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Published: 2009-10-14 08:52:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 67234; Favourites: 785; Downloads: 422
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Don't worry, you're not supposed to be able to read what Jaireth and Tyr are saying
PS - I'm going to edit the 5th panel so he looks younger
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"Stay where we can see you." so he goes straight into the long grass. Perfect!
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well it was '' stay where you can see us'' so no worries xD
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He still can't see them over the long grass. Either way, neither of them can see each other over the long grass.
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well he could just stretch a bit and he would. or jump or whatever. nvm
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Look, the joke's lost now, so stop kicking the dead horse.
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I dont see how that was a joke anyway.
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Its a little dry humour, I apologise.
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Trying...to...make-out... what....they're...saying...in..the..bg! 
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argghhhh *shrivels up and dies*
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I like how you changed fonts with Tyr. Does he have an...accent of some sort?
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This is a REALLY beautiful comic!!! Keep up the great work!!!
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I thought he suddenly looked older O.o
Oh, well. It is probaly just me x3
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I know it's not supposed to be legible, but I can't help but wonder. What are Jaireth and Tyr saying? xD
I mean, did you just write down random stuff and shrink it? Or casual conversation stuff?
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Read the artist's comments 
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lol, I found myself inches away from the computer screen trying to figure what they might be saying ^^
Awesome job
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this is just getting better and better! love the last panel!
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Are Jaireth and Tyr actually saying something or did you just type in random stuff? XD
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LOL. You know, I actually tried to read what Jarieth and Tyr were saying. I feel like a fail.
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You know, these comics are pretty colourful and lively to look at, as I say so myself.
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But what are they saying? I would lul if it's just, "a;sldkfja;sldkfja;sldkfja;sldkfj" or something HAHA.
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lol, have you actually wrote something in the speech bubbles?
Or just jibberish?
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Wow, his hunting pose is *BAM*!!
Right on!
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Geez. Those tiny little speech bubbles make me think of those websites where people's avatars talk quite literally in speech bubbles. Conversations are confusing when it's like that, the bubbles take forever to fade.
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Wow, how in the world do you color digitally like that? Do you have a coloring tutorial possibly? I'd love to learn ^.^
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thanx for the links, i was getting tired of the back button^^
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Wow this is beautiful. Kotu does look older.. but I dont understand on how you will make him "younger." i guess ill find out next time you upload then =3
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Kotu does look older in this page. but very nice, non the less (spelling?).
But as usual, the comic is eye filling, and very well-made.
The last scene is very good and it gives us a certain suspense to whats happening next, witch is good in every kind of story.
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I love the layout of this page; it makes me think something surprising is going to happen on the next page. I love suspense like that. xD The different fonts for (I'm assuming) different accents is a nice touch as well and, all in all, your anatomy is wonderful. The only thing that bothers me slightly with this is that Jaireth's muzzle in panels 3 and 4 look too short for the angle (It looks more like a felines to me). I tried to find some photos to illustrate the length better but all I could find was [link] which isn't quite the angle so I did a small red line if that was ok. [link] (The second was me dragging the muzzle a little to the right because I wasn't sure the red line was clear. 
It's just a small thing though; I'm looking forward to reading more pages as always. ^^
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Lovely! You even got the arch of the shoulderblades into that last panel!
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Lol, did you actually put stuff in the mini mini word bubbles for mutant people with freak eyes?
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