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Published: 2012-09-22 08:33:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 924; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 18
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Finally ,the translation of this short manga which i made last year is done.For those who have read Indonesian version, you could re-read this version because i added some details in their updated dialogues
thank you, hope you enjoy the story and i wish i got chance to develop this manga in future
This story born from the original contest in my college days with ,etc--- after that i modified the whole story into fantasy version as the official third entry of my YOU series
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wkwkw thanks 
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the exact translation for Netherlands is "Belanda" in Indonesian, while Pelanda somehow means like..surger or engulfer, i'm just modificating with the words to generate names
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there is some errors in the grammars,i'm still correcting them too lol
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You flatter me but I still have a long way to go before my writing is of high quality. Just learning as I go. =]
If you ever need help with spelling and grammar and whatever, just let me know. I'm more than happy to help. ^-^
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that's the fact,you're awesome
my choices of words are so repetitive and not special unlike yours
suuuure thank youuuu
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*blush* Thank you. Same for you!
Oh, my words get repetitive too. I still need to work on being descriptive without being really wordy. ^-^
*huggle*
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hmmmmmm i never saw any repetitive words from your awesome arrangements of sentences
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^-^; I edit and re-edit; I just don't let people know when I have. 
Besides, I really envy your expert skill with drawing. I've never been good at it, so I admire your abilities quite a bit.
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