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Published: 2012-10-26 22:42:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 3042; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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C'mon, Link! The Triforce of Caution is not an option!
Please note: this comic is not a manga, and reads Left to Right.
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So... is Link a thief in this? That'll be cool
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No problem, wish Deviantart had a "Follow this artist's comics" button...
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I actually set up the Sacred Hand group for that purpose. You can +Watch for just comic updates. ;]
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Haha, thank you! There are going to be lots of little easter eggs for Zelda fans, but I hope it can be just as enjoyable as a story on its own.
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Unfortunately no, I haven't gotten the time to sit down with it recently. December has been quite busy. :/ Rest assured that it is certainly on my mind. I'll try to get a preview/progress image for it like I have for my other comic.
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Haha, I appreciate that. More will come in time.
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You really succeeded with the contrast between characters and backgrounds in this comic - how the characters are "outlined" and the background is not but they still totally fit together. I like the look of it!
*wonders how those shiekah managed to paint that symbol so high up*
ahh nvm ninjas can do anything
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COOL!!!! Love the sense of height in the canyon panel.
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Thanks! I'm glad it came through.
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xD Poor Link...when you have a teammate who has no idea hat she's getting herself into...oh boy...
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Oh pshh, I'm sure whatever they're going to do will turn out perfectly in the end. It's not like this is the beginning of a...wait...
Hmmmm...
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xDDD Oi, decisions decisions...
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The backgrounds look terrific on this page. One thing, though, if you don't mind me saying - the last three panels could stand to flow a little better. In the third and fourth panels, you switch from a front-view of Isis to a shot from behind, which is a tad jarring - it's generally a bad idea to make an 180 degree "camera" swivel. Also, in the fourth panel, Link seems to appear out of nowhere - according to the third panel and fourth panels, he would have been on her right side, not her left. In addition, the transition from the fourth to the fifth panel is again a little jarring. Instead of rotating the "camera" clockwise, you might want to rotate it counter-clockwise. It doesn't flow quite as well when the characters switch from one side of a panel to the other in the next, if there was no evidence that they actually changed positions. If any of that was unclear/confusing, then just tell me and I'll try to give you a better explanation.
Even though you've never struck me as the kind of person to be upset by a critique of sorts, I hope you don't mind me pointing this out, as I'm just trying to help. :3 Also, I'm not saying to go completely redo the page, just trying to give you some tips for future reference.
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Trust me, everything you mentioned, I've already beaten myself up for. ;] I swapped things around so much that the environment in my head had to be completely restructured. Eventually I just gave up and went with it. XP I will keep a closer eye on things at the sketch stage in the future.
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XD
Ha, I was actually just about to suggest that - that you try different sketches before you actually start inking.
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I do. This page in particular was a compromise between time, speech-bubble flow, and too many different sketches, actually.
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I love your background and landscapes so much. Nice page!
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