Comments: 48
Chevycide [2009-12-08 22:10:57 +0000 UTC]
Nice pose. I like how it looks like it's all ready for action (:
But like they were saying, the anatomy is a bit off. The most obvious thing to me is how thin the back leg is. It needs to be like the other legs in terms of thickness. A wolf's ears, also, are small and rounded triangles. They look a tad big here, but that's an easy fix. One thing though... there's five toes on that one front paw. You probably meant to erase one when you found a better position for it, and from the other paws, it looks like you have a clear understanding that there should only be four. So I'm willing to call it a careless mistake.
But... I'm not liking how you're treating my friends. They did only try to offer helpful critique. What they said is true, too. Cartoons are USUSALLY anatomically correct, although sometimes the anatomy is exaggerated(like, a big head and giant eyes, or hip bones jutting out). Even so, though, the basic anatomy structure is usually mostly correct. Even with the hip bone jutting out, the hip bone will be in the right place instead of, say, up by the shoulder.
if you don't like people critiquing your work, there is something you can click when submitting a picture that tells us not to critique. You can also put in the description that you would not like your work critisized. See? Easy fix :)
Although that's an option, remember, we only critique others to help them improve. If you apply critiques into your art in the future, you could improve so much really quick! It worked for me when I had people critiquing me more. Even now I pretty much starve for a good crit! x)
Chin up, though. Althought there are errors in anatomy here, there's still people who like it. As I said before, I really dig the pose. (:
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jjunkyard In reply to jjunkyard [2009-12-09 23:05:10 +0000 UTC]
FEEL THE HATE FUCKER
DONT MESS WITH MY FRIENDS
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SHARKHEAD [2009-12-08 19:38:24 +0000 UTC]
LOL OMFG DRAMA DRAMA.
Kid, you need to get a grip.
Whether this is a cartoon or not, the anatomy looks like bullshit.
Next time, just take the crit and work on it.
&
Like, wow.
You're so mother fucking immature it's sad. You're not even witty enough to come up with good comebacks. You rely on swearing like it makes you cool.
Guess what.
Secret time.
Every mother fucker on the face of this shitty earth knows how to sling a fucking curse word.
You dumb fucking cunt.
Anyways, this is the funniest thing I've seen on DA in the past week. Thaaaanks <3
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Zombie-Radio In reply to SHARKHEAD [2009-12-08 23:47:36 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU SO MUCH HA HA
no, seriously, you rock.
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SHARKHEAD In reply to Zombie-Radio [2009-12-09 04:16:21 +0000 UTC]
Just doing my part c:
I like yours as well.
Pretty catty ;D
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jjunkyard In reply to SHARKHEAD [2009-12-08 21:38:08 +0000 UTC]
YES YOU ARE AMAZING.
HIFIVE///
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SHARKHEAD In reply to jjunkyard [2009-12-08 21:52:51 +0000 UTC]
OH EM JEEEZ.
I call them like a sees them.
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SHARKHEAD In reply to jjunkyard [2009-12-08 22:02:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh, but you can be
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jjunkyard In reply to SHARKHEAD [2009-12-08 22:16:49 +0000 UTC]
ASSERTIVE HUH?
SOOOOOUNDS GREAT!
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SHARKHEAD In reply to jjunkyard [2009-12-08 22:19:35 +0000 UTC]
I CAN'T TELL IF THIS IS SARCASM >:C
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jjunkyard In reply to SHARKHEAD [2009-12-08 22:20:35 +0000 UTC]
.........OH MY.
Of course not.
fffffffffffffffffffffff :U
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SHARKHEAD In reply to jjunkyard [2009-12-08 22:22:21 +0000 UTC]
LOL
I JUST CAN'T TELL.
Hold me?
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jjunkyard In reply to SHARKHEAD [2009-12-08 22:24:17 +0000 UTC]
I WOULD HAVE NOT EITHER. ifthatmakessense
hold///
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hannnur [2009-11-29 10:11:57 +0000 UTC]
i have some critque to offer
the wolf's anatomy is very off
the front legs are alright, but the back legs in proporition to the rest of the body look unusually skinny
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okapis In reply to hannnur [2009-12-08 20:33:01 +0000 UTC]
OMG. theres five motherfucking toes
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hannnur In reply to okapis [2009-12-09 02:39:57 +0000 UTC]
ITS A MAGICAL THING
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okapis In reply to jjunkyard [2009-12-08 21:55:41 +0000 UTC]
TEEHEHEHE YES IKR?
