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Published: 2004-08-01 08:31:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 288; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 13
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Description Was reading Picture of Dorian Gray, fell in love with Sybil Vane's charachter, decided to b estupidly romantic and write a poem
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Comments: 6

hajian [2004-08-10 19:58:12 +0000 UTC]

salam siyavash khan
chetori?

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RonnieKray [2004-08-02 19:46:43 +0000 UTC]

dont make excuses for yourself.. hahaha..
i fucking love this.. why? because i fucking love you! fucking of course.. no other way..

hahahha.. fav fav.

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melisa [2004-08-02 14:43:28 +0000 UTC]

On lines 2 and 3, should that not be your instead of you? The lines seem extremely hard of flow with the word you.

This piece is really beautiful and has rather encourage me to seek out and possible consider reading this book myself. I might also recommend to you, Rebecca by Daphne du Maurier. I've read that selection many times and have always found new reasons to pick it up yet again. From your words here and elsewhere, I believe it may be as inspiring to you as others have been in the past.

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abderezai In reply to melisa [2004-08-02 17:55:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much on the constructive comments and critisisms, yes, i admit my grammer is terrible (english not my first language, but no excuses!) and i usually dont write too much poetry, but keep the critisicms coming!

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melisa In reply to abderezai [2004-08-02 18:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Considering that English is not your first language (which I did not know then)... I'm extremely amazed. There are very few bilingual individuals that I know who can use a secondary language successfully in an artful manner.

Truly a great accomplishment.

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abderezai In reply to melisa [2004-08-02 19:14:59 +0000 UTC]

well, ive read wenough and all, plus my mom is american, though i was born and raised in iran. Still, most of what i know in english is through movies, and reading. I dont have much of an accent when i speak, but they lapse at times... eh, well.

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