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ASHLEY212 — The Twilight Of Night
Published: 2006-03-24 20:26:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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you stand in the moonlightsilver hair dripping, tears running out of sight.
drinched in rain,
do u no longer feel my pain?
what has happened to me and u?
u have no idea what ur words can do.
u leave me empty,and not wanting to love
my wings are now only feathers of a broken dove.
craving for the last word....
ur making me fall in, u having the cord.
either u save me or let me fall,
deep, until the light of u is so small.
u let go, im no longer here.
i have witnessed my greatest fear
i dont want to loose u again
all is forgiven...even the deadliest of sin
take the apple and aim it high,
and our love will finally die...
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Comments: 14
I suggest, "The Twilight of Night" as the title, but that's just me.
Very nice job.
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^^ and i will change the title. i like the one u have
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Squee! I feel special now! Thank you!!
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'all is forgiven...even the deadliest of sin
take the apple and aim it high,
and our love will finally die... '
Awesome lines.
Actually, this whole poem was awesome. I can really feel your emotion in it.
Wonderful job.
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thank u very much...it means alot
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Sad, but beautiful.
'i have witnessed my greatest fear
i dont want to loose u again
all is forgiven...even the deadliest of sin'
I think was my favorite part.
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Woa!! Wow!! WOWOWOWOW!! 
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no i have nothing on u...but thanx
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