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Amandadear — Dream
Published: 2006-12-04 03:52:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 126; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description He leads me in a dream
I can drift off into worlds unknown.
I can see sights that were never seen.
I can hear songs that are so far away.
So far away, I have to struggle just to find my way.
Something leads me forward.
A hand reached out.
I hold on tight without a doubt.
I fight to live.
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Comments: 8

originalnasadude [2006-12-07 04:16:26 +0000 UTC]

yeah the ending line kinda threw me a curve ball too, it was like it started off as a nice dream and then became a nightmare (which can happen) or something like that.

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Amandadear In reply to originalnasadude [2006-12-07 04:17:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah well, I dont know what came over me, like I said it was an old peom, perhaps it was just that.

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AfroCyborg [2006-12-04 13:15:31 +0000 UTC]

Dreaming is such a wonderful thing! I believe everyone loves exploring the unknown side of the mind...
This is a very lovely poem!

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Amandadear In reply to AfroCyborg [2006-12-04 15:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so kindly!

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AuthenticLogic [2006-12-04 04:31:47 +0000 UTC]

Hold on to the hand that reaches out...do not let go for your life is at stake.
Nice.

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Amandadear In reply to AuthenticLogic [2006-12-04 04:33:35 +0000 UTC]

Yey! thank you!

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L0rre [2006-12-04 04:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Very sweet and caring poem by the feeling of it. 'Cept the ending line threw me off. ^_^

But other than that, I genuinely enjoyed it!

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Amandadear In reply to L0rre [2006-12-04 04:27:19 +0000 UTC]

I dont know what I was thinking about the ending line, this poem is too old. lol I kept it because I must have had a reason lol

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