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NightTales [2014-01-21 05:47:05 +0000 UTC]
It is so beautiful!Β
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WorldWar-Tori [2014-01-04 23:47:17 +0000 UTC]
Hello,
I saw you wished for more feedback on your artwork,
First of all I really like this one, I was stuck between this one and your Autumn Dreams, they're both quite interesting and I like the atmosphere you created in both of them. It's quite nice and 'dreamy' if you will. I do have a few suggestions,
First thing was the rainbow shoes in the foreground. I like the idea of the shoes being there, but the flashiness of the rainbow seems a bit much from the softer dreaminess of the overall image. I would have settled for a more 'classical' subdued pair, which would also fit more with the television you used near it. Also I would have possibly moved them just a little further to the left rather than centered
Another thing was the way on the left the grass seems to come into the entry; I actually really like that, I would have brought the rest of the ground in a little as well (or have cut the grassiness at the entry line whichever way)
The blue on the edges of the dark areas; I don't know if that was intentional or not, but when you really look at the image more it catches the eye, perhaps if it could be blended or hidden a little more?
Other than those few things it's quite nice. I like the colors and how well behind the curtains is visible, but remains 'covered'. It works really well
Also I like the framing, at first I wasn't sure, I thought perhaps it should be centered (kind of like the other) but the more I look at it the more I like the off center of it. Also the way there seems to be a breeze with the curtain
Overall it's quite nice
-TORi
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bittersweetflames In reply to WorldWar-Tori [2014-01-11 04:24:44 +0000 UTC]
I definitely will be making a new one of this.. I've joined a contest! HAHA. <3
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