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Published: 2005-06-09 23:04:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 199; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Dead of night,
The moon lends its light,
Traveling rugged ground,
Making not a sound,
A snarl heard behind,
I run from his kind,
I hear his pace quicken,
I think i'll taste like chicken.
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Comments: 14

oron-kevin [2005-12-05 22:10:23 +0000 UTC]

hey this is nice and the last line don't really fit but it is funny

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anime-lie In reply to oron-kevin [2006-01-22 01:17:27 +0000 UTC]

yeah. it doesnt but you know, i tried

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oron-kevin In reply to anime-lie [2006-01-23 06:41:25 +0000 UTC]

but it was good

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anime-lie In reply to oron-kevin [2006-01-27 02:15:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you. you should read the others, they are much better

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Impatience [2005-06-12 20:31:52 +0000 UTC]

what!!??!!
the last line releaves the stress that the beginning starts
every scary movie has aome comedic relief....jeesal!

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anime-lie In reply to Impatience [2005-06-13 17:16:00 +0000 UTC]

well it isn't my fault. Peter justs hates it and I was tring to humor him. I do like the last line. forget what I put on my response to peters message

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Impatience In reply to anime-lie [2005-06-13 20:40:10 +0000 UTC]

yeah yeah yeah whatever
ya know you can't please everyone

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anime-lie In reply to Impatience [2005-07-03 15:47:46 +0000 UTC]

yes. I have been away for a while. I will become more involved then ever now. I know how to make smily faces and junk!!!!!!!!!!

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Impatience In reply to anime-lie [2005-07-03 15:49:55 +0000 UTC]

yay, alex!

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kayana [2005-06-10 01:14:33 +0000 UTC]

short but i can feel the tense situacion

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anime-lie In reply to kayana [2005-06-11 21:55:32 +0000 UTC]

wow
thnak you. It is short but to the point. anything added on would drag it down

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anime-lie In reply to kayana [2005-06-11 21:55:32 +0000 UTC]

wow
thnak you. It is short but to the point. anything added on would drag it down

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thehollywood [2005-06-10 01:06:50 +0000 UTC]

It's good, except the last line.

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anime-lie In reply to thehollywood [2005-06-11 22:05:21 +0000 UTC]

that was mary's line!! Tell her that. I didn't like it either.

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