Comments: 8
originalnasadude [2006-12-07 04:16:26 +0000 UTC]
yeah the ending line kinda threw me a curve ball too, it was like it started off as a nice dream and then became a nightmare (which can happen) or something like that.
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Amandadear In reply to originalnasadude [2006-12-07 04:17:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah well, I dont know what came over me, like I said it was an old peom, perhaps it was just that.
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AfroCyborg [2006-12-04 13:15:31 +0000 UTC]
Dreaming is such a wonderful thing! I believe everyone loves exploring the unknown side of the mind...
This is a very lovely poem!
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AuthenticLogic [2006-12-04 04:31:47 +0000 UTC]
Hold on to the hand that reaches out...do not let go for your life is at stake.
Nice.
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L0rre [2006-12-04 04:15:32 +0000 UTC]
Very sweet and caring poem by the feeling of it. 'Cept the ending line threw me off. ^_^
But other than that, I genuinely enjoyed it!
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