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Description I can't
I'm dead
I spent so long on this
This file is so huge and it took forever to upload

So, this is my character Wing. He's the lead in a story that I'm writing about dragons that's partially inspired off of Wings of Fire but with lots of political and religious themes. I'm not uploading the story to Deviantart UNTIL I complete it, which most likely will be in 6-12 months. It's pretty short, the chapters are around 5 pages long, and my LA teacher is editing it. This image will be used as a cover for the story, and you can find the version with text here.  

This took so long, and I really like it! I used a ton of references, because it had been so long since I've drawn a dragon, and my style was a bit simple compared to my style for other animals now. It took so long, and I put special attention into the wings. You may be able to see that they have slight transparency, for effect. I'm not too proud of the shading on the body, but the fur-shading is really good in my opinion.

Also, Wing, probably won't get a reference any time soon because I want to limit drawing him, as I don't want you guys to get too attached to him if I stop the project.

Also, i'd like if you could critique this
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ThisBurningGirl [2017-03-19 21:29:02 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


This so freaking cool I can't even-
Alright I'm not really a professional with this or anything, nor do I draw dragons that much but I'll try and write something competent.

Originality wise, I did a quick search on deviant art and saw a whole lot of flying dragons and a whole bunch of blizzards but not a whole lot of both of those things together, so I'm gonna give you a solid three stars on that.

As for impact (sorry jumping all over the place here lol) this is absolutely stunning. I just want to stand up right now and start drawing some dragons again, since I haven't done so in a long time, and I'm sure many others felt something similar, so I'm definitely giving you a high score there. Seriously, this is incredible, you should be really proud of yourself for this.

All right now that I have ALL that out of the way, I'll start on an actual critique of the quality of the artwork itself (and I already have 175 words.... I need to be stopped {make that 184...})

Alright, first off, I really love how you kept to a black, white, and grey color scheme. Keeping a color scheme really helps display some meaning behind a piece, and this is no exception. I really wish more artists (myself included, actually) could get a hang of these sorts of things and use colors more than they do now. I also adore the wings, especially the transparency effect. It looks really nice and I don't see it done too often, so you just boosted up your originality score! (yay!) The anatomy seems to be pretty accurate, so I see you were right about using tons of reference photos, it really shows. The subtle spots all over Wing's body don't distract the eye, and instead give the picture more depth, good job on that too! The snow/background looks cool too, I like how it's clearly not the main focus of the picture (since it's not in focus.... ha ha, see what I did there. I'm so funny)
I do wish you had represented dragon scales somehow though, it would have really helped with the drawing, but at the same time it may have made the drawing look cluttered so I guess that's okay. As you said in the description, you could have done more with the shading, which would have helped with the whole picture overall, but it still looks pretty nice, so...

Fml over 400 words and it took my like, 20 minutes to write and it's probably not even that good of a critique but I tried my best so yay? I hope this was helpful in some way shape or form since I kinda just praised you the entire time.. but it's honestly just such a beautiful picture I couldn't bring myself to rag on it ;v;

Bye now!

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Anatthema In reply to ThisBurningGirl [2017-03-19 22:57:59 +0000 UTC]

aaAAAA thanks so much! You brought up a lot of really good points! Yeah, i should have done some scale patterning but it takes so long ugh

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ThisBurningGirl In reply to Anatthema [2017-03-25 03:49:31 +0000 UTC]

You're very very welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I didn't think I did a very good job on it XD

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ThisBurningGirl [2017-03-19 21:29:41 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe how epic this looks, it's insane
Amazing job like holy c r a p

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Anatthema In reply to ThisBurningGirl [2017-03-19 22:59:53 +0000 UTC]

hhhhhhh thank you!

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ThisBurningGirl In reply to Anatthema [2017-03-23 00:04:28 +0000 UTC]

You're incredibly welcome!

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KodiakAussieArt [2017-03-05 23:05:16 +0000 UTC]

 oH MY GOD??? THATS AMAZING??? I feel so bad that you had to take the time to draw all of THAT but it looks AMAZING hOLY SHIT

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Anatthema In reply to KodiakAussieArt [2017-03-05 23:29:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! Seriously, I really pushed myself on this. My head is litterally pounding because I spend so much time looking at my computer

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Nephose [2017-03-05 23:04:32 +0000 UTC]

👌👌 GOOD JOB DUDE
V NICE

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Anatthema In reply to Nephose [2017-03-05 23:30:16 +0000 UTC]

HHHHHHH THANKS FREN

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milqqy-ways [2017-03-05 22:53:56 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing oml

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Anatthema In reply to milqqy-ways [2017-03-05 23:29:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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milqqy-ways In reply to Anatthema [2017-03-05 23:42:17 +0000 UTC]

ahh yw!!

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