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Konohamaru, the leader of the Sarutobi clan, stood stoically upon the docks of the Wave Country as he watched a ship slowly come into port.  Flanking the clan leader are his twin sons Hizuren and Asuma, named in honor of his grandfather and uncle and both members of Turlis’ former genin team.  Behind them were eight members of the Sarutobi clan special military police and behind them was a jounin medical team led by Iruka’s daughter Shizue.
When the ship finally docked; Turlis led the way down the gang plank followed by Sasuke, who was traveling under his own power on a pair of crutches, and Suri close behind him carrying her trunk of medical guides.  Konohamaru stepped forward with a crooked half smile, “It looks like you had quite the adventure Sasuke-sama.”
“I would love to say that I have had worse…but that’s simply just not the case,” replied the Uchiha clan leader as he moved his nub of a leg back and forth, “However I’m managing well enough but I’m curious as to why you have such an impressive force waiting for us.”
The Sarutobi clan leader sighed heavily, “Konoha has come under attack.”
“By who,” quickly asked Turlis as he recalled the uneasy feeling gripping his gut concerning his family’s well being.
“I would like to say we have the luxury of time so I could explain all that has happened in depth but we do not,” replied Konohamaru with a stern expression, “My orders are to get you to Konoha and that’s what I’m gonna do.  Shizue-san secure Sasuke-sama for travel.”
“What about my dad Konohamaru-sama,” blurted out Turlis.
“I’m sorry but he was the first to fall…followed quickly by Naruto-sensei,” answered the proud clan leader remembering all the lessons Naruto had taught him, “Many have fallen and we do not have the time to waste with idle talk.  We move out in two minutes!”



Kanaye forced himself to sit up in his bed doing his best to fight the pain that was washing over his body.  He gritted his teeth together refusing to give in especially after what his eyes had revealed to him.  Through his miraculous blood line limit the Hyuuga clan leader could see clearly that pneumonia was setting into his father’s lungs fast and if something was not done, Konoha’s greatest Hokage would die pitifully in bed.
Ami placed two chakra chargers and a bound scroll on the bed before her master, “I brought them Kanaye-sama just liked you asked.”
“Did any one follow you Ami-chan,” asked the pain ridden leader as his mistress shook her head in the negative, “Good…now listen to me carefully; I need you to go outside in the hall and keep every one out until I am done.”
“What are you going to do Kanaye-sama?”
“Simple…I’m going to save my dad’s life,” he answered as he looked over at the broken body of the man who raised him.
“B-B-But why…I thought you hated him,” she asked nervously.
Kanaye stared at her for a moment in silence before looking over at his dad before answering, “I honestly thought I did…but right now…there are thoughts in my head…that I am unsure of.  I feel confused…and deceived…as if everything up until now has been some well planned lie.  I feel like I have been nothing more than a pawn in a great game of some twisted person with dark desires…but now I see clearly.  Ami-chan I…I almost died…but because of that the scales have fallen away from my eyes…and I can see the path before me with a lucidity that has no equal or comparison.  My mind is set and my choice is undeniable…if I have to give my life to save my dad…I will.”
“Kanaye-sama,” whispered Ami in response as she stared at him in awe.
“Now…please stand outside and let no one enter…not even the Hokage,” added Kanaye as he unrolled the scroll on the bed.  He sat there for several minutes studying the hand signs laid out on the piece of paper committing them to memory.  He then stood to his feet struggling to maintain balance.  Kanaye then removed the tube connecting him to his father just before he cut off Naruto’s respirator and removed the breathing tube from the former Hokage’s throat.



Sakura was sitting in her office inside the hospital going over the damage reports and repair costs from the most recent battle with the shadow servant.  She was already getting a headache from the numbers her daughter, Asami had put together but this had to be done.  However her concentration was suddenly shattered into a million particles when a voice rung out from her interoffice intercom, “HOKAGE-SAMA!  HOKAGE-SAMA!!”
“What is it,” she asked as she pushed down the button.
“It’s Naruto…he’s flat-lined,” answered the voice on the other end causing Sakura’s heart to nearly stop as her mind tried to wrap around the concept.  Without another word or question the Hokage burst out of the room knocking the door clean off its hinges and ran full speed down the hall and up the stairs to Naruto’s room.



Inside the hospital room Kanaye could see through his Byakugan that Ami was doing the best she could to keep the nurses, orderlies and doctors at bay.  Although his penetrating vision gave the clan leader an insight into something far more profound, when he witnessed a tiny chakra system all to itself developing deep within Ami’s womb.  Kanaye smiled just before he broke open both chakra charges releasing the monumental amount of power contained within.  Personally Kanaye hated the idea of using chakra chargers but his own chakra was far too depleted to perform this demanding jutsu.
The very room began to shake as Naruto’s second son absorbed the swirling energies focusing them into his chakra circulatory system.  His knees began to shake uncontrollably as his muscles bulged, sweat covered his skin, his body temperature began to rise rapidly as his flesh turned red in color and the pain escalated to unbearable proportions making it hard to even breathe.  However Kanaye maintained his focus and his resolve because he had a job to do and he would not fail.  Black seals began to form on his forehead and arms as the Hyuuga leader began to create the hand signs he had memorized.



