Comments: 6
restrikt [2003-06-12 03:23:12 +0000 UTC]
first two lines of the last stanza....... i loved those lines...... really can relate.
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fifthdivision [2003-06-01 05:20:44 +0000 UTC]
I liked some parts of it, but write something more gory.
Like you ripping the arms of a 6 year old girl, kicking her unconcious, and then raping her.
Now there's something worth reading.
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crazee-diamond [2003-05-30 08:44:02 +0000 UTC]
Very very cool, man. Sounds like it's finished to me. Be careful what you show to teachers though... they always end up calling social services and making you take phycological evaluations and shit. Not fun. Rock on...
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a14 [2003-05-28 23:45:08 +0000 UTC]
Hmm.... I wonder what the hell went wrong. just a sec
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coshdaddy [2003-05-28 23:44:31 +0000 UTC]
hmmm.... it didnt seem to load up
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americean2k [2003-05-28 20:01:10 +0000 UTC]
you wrote this for your english teacher? its um.. a design
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