first impression of the visual is pretty good - exterior, interior (ie: cockpit), lighting, and the overall frame, including colors. It looks like it fits the main character's ship in a video game. There doesn't seem to be a "vision" or a particular "theme" in the picture. It's a generic, technical spaceship with a color palette. It could be just the STG fan in me making me uncertain on how to rate "originality".
I said before that you have a good grasp on aerodynamics and how to make these fighters/shuttle, so technique is high. This doesn't look too intricate; not sure how to rate it accurately. It almost looks like the last one I critiqued, but that's not a bad thing.
I think what lowers the originality (?) and impact scores is the pale background, but don't let that bother you. This is above concept art. This is complete art showing you the aircraft and that you have a good grasp on how to make them.
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Oh man...because of the vision rating, you got a 3 star?!
I wouldn't even give you that.
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It almost impossible to have a meaningful background with the current composition, the blend background is what this would look in real life. I think we should agree I do this for art, not aerodynamic engineering, I had to know the construct just so I can use them in making artistic designs. My interest is in fictional spaceships, not those things in real world.
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Thanks for telling me 4X. It's okay!
A design is a design, and is a great design that makes its point. For art, you're good with the aerodynamics. It is the shape that makes the shuttle distinct and important. Even if its art, you know how everything is placed.
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I was trying to design based on the old game, in the lure, this spacecraft can submerge, this could explain the bulky shape, as it shared both characteristic of plane and sub. I know its not realistic, but I believe that is the pointΒ Β The problem is this kind design are meant to look from a distance, when the ship does not take up most of the screen. But I guess art is still mostly subjective, some people like it this way. I like things streamlined, not a fan of the angular mechs.
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I think you are right, this is a good piece of work that received disproportionately less likes compare to my other stuff.
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Yeah it sad when that happens at least t did better than some other artists l know. Theyake this breath taking works but barely make it past 5 favs.
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Talk about underrated, this is my most difficult work so far and no one seems like it, as much as like other stuff that I didn't put this amount of effort.
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I wonder why the art looks great
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That opinion can be subjective I think.
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Yeah it could be subjective.
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Art works in mysterious ways, some idiot says its a science.
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l like to think of it as somethingΒ people decide for themselves.Β
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TBH art is a human behavior that is not fully understood
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perhaps that's why its so fun
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Yeah 
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I have more things that need to finish than time to finish them XD too many ideas to take care of.
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take the game project offering. pursuing your dream that is important
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not really. ε°π·more important
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It is like Axelay and R-Type have a baby.
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I don't play any games, but I love the way you draw jets, ships, crafts, techie stuff!
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This is something I wanted to draw sense:Β Β but did not had the skill to express the concept effectively.
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