Sakura turned the corner in the hallway at a full run bounding off of the wall when her shoulder made contact.  Then her green eyes focused down the hall and she saw her medical staff lying in the floor, some of which were even unconscious with a very defiant Hyuuga mistress standing over them.  The 7th Hokage could feel her blood boiling with the thoughts that the Hyuuga were trying to assassinate her dearest friend.  Sakura took a savagely empowered swing at Ami from the side as she screamed, “GET THE HELL OUT OF MY WAY!!”
Ami barely ducked the killing blow as she used her gentle fist style to sweep the Hokage and toss her to the floor.  She was trying not to injury anyone but she had to try and fulfill Kanaye’s wishes.  Ami pleaded as Sakura sprung to her feet with utter hatred gripping her face, “Please Hokage-sama listen to me…”
“I’ll kill you,” snarled Sakura as she stampeded toward the timid mistress.
Ami stumbled back, falling into the floor before the rage of the Hokage as she squealed, “DON’T KILL ME I’M PREGNANT!!”
Sakura stopped her earth shattering punch mere millimeters from Ami’s head as those words sunk in.  She then kicked herself a little mentally as the thought of killing a pregnant woman fully took hold…however the thoughts of Naruto’s demise had not left, “What the hell is going on!?”
“K-K-Kanaye-sama…is trying to s-s-save his f-f-father,” stuttered the shaking young woman.  Sakura was taken aback by those words and she looked in through the small window in the door.  She witnessed Kanaye standing over his father with familiar black seals covering his skin.  She remembered them well from her training with Tsunade; they were seals of regeneration…seals that shortened your life.  Sakura decided to watch a moment and see if Kanaye truly held the resolve to save Naruto’s life at the risk of his own.



“Combined Arts Jutsu: Rasenzen’yutoku,” calmly spoke Kanaye as the seals disappeared from his skin and green swirling orb manifested in the palms of his hands.  Then slowly the orb began to expand farther and farther until it encompassed both him and his father.  The sound of the heart monitor’s long monotonous tone rang loudly in his ears causing a pain to grip his heart like no other as he cried out, “COME ON DAD YOU HAVE TO LIVE!!”



A few steps down the hall Hisoka stood in utter silence but before anyone noticed her she retreated back around the corner with her attendants.  She waited until no one was within earshot of her, activated her Byakugan and then looked at the guard who accompanied her whispering, “Go and tell the others that Ami has conceived and that it has been confirmed with the Byakugan.”
“What about Kanaye-sama,” asked the well armored soldier as looked around quickly before speaking out.
“He means nothing now,” she replied bitterly, “Tell the captain to move the plans forward…Kanaye has served his purpose and is no longer needed by the Hyuuga…or anyone that draws breath for that matter.”
“So you are going to go through with it then,” questioned one of the conspirators.
“Of course,” replied Hisoka with a venomous smile, “I want Kanaye dead before sunrise tomorrow.”


To be continued…
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Comments: 29

Cathiegirl16 [2009-03-13 21:33:31 +0000 UTC]

sorry for the late reply, but wow...
ok first off, that i loved the story it's getting better and better every time i read
i'm confused, is Hisoka the wife, or the servant? sorry, i just got confused....also can't wait for more!

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baronvonvoe In reply to Cathiegirl16 [2009-03-16 02:53:53 +0000 UTC]

It's been a while since I'm heard from you and Hisoka is the wife; Ami is the mistress.

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Cathiegirl16 In reply to baronvonvoe [2009-03-16 18:46:11 +0000 UTC]

i know, i'm sorry for that but thanks for clearing that up for me!

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baronvonvoe In reply to Cathiegirl16 [2009-03-17 03:37:35 +0000 UTC]

No problem my friend.

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Gangstabeck [2009-03-12 18:32:46 +0000 UTC]

It seems like Kanaye found his sense of honor and his wife, Hisoka, is showing her true colors. It makes me worry of what the Hyuuga could possibly be planning. The more I see of them, the more my opinion of the Hyuuga, with a few obvious exceptions, falls.

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mzhamma [2009-03-12 13:07:33 +0000 UTC]

Man, this was a really good chapter my friend. You really know how to work the plot twists. There's just one minor correction you need to make. The 3rd Hokage's name is spelled Hizuren not Hiruzen. I found this out on a website completely dedicted to Naruto. If you want, I can give you a link for it; it has the names of all the previous Hokage's, including the first and second.

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baronvonvoe In reply to mzhamma [2009-03-13 03:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah send me the link.

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mzhamma In reply to baronvonvoe [2009-03-13 11:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Okay, here you go: [link]

Also, thanks a lot for the fave. I hope you enjoy reading it.

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baronvonvoe In reply to mzhamma [2009-03-16 03:02:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for that link...instantly book marked and you're very welcome.

