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PumpkinHillPie [2015-09-24 16:55:09 +0000 UTC]
isn't the bad friends trio france prussia and spain? let along i love this
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Billica-Riverdine In reply to PumpkinHillPie [2015-09-24 17:08:08 +0000 UTC]
Of course they are! Francis is... well, had something he had to leave for a long time
(It's actually just an excuse made by me, HA! :iconBugHeplz: . Francis cannot appear until part 2)
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vinva098 [2015-08-27 10:34:53 +0000 UTC]
Butter sounds like butler.....
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kittykatrocks12 [2015-08-26 15:12:01 +0000 UTC]
Alfred seems upset ?I wonder why?
Gilbert and Mathias are angry, Antonio looks confused.
This somehow make me think of how Gilbert is part of a lot of trios.
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EllieGodelia [2015-08-26 14:52:15 +0000 UTC]
Awesome
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95Jezzica [2015-08-26 13:44:01 +0000 UTC]
I love this comic.
Great job! You have a few missspellings, etc, in your text though, just so you know.
The bolded text is the corrected and/or added part, and the text which is crossed over shouldn't be there.
"Anyway, Jones told me / us something very surprising this morning."
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"He said that Ashley, the girl that who was believed to have been abducted by aliens at in Alaska in 2001, has returned yesterday and hasn't aged at all."
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"Haven't Didn't I already told tell you three you must to not run on in the hallway again?!"
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"Do you seriously blame us for that!? Check Look at the situation, dude!"
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[The Bad Touch Trio, or what ever whatever they are called by.
Another group of idiots I had have to face deal with.]
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"A SWEDISH GUY SUDDENLY BEGAN TO CHASED CHASE US, BECAUSE HE SAID WE HIT ON HIS WIFE!"
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"I'TS IT'S LEGALLY LOGICAL TO RUN EVEN INSIDE THEN!"
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I think those were all I found, but I might have missed something. Anyway, this would make it easier to read the comic, so please consider it.
I know English is hard, so maybe you can find a beta-reader or something? It would probably help a lot and make it easier to read the text.
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Billica-Riverdine In reply to 95Jezzica [2015-08-27 14:28:05 +0000 UTC]
Uwaah thank you and I'm sorry for the mistakes! I didn't realize the misspellings
I definitely consider it, I'm improving my english anyway
I tried to ask (kidnap) my class to help, so.. can you please see if they do good in the next page?
thank you again~~
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SailorSetsuna [2015-08-26 12:37:14 +0000 UTC]
Yay! BTT! \>w
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