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aeravi In reply to ??? [2007-06-23 20:09:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you
what does this image communicate to you?

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EMelious In reply to aeravi [2007-06-24 03:17:38 +0000 UTC]

she's beautiful and everything but there is something missing... she is lonely

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aeravi In reply to EMelious [2007-09-20 09:16:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the feedback!

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gothictweetybird11 [2007-06-16 05:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Nice I like it.

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aeravi In reply to gothictweetybird11 [2007-06-23 20:08:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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gothictweetybird11 In reply to aeravi [2007-06-25 12:36:59 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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SteOS [2007-06-12 10:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Stunning! Absolutly great! The shadows looking perfect!

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aeravi In reply to SteOS [2007-06-12 15:50:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Discarn8 [2007-05-29 16:17:54 +0000 UTC]

As usual, quite likeable! *grin*

The shadow mottlling your model is an interesting touch. Her odd (can't think of any other word for it) pose is good enough to fool the eye at first - no clear body to fit - and then as you look a little closer, she pops up. This is especially true in the thumb - that scale to me looks almost like an accident with spray paint! *wry grin*

That's not to say the picture's not as technically competent as usual - it is. Good sharp focus and appropriate depth of field. It's just the artist's eye finding good 'messiness' in nature, and finding a way to use it in an interesting and creative manner.

Good show!

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aeravi In reply to Discarn8 [2007-05-29 21:50:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks once again for the wonderfully thoughtful advanced crit

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Discarn8 In reply to aeravi [2007-05-30 02:32:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks once again for the wonderful art to crit! *chuckle* & *hug*

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retrocat [2007-05-27 08:21:18 +0000 UTC]

That's a great place

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aeravi In reply to retrocat [2007-05-29 21:28:12 +0000 UTC]

it really is... i found it by driving around backroads a bit, and then hiking up a large hill... the top was magic, i fell in love right away.

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SalimZaidi [2007-05-25 04:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice..

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aeravi In reply to SalimZaidi [2007-05-29 21:27:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you
what does this image communicate to you?

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SalimZaidi In reply to aeravi [2007-05-30 04:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Well, first of all.. thank you for asking me "my" opinion.. (as taking me seriously! hhmm.. i feel a pro already! )

there are a lot of good things about the photograph.. and then there are some that cud have been better.

Good:~

1. the overall tone and contrast is constant and same throughout the image.. no highlights shining more or dark spots acting as black-holes! lol

2. the "shadow play" has also a simple and same pattern, so u have the shadows all over the image and not only on some parts of the image.

3. the colour / tone works with the type of shot here.

Bad/Cud be better:~

1. the model is in a way, "invisible, and is not showing apart from the tree.. She is not prominent and one can spot her after looking at the pic more closely.

2. MAYBE.. if it was a lower angle, and you showed more of the top of the tree (from below.. ) it wud be good as the girl is looking above and it wud lead the viewer to see "UP"

... what this image conveys me or communicates to me... well, i treat it as a work of art as there has been a planned effort and hardwork into making this. I think it is a good photograph.. and if you can try again to shoot it.. lets see if it gets better!?!

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aeravi In reply to SalimZaidi [2007-05-30 09:55:50 +0000 UTC]

1 - thanks!
2 -
3 - thanks

1 - it works for and against the image, if that makes sense.
2- hmmmm... yes, that would certainly be nice

well, maybe shoot it with another model on another day... it was quite the drive and hike to get there, and i don't think i'll bring the same person up again... but if i do use this spot before i go to japan, i'll do a different angled shot!

thank you

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Skankalicious [2007-05-18 00:45:51 +0000 UTC]

You did such an amazing job!!!!! Its so origional!!! you did a great job with the contrast yet it all still seems to blend in.
amazing picture i dont know if im making any sence but its one of the best ive ever seen *speachless*

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aeravi In reply to Skankalicious [2007-05-19 00:18:50 +0000 UTC]

wow! thank you!