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jjunkyard In reply to okapis [2009-12-08 21:58:27 +0000 UTC]
TOTALLY.
I WISH I HAD 'IT' AS A PET.
HEHEHEHE
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okapis In reply to jjunkyard [2009-12-08 23:28:39 +0000 UTC]
LOOOLLL yesyesyes (: that would be COOL
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Aric414 In reply to hannnur [2009-11-30 23:34:29 +0000 UTC]
eh, it was a fast, and random lineart.
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hannnur In reply to Aric414 [2009-12-01 02:53:24 +0000 UTC]
still, it should be anatomically correct
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Aric414 In reply to hannnur [2009-12-01 15:59:56 +0000 UTC]
No, not at all! It's lineart, and art. If you knew what cartoon was, you wouldn't posting a rude comment. Get a life if that's all you can do! It's fucking lineart dumb ass, and like I said it's CARTOON!!!!!!!!!
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hannnur In reply to Aric414 [2009-12-01 20:35:01 +0000 UTC]
"No, not at all! It's lineart, and art. If you knew what a cartoon was, you wouldn't posting a rude comment."
That made me laugh so hard.
First of all, even cartoons are anatomically correct.
"I's lineart, and art." Again, most lineart and art is
anatomically correct. I said most, not all.
You should at least try to fix the anatonmy, it doesn't
have to be perfect, just more proprotioned.
And you are the one that's being rude, calling me a dumb ass
for trying to help you.
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Aric414 In reply to hannnur [2009-12-08 12:58:27 +0000 UTC]
Um no not at all. IT'S LINEART GO GET. A FUCKING LIFE YOU DUMB BITCH CUNT
Hence the fact I never called you a dumb ass, so making you look like a dumb ass... So this was a great laugh because, of you! Thanks (:
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Zombie-Radio In reply to Aric414 [2009-12-08 23:46:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow, you should get a fucking life and learn how to accept a critique. Just because it's line art doesn't mean it shouldn't be anatomically correct.
And you just sound like a freaking 5-year-old when you're calling someone who POLITELY tried to offer some critique on how to improve your art. Way to make a jackass of yourself. As if the world didn't have enough of those already.
And I don't see what's so funny, or as you put it "a great laugh". Once again it just makes you seems like a stuck-up little bitch who doesn't know how to work off GOOD CRITIQUE. Not everyone's going to asspat you for something with horrible anatomy like this.
Learn how to make yourself less of an ass, and if you really get this easily offended by critique, put somewhere in your artist comment that you do not want critiques, because you just come out as a snob that thinks he's the best and that your ART ISSO LULZY N BTR THAN URS SO OBV. U MUST B A WRSE ARTIST 4 EVEN CING SOMETING WRONG WIT THIS!!1
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hannnur In reply to Zombie-Radio [2009-12-09 00:31:07 +0000 UTC]
Your signature combined with this was great laughs.
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Zombie-Radio In reply to hannnur [2009-12-09 02:02:07 +0000 UTC]
dfh I'm glad that entertained someone xD
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hannnur In reply to Aric414 [2009-12-08 16:26:49 +0000 UTC]
Actually, yes.
And you did call me a dumb ass, scroll up and you will see.
This is what's wrong with most of artists on dA, you guy's
don't know how to take critque and
freak out when someone
doesn't asspat you.
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jjunkyard In reply to hannnur [2009-12-08 21:39:31 +0000 UTC]
You go girl!~
I totally agree.
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KatsumixGaara [2008-09-06 15:39:15 +0000 UTC]
<3 luv it!!
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Allona13 [2008-06-23 13:12:58 +0000 UTC]
*GASP* OMG I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! THIS IS FRICKEN AWESOME!!!!!
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Aric414 In reply to Allona13 [2008-06-23 14:29:08 +0000 UTC]
AHAHA thanks!
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UnflinchingWolf13 [2008-06-23 12:36:38 +0000 UTC]
Wow. I really like the pose.
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