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Published: 2011-09-26 04:22:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 2558; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 34
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Well, I was gonna wait since I just uploaded page 1, but I'm just too darn excited!

So here he is, Basil of Baker Street, the Great Mouse Detective himself! Um, I hope I made it clear what he's doing. If not, he's supposed to be walking home thinking about a case he's working on, and he pulls out a piece of evidence from his pocket to examine it again. You'll find out later what it is

So, did I go a little heavy with the shadows? That's something I been trying to work on too.

And WHY must it be so hard to get Basil's frontal view right?! All I can say is I have a newfound respect for those animators

Page 1: fav.me/d4aydw4
Page 2: You're lookin at it
Page 3: Coming soon!

The Great Mouse Detective and its characters are (c) Eve Titus and Disney
Story and other characters (c) me

EDIT: I added some text to show Basil's thoughts on this page and the previous page, and I also toned down the colors on the paper because it was a bit glaring on the eyes Thank you everyone for the suggestions! I appreciate them!

EDIT #2: Sorry guys, but I think I've decided to discontinue this comic as I'm currently busy working on "Echoes in the Night." BUT I am turning this into a fic called "A Tangled Web," so I will continue the story

EDIT #3: Read the fic here instead als123.deviantart.com/art/A-Ta…

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Comments: 44

DawnDewdrop [2014-02-08 22:09:56 +0000 UTC]

MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

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kerske13 [2012-03-31 20:39:21 +0000 UTC]

u must finish this is wonderful so far

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ALS123 In reply to kerske13 [2012-04-01 02:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks so much. I took a temporary break from it to finish another story I was working on, but it's almost finished so hopefully I can start back on this comic again soon

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kerske13 In reply to ALS123 [2012-04-01 05:07:49 +0000 UTC]

can't what u draw basil amazingly

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OpticBlast00 [2011-09-27 23:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work! I'll be following this comic.

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ALS123 In reply to OpticBlast00 [2011-09-28 03:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks so much!

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OpticBlast00 In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-28 04:17:14 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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jdahl3d [2011-09-27 13:14:20 +0000 UTC]

I am so exited for a full release

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Martinator42 [2011-09-27 12:01:37 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, can't wait for more! Already captured my interest.

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ALS123 In reply to Martinator42 [2011-09-28 03:42:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm so glad people are actually interested! I'm so excited to finish it!

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Martinator42 In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-28 13:01:55 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Hawk-Moth [2011-09-27 05:27:38 +0000 UTC]

More words, I love it!

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ALS123 In reply to Hawk-Moth [2011-09-28 03:40:37 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you! Glad you like it!

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crazyfull [2011-09-27 03:35:03 +0000 UTC]

I wish see the next, i can't wait!!! XD Awesome work here my friend

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ALS123 In reply to crazyfull [2011-09-27 04:26:23 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks so much! Glad you like it!

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crazyfull In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-27 05:32:34 +0000 UTC]

of course i like it. I'm not a Basil's fan ( imma jake's fan ) but this is an exelent work

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ALS123 In reply to crazyfull [2011-09-27 05:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks! I'm a fan of Jake too! He was always my favorite character from the Rescuers

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crazyfull In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-27 05:43:57 +0000 UTC]

I f**ing agree with ya !!! ... imma roleplayer with this roo mouse...

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ALS123 In reply to crazyfull [2011-09-27 05:48:40 +0000 UTC]

Haha awesome! Aw, now I'm wanting to go watch the movie...it's been ages since I seen it!

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crazyfull In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-27 05:55:02 +0000 UTC]

LOL...EXELENT! i'm a stupid old guy who was his first stupid crush back there in the 90's. And guess who was my stupid crush??? LMAO ...Even today LOL so sorry plz i'm a bit sick on my mind

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PrincessFirefox21 [2011-09-26 21:03:15 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh This is getting good!

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ALS123 In reply to PrincessFirefox21 [2011-09-26 22:53:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you!

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David31 [2011-09-26 19:50:41 +0000 UTC]

Superb.

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ALS123 In reply to David31 [2011-09-26 22:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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David31 In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-26 23:01:54 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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Raygirl13 [2011-09-26 19:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Looks good! I wonder how will it go on

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ALS123 In reply to Raygirl13 [2011-09-26 22:52:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm so glad people are getting interested!

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Raygirl13 In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-28 10:50:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome honey!

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jdahl3d [2011-09-26 11:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done as usual

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ALS123 In reply to jdahl3d [2011-09-26 22:51:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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jdahl3d In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-27 09:57:30 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome

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Basil4Life [2011-09-26 07:35:40 +0000 UTC]

Ah, concentration mode. Love it!

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ALS123 In reply to Basil4Life [2011-09-26 22:49:24 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you! That's one of my favorite expressions of his, when he's deep in thought like that

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Basil4Life In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-28 17:52:28 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Brinatello [2011-09-26 07:21:08 +0000 UTC]

I think you've made it very clear that Basil is in thinking mode. I also like the fact that you added in action lines for the up close view of his hand in his pocket. It shows he's making the movement of pulling out the piece of evidence to look it over. Without those lines, it would look like just a view of his hand in his pocket. Again like page 1, I was hoping to see some narration of his POV or general third person, but silence is okay, too.

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ALS123 In reply to Brinatello [2011-09-26 22:48:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Oh, good, I was hoping the action lines would help to show the movement from pulling it out of his pocket I think I'm definitely gonna go back and add in some sort of narration to spice it up a bit

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Brinatello In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-27 08:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Yes yes yes! Thinking-mode Basil along with what he's thinking is wonderful!

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Hawk-Moth [2011-09-26 05:21:36 +0000 UTC]

ooh the facial expression is wonderful, he's in his detective mode

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ALS123 In reply to Hawk-Moth [2011-09-26 22:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you! I love that intense thinking expression of his

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Gyrforce [2011-09-26 05:05:37 +0000 UTC]

Love it!! His expression really gets the point across in my opinion. I'm curious as to what the fancy evidence is, however.

The shadows look very well done! The paper he's holding might be a bit bright, unless it's reflective. And it just might be, right?

Take as much time as you need, no hurry. It'll be done when it's done. I'll be here for the next one!

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ALS123 In reply to Gyrforce [2011-09-26 22:45:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it! That's one of my favorite expressions of Basil

Yeah, looking at it now, it does look a bit bright doesn't it? I was trying to make it look little golden, but I think I may have overdone it a bit. Haha, it's kinda glaring on the eyes!

I think I'm gonna go back in and add some sort of dialogue, like what Basil's thinking or something, to sort of give some insight into what the case he's working on is about. So I may resubmit this in a little bit

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Gyrforce In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-27 04:18:28 +0000 UTC]

I think it captures his personality very well!



That would be cool! Either way, I still love it!

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ALS123 In reply to Gyrforce [2011-09-27 04:36:56 +0000 UTC]

haha thank you!

I went ahead and redid it, and I totally like it this way better Thank you for the help!

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Gyrforce In reply to ALS123 [2011-09-28 01:04:31 +0000 UTC]



I actually like it better this way, too! Glad I could help!

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