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DawnDewdrop [2014-02-08 22:09:56 +0000 UTC]
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!
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kerske13 [2012-03-31 20:39:21 +0000 UTC]
u must finish this is wonderful so far
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kerske13 In reply to ALS123 [2012-04-01 05:07:49 +0000 UTC]
can't what u draw basil amazingly
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Hawk-Moth [2011-09-27 05:27:38 +0000 UTC]
More words, I love it!
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PrincessFirefox21 [2011-09-26 21:03:15 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh This is getting good!
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jdahl3d [2011-09-26 11:43:39 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done as usual
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jdahl3d In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-27 09:57:30 +0000 UTC]
you're very welcome
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Brinatello [2011-09-26 07:21:08 +0000 UTC]
I think you've made it very clear that Basil is in thinking mode. I also like the fact that you added in action lines for the up close view of his hand in his pocket. It shows he's making the movement of pulling out the piece of evidence to look it over. Without those lines, it would look like just a view of his hand in his pocket. Again like page 1, I was hoping to see some narration of his POV or general third person, but silence is okay, too.
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