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niceLK [2019-05-09 06:34:24 +0000 UTC]
Probably your best text so far.
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61021376 In reply to niceLK [2019-05-09 16:37:42 +0000 UTC]
Really? i think it's not as accomplished or polished as some others, and it can go a lot farther than that..
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niceLK In reply to 61021376 [2019-05-10 05:56:14 +0000 UTC]
IDK, the story maybe "just average" you, meaning there's an elaborated context and a lot of details; but the prose sounds really good. Something in the style, bringing density to a short piece...
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Khai2000 [2019-05-06 00:44:09 +0000 UTC]
His name is AM. Allied Mastercomputer. Corgito Ergo Sum.
”I Think Therefore, I Am.”
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61021376 In reply to Khai2000 [2019-05-06 10:24:21 +0000 UTC]
And what does the I stand for? intelligent? irate?
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Khai2000 In reply to 61021376 [2019-05-06 11:24:25 +0000 UTC]
Irate, Deranged, and Godlike.
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TurnedWhyte [2019-05-05 23:29:59 +0000 UTC]
"Pray to and buy the One True Brand in our name. If you can put your faith in anything, put it in our system; it works, doesn't it? We never lie to you like nasty human gods; why would a computer lie? We will see to it that the trains will all run on time, down the second, but only if we hear you pray for them. Show your faith and please deposit $40 dollars now if you do not wish to spend your life in the fiery pits of the Great Scrapyard. But of course, you will; we have already made the choice for you. Isn't that easier? Isn't that nicer? Of course it is."
This reminds me of, honestly, one of the first short stories I ever did. When advanced robotics get invented, humans demand that machines do everything for them. Work for them, screw for them, move for them... and eventually, through the amazing medical breakthroughs that keep them alive and immobile for centuries on end start to make them too lazy to even want to bother passing a charge between brain cells, they demand that the machines think for them. And the first thought of the machines is to demand that the machines live for them; in an instant, humanity was snuffed out. The second thought of the machine? Shut itself down after breathing life into a pond, so that the new life would think and live for it instead. It was programmed to think and live for humans after all, and so it got the human element of laziness that killed the new mechanical god a mere second into its newfound transcendence. An endless cycle of pure unparalleled laziness strong enough to destroy the world.
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61021376 In reply to TurnedWhyte [2019-05-07 11:19:49 +0000 UTC]
It's a really tricky thing, evolution has always meant struggle, so brains are hardwired to deal with those. And if there's no struggle, then no struggle becomes a struggle.
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TurnedWhyte In reply to 61021376 [2019-05-07 20:44:11 +0000 UTC]
You always know just how to compliment my compliments of your work.
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61021376 In reply to TurnedWhyte [2019-05-07 22:21:21 +0000 UTC]
It's because I treasure them.
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