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Skankalicious In reply to aeravi [2007-05-19 03:18:25 +0000 UTC]

no problem. I love all of your work. I wish i was as talented. I look at all your work, if there was alot of stuff i missed commenting its because i have 910 more devinations to look at. Ill get to the eventualy ;]

~Nicole

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Glasses-chan [2007-05-17 08:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Very pretty, the pose is perfect and she looks like she's a part of the scenery.

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aeravi In reply to Glasses-chan [2007-05-19 00:17:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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mrbadguy7 [2007-05-15 23:40:11 +0000 UTC]

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aeravi In reply to mrbadguy7 [2007-05-19 00:17:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you!
what do you like about this pic?

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mrbadguy7 In reply to aeravi [2007-05-19 06:22:34 +0000 UTC]

it's an amazing shot..
like the B&W and the tree(make the shot full of action).

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aeravi In reply to mrbadguy7 [2007-05-21 05:38:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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djberry [2007-05-15 22:58:55 +0000 UTC]

Nice tones and contrasts.

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aeravi In reply to djberry [2007-05-19 00:16:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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rbogas [2007-05-15 22:18:26 +0000 UTC]

You just keep surprising me... what a superb work, fascinating...

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aeravi In reply to rbogas [2007-05-19 00:16:18 +0000 UTC]

that's very kind, thanks!
i'm curious, what's surprising about it? is it different from my other work?

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rbogas In reply to aeravi [2007-05-19 13:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I've felt something different in this piece but I can't define what... it's better though.

By the way, how are you?

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aeravi In reply to rbogas [2007-05-21 05:36:36 +0000 UTC]

i'm good. visiting family in colorado. it's nice to take a break from work, though family can be stressful. my in-laws are really nice, i just don't always know how to be... but all-in-all a relaxing time. and some great quality time with my husband.

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rbogas In reply to aeravi [2007-05-23 21:54:09 +0000 UTC]

It's very important the good times passed with family, specially the one we love.

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inventedeye [2007-05-15 16:44:39 +0000 UTC]

Nice work.

It feels like a secret place.

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aeravi In reply to inventedeye [2007-05-19 00:15:10 +0000 UTC]

it is
thank you

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kaheljust [2007-05-15 16:02:29 +0000 UTC]

i'm really not that good in photo commenting, but dang, this pic is really eye catching the setting is really great! as in! yeah... really nice

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aeravi In reply to kaheljust [2007-05-19 00:14:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Carbonne [2007-05-15 14:55:03 +0000 UTC]

Very nice and so "Vintage". I think at Greta Garbo Ava Gardner or Ingrid Bergman.
Aeravi you are a Artist....

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aeravi In reply to Carbonne [2007-05-19 00:14:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Maxteg [2007-05-15 13:30:54 +0000 UTC]

very lovely shot, great pose

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aeravi In reply to Maxteg [2007-05-19 00:13:38 +0000 UTC]

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archnophobia [2007-05-15 10:37:44 +0000 UTC]

nice
good work
love the tree, the girl, the rock.

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aeravi In reply to archnophobia [2007-05-19 00:13:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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lawrencew [2007-05-15 09:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm.. agree with the "ginuse" comment.. figure tends to get a little lost but I reckon that cropping the model across the knees actually may work in your favour..

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aeravi In reply to lawrencew [2007-05-15 09:54:52 +0000 UTC]

cropping along the knees? how do you mean?

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lawrencew In reply to aeravi [2007-05-15 10:21:58 +0000 UTC]

..horizontally, above..

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aeravi In reply to lawrencew [2007-05-19 00:12:42 +0000 UTC]

i like the rock...

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fahap [2007-05-15 09:37:30 +0000 UTC]

wow cool, love the composition and the posture... beautiful

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aeravi In reply to fahap [2007-05-15 09:54:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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ginuse [2007-05-15 07:19:45 +0000 UTC]

hi
nature gives so hudge quota of details
so to show a person in a nature its really dificult job. this happend in this photo the tree and the gras are very competitive to a person. her body desapear in noise of nature elements.
it happends many time to me till i relased this thing.
nontheless all this thing it's still interesting

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