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Xenoblivion [2019-04-20 07:50:37 +0000 UTC]
thats pretty deep stuff. Well when the dime turns it can be fatal i suppose. I liked the art work keep up the good small series!
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rary200000 [2019-03-14 15:43:48 +0000 UTC]
Ah the girl scout. Such a cute uniform.
We don't see enough girl scouts because school girls over take them.
(Not that I don't like school girls it's just that we need more girls in scout uniforms. (No not sailor scout like uniforms.)
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KritterDefier [2019-03-12 16:00:05 +0000 UTC]
Hehehe well sometimes that's the way the bridge collapses :3
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rary200000 In reply to KritterDefier [2019-03-14 15:44:38 +0000 UTC]
Sorry didn't mean to reply to you. Have a nice day.
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ArticJane [2019-03-12 05:31:23 +0000 UTC]
They both look rather stuck ^^
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bswitzer In reply to ArticJane [2019-03-12 13:35:17 +0000 UTC]
maybe they will go under and pass through an iris valve into th underground lair complex where the a20 version of lilim is waiting for them
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xdarkwingY [2019-03-12 05:20:56 +0000 UTC]
just 30 seconds~ wheres the sinking fun at that >w<
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bswitzer In reply to xdarkwingY [2019-03-12 12:02:33 +0000 UTC]
yes i t is a bit fast maybe we'll get when toby or a patron commission a in between segments like 1.2,1,5,1.8,2.3 2.5 2.8 ect to stagger the sinking if you like that idea put some money to commission it to come true may a kickstrater or a go fund me ect
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xdarkwingY In reply to bswitzer [2019-03-12 16:02:00 +0000 UTC]
..i was actuallyy jsut bragging about the story beignw rittent hat it was 30 seconds, what we saw up there could have been 20 minutes~
would make more sense and enjoyment in my opinion.
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Syrtonin [2019-03-12 03:19:18 +0000 UTC]
Beguilingly revealing how handsome these girls are for this river mud to embrace! Nice understated suggestion of the mud's catching of their little skirts and its massive yield around their continually sinking thighs! I hope for a happy ending that plants the seeds for Toby's and Terry's capacities to experience the pleasures of sinking in deep mud!
Wonderful old story!
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bswitzer [2019-03-12 02:46:25 +0000 UTC]
hmmm part 6 Jodie finds them and they find a way to drag her in too
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KappaJoe In reply to bswitzer [2019-03-12 23:16:47 +0000 UTC]
I think she's still stuck in Alenonimo's PSA
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Yellowmuk842 [2019-03-12 01:03:05 +0000 UTC]
Disappointing end but I'm not gonna mock the commissioner for this.
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MartyBubbles In reply to Yellowmuk842 [2019-03-25 00:10:06 +0000 UTC]
It sounds like you're saying you would rather know for sure whether they perish or are rescued, instead of leaving the ending ambiguous.
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Jeuretics In reply to Yellowmuk842 [2019-03-13 17:54:23 +0000 UTC]
What's disappointing about it?
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bswitzer In reply to Jeuretics [2019-03-14 01:25:32 +0000 UTC]
there magic skirts ,there lack of panchira (pantys) maybe? but then it might of the commissioners wish, though I do wish there skirts should billow a bit under the quicksand or in mid fall to allow for mild fanservice that might be yellows gripe if it is he should patron a commision
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