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baronvonvoe In reply to Slayer-1412 [2008-12-31 04:33:31 +0000 UTC]
It was more the fact she knew she had made her dad proud and she didn't want to kill Tsukika just to win.
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Slayer-1412 In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-12-31 04:43:50 +0000 UTC]
I thought she didn't have enough chakra? or was that a excuse?
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baronvonvoe In reply to Slayer-1412 [2008-12-31 04:50:33 +0000 UTC]
That too but she did have enough to complete the Iron Tomb but she didn't want to finish the jutsu.
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Slayer-1412 In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-12-31 04:57:12 +0000 UTC]
killing a friend should only be nesscary for the Mangekyo Sharingan (in other words NEVER) but I think Rynjin doesn't need to eh?
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baronvonvoe In reply to Slayer-1412 [2008-12-31 05:40:21 +0000 UTC]
No Ryuji was born with his and I don't think it's ever been cleared up if you actually have to kill someone you care about to achieve it. Sure Sasuke killed Itachi but he didn't care about him when he took his life and he still developed his Mangekyo.
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Slayer-1412 In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-12-31 22:30:12 +0000 UTC]
until he realized that Itachi was actually his older brother all the time...does that make sense?
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baronvonvoe In reply to Slayer-1412 [2009-01-01 04:36:02 +0000 UTC]
He always knew that Itachi was his brother but he hated him.
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Slayer-1412 In reply to baronvonvoe [2009-01-01 16:29:33 +0000 UTC]
no, I meant Itachi wasn't acting like his older brother throughout the series...until Sasuke realized he really was acting like any older brother should
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rynoMAE [2008-02-07 10:09:36 +0000 UTC]
Nice battle sequence. With that personality and knowledge it's a good thing Kyribi is to small to take over Naruki at any time.
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baronvonvoe In reply to rynoMAE [2008-02-07 10:51:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your encouraging words. I always try to make the battles a vivid as possible so the reader knows exactly what's going on. You are so right about Kyribi because he is a spirit of war, a beserker who craves battle and blood. That's why Naruki has had those bad dreams and strange feelings when he fights.
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ThatNinja [2008-02-06 18:05:27 +0000 UTC]
this was very interesting and i was woundering what naruki's deamon was and what type of power he could give him
all that's left is to find out about kanaye's deamon
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baronvonvoe In reply to ThatNinja [2008-02-07 06:15:17 +0000 UTC]
Indeed my friend...indeed.
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SapphireWolfMaster [2008-02-06 13:38:59 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting indeed. How will Naruto react when he finds out his son can use the Rasengan before he had a chance to teach it to him?
Interesting battle. I've always wondered what it would be like if a Hyuuga went up against a sand manipulator similar or exactly like Gaara, and you wrote a good battle.
Very nice job.
Later!
SWM
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baronvonvoe In reply to SapphireWolfMaster [2008-02-07 06:16:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your encouraging words. The only problem with Naruki using Rasengan at this point is he has to let Kyribi take control of his body to use the techniques.
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SapphireWolfMaster In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-02-07 14:39:33 +0000 UTC]
Oohhh... So Naruto might just have to teach him anyway, so he can use it anytime without Kyribi taking over, right?
Anyways, nice chapter as usual.
Later!
SWM
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baronvonvoe In reply to SapphireWolfMaster [2008-02-08 04:55:40 +0000 UTC]
Yes and that would be a lot safer since Kyribi lusts for battle.
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SapphireWolfMaster In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-02-08 13:34:55 +0000 UTC]
I wonder what kind of fox spirit Kanaye will get, if any? Hmm...
Later!
SWM
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