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Bardiel999 — Alone

Published: 2005-03-22 21:09:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 2097; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 27
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Description I'm all alone in the grip of the silent sadness
I have been told to honour life
and what therein I'll find,
but if all I see is darkness,
let me die and wake up blind
As the gleaming blade before me,
singing lullabies of loss
Whispering Death is your redeemer
to the Paradise you've lost
Mankind, evoker of inferno
Let me burn your honoured Crown of Creation
and dethrone you to ashes for aeons to come
Why should I stay here where I do not belong?
Of weakness burns my within... An empty shell
I've lost the way to the sanctity I need

Dark Tranquillity - Alone
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Comments: 9

MutePoetess [2008-08-22 23:44:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow it's lovely..

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Azazella [2006-02-03 18:44:45 +0000 UTC]

I Loved The composicion , so easy to feel inside this work'so sad and so butiful .....! (but maybe the "alone" that u right on the photograph is not necesary there .....)

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MorbidProgeny [2005-09-24 21:30:10 +0000 UTC]

this picture is great and i love the delicacy of the branches behind i would actually like to be sitting ther right now plus dark tranquility are great

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Bardiel999 In reply to MorbidProgeny [2005-09-24 21:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...

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MorbidProgeny In reply to Bardiel999 [2005-09-24 21:49:59 +0000 UTC]

no probs

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Zzziaplo [2005-03-23 17:04:05 +0000 UTC]

Really good!

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Bardiel999 In reply to Zzziaplo [2005-03-23 18:50:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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just-hayley [2005-03-22 21:22:14 +0000 UTC]

I really like this photograph. The vines sort of trap you in the image and make your eyes wander through until you find the girl in the corner. Very appropriate illustration for the words.... or very appropriate words to describe the photograph? Either way, both are beautiful.

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BloodyAshen [2005-03-22 21:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem and picture alike, I do think a little more light, maybe for a more shadow effect rather than simple darkness might make the picture more appealing, and eye catching. That is just my opinion though, and my experitse is definately not photography or shadowing/shading. The viny wall in the background makes the girl look all the more desolate and alone, nice touch.

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