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Published: 2014-08-09 21:28:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 829; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 24
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a quicky remake of this picture:ΒΒ
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If magic is fire, then quoting BlackGryph0n, "All I have to do to be magic is set my hair on fire"!
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that's probably not too healthy <_<Β
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Who needs health? IΒ΄ll be magic!
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well... you can't be magic if you're dead
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This requires the intervention of the Necronomicon!
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so... a pony lich then? Β Actually, this is a pretty cool idea...Β
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If MLP keeps getting this dark have no doubt weΒ΄ll be seeing it soon
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to have an undead for for them to fight, now that would be pretty awesome 
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The jawline is fine, but the eye is too close to the other, and her snout it too big. It makes her look like a duck a bit 
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I'll learn eventually
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First off, it's a definite improvement in most areas especially from a remake perspective. However, agreeing with Krieger, the facial structure is a little off-putting. I'm not sure if it's the jawline or the curvature of the snout but something seems off.
As a separate note, what is happening with her hair that is causing it to centralize around being blown from the back of her left eye? It's not bad (in fact, I think it looks neat) but it just drew my attention that it isn't laying in a "localized" area of natural hair. (Wow that's wordy; I hope you understand and I'm not making a jerk of myself)
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Her face looks ok to me, but I guess it could be better.Β
As for her hair... the idea was that she is turning her head while backing away or something like that and with that motion in mind I just marked which parts of her mane would flow in which direction... and then I turned off the sketch because it was getting in the way... in other words, I have no idea what's going n there either <_<Β
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Nnnnng....
It's better, specially the hair. I also like better this way of making the horn.
The facial structure, though...
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well, what is it? If you won't tell me I won't be able to fix it in the future
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The snout curves upwards. When you open your mouth, the jaw goes down, but the rest of the head remains on the same place.
Andtually, she's not even opening her mouth, she's just retracting her lips.
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yeah, I guess I see what you mean now, you're right I slightly overdid it.Β
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Very nice! A huge improvement on your older work.
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