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Published: 2011-07-23 05:25:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 5332; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 59
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Description haori-hakama is an type of kimono that used to be only for men but now are uni-sex

Media: Copic Markers

Ugh. the hands really bug me. And I think I could of done better with the clothing. Like making it feel like cloth flapping in the wind or something.
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Comments: 25

TenCigarettes [2012-01-06 21:04:08 +0000 UTC]

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The first thing I noticed was the color rendition, not excessively cured, but good enough to intrigue the viewer.
This could be a good thing except that successivamante know about the poverty of the work. The scale and attention to detail have not been well implemented. I admire your passion, but in addition to anatomy books I strongly recommend you to browse a book of drapery, because you really need it. ; )

Also I would recommend you to study the interaction between solid and clothing. correct these details and you will see how this will improve your work. try it again

your friend
T.C.

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TheMidnightBlackCat [2013-10-25 07:33:22 +0000 UTC]

wow so cool but some how he looks like Kenshin from Rurouni KenshinΒ but a lotΒ different

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TheMysticalArtist [2011-09-05 05:04:48 +0000 UTC]

I like your drawings. I think it's awesome how you put details on your work! I'm also an Anime artist and my dream is to become a Mangaka (draw and write Japanese comics).

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kakashicrazed [2011-07-28 01:56:30 +0000 UTC]

very very good coloring on this one!!! The only thing that's throwing me off is his shins need to be longer. other than that, very good job! Very nice attention to the detail in his clothes.

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ExtremeCompanionCube [2011-07-25 02:57:11 +0000 UTC]

This is a very lovely drawing, but there are a few things that I think you could work on next time. The head is a little small for the body and on the left arm you can't really tell where the elbow bends. Other then that it was great ^^

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blondewolf2 In reply to ExtremeCompanionCube [2012-08-14 01:20:19 +0000 UTC]

yea the forhead seems kinda flat too >.<
and i feel that arm thing too. unless he's double jointed xDD

Thank you for the advice thou! it can only make me better.

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Ayonez [2011-07-24 16:45:26 +0000 UTC]

This is really nice and I like the way you coloured and shaded this picture but I must point out that in my opinion you forgot about the physics and the clothes lay on him alright but they seem off. The hands are still not perfect but anybody looking at this would get the idea.

Well here are some links to tutorials that may help you draw better if you want;
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blondewolf2 In reply to Ayonez [2012-08-14 01:21:13 +0000 UTC]

O_O yea... now that look at this, it kinda looks like a egyptian style. with that flatness lol!

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ROCKBAND19332 [2011-07-24 07:08:19 +0000 UTC]

This is a good drawing, The anatomy is a bit off such as the arm seemingly short and had very large, the legs are short also. I'm not a very good artist, but I love your drawings <3

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soft-bara [2011-07-23 15:57:47 +0000 UTC]

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FluffySmartAss [2011-07-23 13:16:27 +0000 UTC]

I love your drawing style X3

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narakus-phoenix [2011-07-23 12:47:40 +0000 UTC]

And they can be a bitch to fold if you're not paying attention. The colors blend wonderfully, and you nailed the clothing creases and shading. Thank you for getting all of the pleats in. Fun fact: (as a martial artist/samurai/not ninja) the seven pleats are supposed to stand for the seven virtues.

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blondewolf2 In reply to narakus-phoenix [2011-07-23 19:03:12 +0000 UTC]

thats interesting =o

wait ur a samurai in this era? O_O

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narakus-phoenix In reply to blondewolf2 [2011-07-24 01:58:52 +0000 UTC]

More like an aikidoka, but we practice samurai teachings and values, and several of our techniques mimic sword cuts. Men are allowed to wear hakama when they become black belts, and women, brown. (If you decide to look more into aikido, please ignore everything involving Steven Seagal. Search instead for Morihei Ueshiba O'Sensei.) ^__^;; I love this art; I can't help it.

But, *ahem* nice job on the hakama, again.

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blondewolf2 In reply to narakus-phoenix [2012-08-14 01:23:34 +0000 UTC]

sorry for the late reply >< soo many comments to keep up with.

you are a VERY interesting person and seem to be the type of person who will b able to travel the world! o.o very fascinating!
and thanks for the info! <3

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narakus-phoenix In reply to blondewolf2 [2012-08-28 03:33:37 +0000 UTC]

I can only imagine how many comments you get, each day. ^_^ And it was a nice surprise having another reply from you.

Thank you, and you're welcome. Traveling the world will be awesome. I've never been on a plane before, but I'll fight for the opportunity. One of our Shihan recently expanded our school in China and opened a dojo on Xiamen Island. That's at least one other place to add to the list. ^_^

Anyway (ramble, ramble, ramble), I'm always looking forward to your artwork and videos. Let us know when to start looking for you on the bookshelves, ok?

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InuLoverNr1Hitomi [2011-07-23 12:27:17 +0000 UTC]

It's ima *** awesome!!!

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NanaxBennet [2011-07-23 11:22:54 +0000 UTC]

thats awesome

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KuroNeko773 [2011-07-23 06:45:45 +0000 UTC]

i love the hakama critique: i actually dont really like the eyes D:
and is it just me or is there a finger missing O.O

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blondewolf2 In reply to KuroNeko773 [2011-07-23 07:23:39 +0000 UTC]

yea they needed to be more sexier LOL

oh it was suppose to be behide the others o.o i used my hand to draw it lol

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KuroNeko773 In reply to blondewolf2 [2011-07-23 07:41:55 +0000 UTC]

LOL xD
oooooh ic xD

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Dreamer1398 [2011-07-23 05:30:27 +0000 UTC]

Really good! I really love the hair and the kimino! If you REALLY want critique I don't like the eyes or lips too much. They seem a bit off or weird. Sorry Joey. I feel mean now xD but this is really good! The color is so vivid and clear!

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blondewolf2 In reply to Dreamer1398 [2011-07-23 05:41:47 +0000 UTC]

its cool i want to only get better. so thanks!
kinda looks like a black guy;s o.o

XD

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Dreamer1398 In reply to blondewolf2 [2011-07-23 05:58:44 +0000 UTC]

Okay ^^

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Ryotaneko [2011-07-23 05:28:37 +0000 UTC]

That's actually pretty good. Decent anatomy and good coloring. <3
I like it~

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