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mzhamma In reply to baronvonvoe [2009-03-16 13:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for the second fave as well. And by the way, your story is coming along great. By the way, who is Konohamaru married to in your fanfic? Also, what do you think of my two new OCs? I'd just like a little feed back is all...

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baronvonvoe In reply to mzhamma [2009-03-17 04:28:20 +0000 UTC]

I can tell that you have worked very hard on both of them. I'm extremely impressed with the detail you put into their stories and jutsu. Personally I would be begging you to let me use them in my story if Akatsuki was still around in KFS.

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mzhamma In reply to baronvonvoe [2009-03-17 22:13:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you very much and to be perfectly honest, I really just came up with their stories on the fly. And if you liked the first two, wait until you see the other four I am working on right now. I'll think you'll really like them.

By the way, I'm quite flattered that you would like to use my characters in your fanfic; I am deeply honored.

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baronvonvoe In reply to mzhamma [2009-03-18 03:13:10 +0000 UTC]

The honor would be mine...it's just too bad I couldn't use them in KFS.

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mzhamma In reply to baronvonvoe [2009-03-18 13:22:39 +0000 UTC]

It's all right; but if you ever start another Naruto fanfic, just let me know.

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baronvonvoe In reply to mzhamma [2009-03-19 03:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Will do.

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Slayer-1412 [2009-03-09 21:09:56 +0000 UTC]

It might be short, but it's definitely updating what's going on.

I thought Konohamaru died in Fiery Dawn? Maybe he was just injured, I thought he died cuz' there was no other mention of him at all until now. Amazing how you found Sarutobi's real name too

Very well done on how Kanaye sees what he's been doing, it really does take very good story-telling and an understanding of the characters to manage that

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baronvonvoe In reply to Slayer-1412 [2009-03-10 03:42:45 +0000 UTC]

No he didn't, he was hurt really bad...and to my mistake I left him like that. The trick of story telling is making each character a part of you and understanding them regardless of who they are or what they do.

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Slayer-1412 In reply to baronvonvoe [2009-03-10 22:20:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh, but it might've been hard to fit him in the story again considering that he's part of the ANBU and even the elite weren't entirely needed.

Ah

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baronvonvoe In reply to Slayer-1412 [2009-03-11 02:46:01 +0000 UTC]

Yes he was ANBU but remember the ones who attacked him were the elite of the Village Hidden Among the Clouds.

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Slayer-1412 In reply to baronvonvoe [2009-03-11 03:03:46 +0000 UTC]

oh right

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ThatNinja [2009-03-09 19:56:18 +0000 UTC]

short but satisfying, this cuop is confusing me but i guess i'll understand it soon
if hiruzen is his actual name then what does sarutobi mean?

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baronvonvoe In reply to ThatNinja [2009-03-10 03:43:41 +0000 UTC]

Sarutobi is his family name and the coup will make sense before long.

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Adaron1912 [2009-03-09 15:08:57 +0000 UTC]

Dam and i thought the Uchiha's were bad with the coup de ta. which made the 3rd hokage order Itachi to kill his whole clan and become a missing nin. brovo my friend. Also i like how you found the 3rd. hokages real name i know that must of been hard since more profiles about him call him Sarutobi or just 3rd hokage.

one personal quetions do you know how to spell the nick name Naruto gave to Tsunade

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baronvonvoe In reply to Adaron1912 [2009-03-10 03:44:44 +0000 UTC]

It took some doing to find the 3rd's name and grandmother is spelled Obaa-chan.

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sebo70 [2009-03-09 09:45:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow!

Kanaye really changed back to before he become Hiashi's pawn. Maybe not completely but he is on good way.

Conspiracy and threat from Hyuuga. Kanaye is in mortal danger. And I bet that Kumo'Honzar had something with all change of Kanaye and Hiashi's hate to Naruto. This old spider-demon can be as old as Kyuubi and maybe even far dangerous than the old fox.
Bet also that Hisoka and others are one side with this old insect. After Ami give birth they probably kill her, take her baby and rise as new Hyuuga heir and then Head of the Clan.
Or they could also use it to bring Honzar to the world.

Man, your story is great! Can't wait for the next chapter! And good we could see Konohamaru. He didn't appear in this fic until now. Or it was who forgot about him? I don't know.

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baronvonvoe In reply to sebo70 [2009-03-10 03:46:26 +0000 UTC]

Just know that Kumo'Honzar is very old and very powerful and his influence among people is not over. Honestly I did forget about Konohamaru and I left him in a bad position back in Fiery Dawn during the chunin exams.

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Autistic-teddy [2009-03-09 07:43:45 +0000 UTC]

a good idea is to have Naruto fully healed and kick the chakra out of Hisoka for her treachery against his son and then Naruki and Hana should learn of it and fireworks will happen

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baronvonvoe In reply to Autistic-teddy [2009-03-09 07:58:05 +0000 UTC]

Interesting thought...but what do you mean fireworks will happen?

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Autistic-teddy In reply to baronvonvoe [2009-03-09 08:23:51 +0000 UTC]

two words: BIG FIGHT

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