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Published: 2007-10-11 04:05:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 803; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 4
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This my version of the forms of a friends wereshark character from the World of Darkness RPG series. His character was a lifeguard in California.Related content
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Hi there, here's a critique that will hopefully help you.
First, I would remove all of the drips you've drawn in. You only need a couple - maybe on the edge of the elbow or what-not. But it's overkill to draw them all in, especially if you plan to color it.
The head seems a little small, given the size of his upper torso.
The body itself looks pretty good. The pose is off (the way the leg is sticking out on the left is a little uncomfortable) but you can use pose references in the future to remedy that. I would try looking at comic book art since that's what you appear to be going for.
The idea is great. A wereshark is quite a frightening idea. I would pull more "shark" into it. Add a tail perhaps, a larger fin on the back, add the gills to the side of his neck. And maybe just for fun you can add those little fish that you always see riding along on the shark.
Hope this helps
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Yes it does help and I thank you. This form is actually a half way mark between man and shark so I think I'll post his full wereshark form. The reason I put in so much of the droplets is because he just got out of the water but I see your point. Like I said this was a first attempt some years ago but I've been thinking about starting up again. So thank you very much for your critique and time. If you ever would want to I'd like to have your critiques on some of my other art work if you're interested of course. I hope you have a great day and God bless.
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Gator...O_o...I guess so in the face.
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Ya mostly around the head
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Well this form is between his human and his full on "Sharkman" form so I didn't want a full blown shark face. Oh well can't win them all I suppose.
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I love him and that time he was one of my best works.
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cool stuff.
buff much? hehehe
how big is this dude? 8 foot-ish?
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Yeah his full shark form is closer to 11-12 and over twenty feet long.
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