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As promised, this is the NEW page 17, an inserted page between the old 16 and 17.

I had actually planned this dialogue in the script beforehand - but cut it out in my original run. I decided it needed to be put back in though - especially since some people were confused with the transition to the ox and birds.

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Comments: 25

Splotchie [2017-01-17 00:30:52 +0000 UTC]

Lol, this reminded me of a comedy skit I heard the other day, "explaining" increases to somebody's phone bill with irrelevant non-sequiturs.

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DarkTitan456 [2013-01-23 02:39:36 +0000 UTC]

i like it so far

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owlbum [2011-10-07 21:56:05 +0000 UTC]

LOL you put two commas where it said "UMMMM" XD

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Khima-Inez [2011-06-07 12:51:23 +0000 UTC]

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SilverRohirrim [2010-12-27 23:55:05 +0000 UTC]

So... totally... AWESOME!!
I love the story! And you guy's drawings are spectacular!
Shorten it to: You've earned a fan.

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wolfworld [2010-06-27 20:55:09 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Loved it!

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mooing-duckerberry [2009-10-06 03:26:01 +0000 UTC]

I love how quickly Kotu can transition from serious and thoughtful to excited and naive. You did a good job giving him a childlike spirit. Does he grow up in this comic? Or, more specifically, does he grow out of that?

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akeli In reply to mooing-duckerberry [2009-10-06 21:00:29 +0000 UTC]

He grows up believably He will become adult probably in the next issue (though he still has a few things to do as a child). He is a fairly serious, determined and quiet character. Thank you!

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Sm1tZ [2009-10-04 10:55:39 +0000 UTC]

i remember seeing this on your livestream. It looks wonderful as a complete page ^^

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louizim [2009-10-04 02:27:45 +0000 UTC]

The background looks amazing!

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Hyena27 [2009-10-03 23:39:59 +0000 UTC]

yay for a new page it looks really good

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HeWhoWalksWithTigers [2009-10-03 18:29:45 +0000 UTC]

Another great page... It was a good add, I think.

I find the landscape especially impressive in this.

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Dragon-lover15 [2009-10-03 18:02:30 +0000 UTC]

looks great

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Falcolf [2009-10-03 17:49:50 +0000 UTC]

Gah Kotu is so fluffy! I'm glad you added in this page, it really does smoothen it out a bit and gives us another cute moment between these two. Also, I love that mountain. I want to hike up it.

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Windshade888 [2009-10-03 15:33:57 +0000 UTC]

always so cute and playfule drawings ^^

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iKeilidh [2009-10-03 14:02:23 +0000 UTC]

One grammar mistake, you're put two commas after 'wheel' in the seond panel instead of one.

However, as always the art is stunning. I love how you can have a semi reaistic style and still be able to pack such great expressions into your characters.

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akeli In reply to iKeilidh [2009-10-03 20:56:15 +0000 UTC]

Ah you're right! They should be an ellipsis, actually, my bad! Thanks

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Ocrienna [2009-10-03 13:24:49 +0000 UTC]

i can't wait for more! ^_^

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squireheart [2009-10-03 13:16:35 +0000 UTC]

love it x3

you always do well with your art, and i enjoy the versity of your abilities. You can draw just about and animal well, and wagons and backgrounds and probably everything else.

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Kalrach [2009-10-03 13:16:02 +0000 UTC]

I love this comic! The detail and color is so eye catching probably takes forever to get on page done. Not saying you're updating takes to long...XD But seriously, amazing work. Please continue!

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Dremagon [2009-10-03 11:32:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm always taken back by the amount of detail in this comic! The panel layout is very professional here and this inserted page definitely smooths the transition to the old page 17. I'm really loving this comic!

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MaftetArt [2009-10-03 09:48:49 +0000 UTC]

It is magnificent! It is a pity that I badly know English

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Lora-Pedigree [2009-10-03 09:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful draw, and interesting story. ^^

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EveningOwl [2009-10-03 09:27:54 +0000 UTC]

I'll never get over how adorable Kotu is ♥
Amazing as always Akeli!

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GlassHalFull [2009-10-03 08:44:58 +0000 UTC]

It Looks Really Good!!!!
The Grass Looks Awesome And How The Last Panel Covers The Whole Page.
That Was A Fun Stream, Lol.

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