Comments: 18
kilmeister [2011-08-11 18:48:41 +0000 UTC]
Very nice drawing but I agree with ricepuppet because the leg seems incongruous to the rest of the body. Nice hair.
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cmslater [2010-01-11 15:05:59 +0000 UTC]
Love how tight and smooth your lines are , they express a lot of confidence. Reminds me how I'd like to do smaller more thought out designs, DRAW HARD my friend great work.
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asumoth In reply to cmslater [2010-01-12 21:32:29 +0000 UTC]
More thoughtful? I have seen your work in your gallery. If that isn't thought out, it makes me wonder what we will see if you do XD
But thanks for the nice comments and faves!
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hontokawaiinekochan [2008-08-10 18:29:32 +0000 UTC]
Wish I could draw feathers and wings this well >.< *jealous*
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Stealingxlove [2008-03-07 15:12:40 +0000 UTC]
wauw zo mooi <3
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ricepuppet [2008-03-02 09:30:50 +0000 UTC]
I think the upped body and the wings are great. The rest looks like it's just been drawn real fast to get it done. The legs for example just don't cut it like the rest of the body. You should re-work the legs and the arm a bit. And to finish up, you should color it (and give it a background) this should make it an excellent piece.
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ricepuppet In reply to ricepuppet [2008-03-02 23:22:30 +0000 UTC]
I never said the drawing sucked. You asked for advanced critique, the only things you got so far we're 'great drawing' etc. -_- but if you're satisfied with it, then don't change it. After all, it is youre art, not mine.
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asumoth In reply to ricepuppet [2008-03-02 22:53:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow a re-work, you allmost make it sound like the drawing sucks XD I gave everything just as much love as the upperbody, the only thing i really don't like in this drwaing is the hand and the lower arm, the rest is just fine by me. I would probebly be able to do it better these days, because the drawing is allmost 2 years old now, but i never do a remake ^^
And coloring it is just a preferance, and does not have to be a improvement
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Sakebi-chan [2006-12-06 21:33:18 +0000 UTC]
i love the hair and feathers. draw hair tht detailed more often <333
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asumoth In reply to Sakebi-chan [2006-12-07 23:39:05 +0000 UTC]
*; * that takes up so much time that i usually don't take on my drawings XD
I am making a drawing with lots of hair right now, its a big drawing, but i have never ever taken so much time to make a drawing that i don't even want to make any mistakes( although now that i see it laying there on my desk i keep seeing more flaws every morning i wake up XD)
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Sakebi-chan In reply to asumoth [2006-12-08 19:34:45 +0000 UTC]
but it's lovely! so try it more often!
XD;;; that;s always a pain, but i'm reallycurious as to how it looks!
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Aeki [2006-11-20 09:14:35 +0000 UTC]
Indeed!
Pretty drawing^^
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asumoth In reply to Aeki [2006-11-22 10:11:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! very much
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