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bocodamondo — Lost Love -WIP

Published: 2013-04-19 00:11:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1287; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 56
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Description an animation i made to test my frame by frame skills....im not sure if i should refine it and colors/backgrounds to it...
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SrGrafo [2013-04-26 00:45:53 +0000 UTC]

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mmm its been a while since I made a critic, but I might make one cause I am not agree with the other critic.

e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="16" height="16" alt="" title="damphyr"/> In vision, 2 point of 5 cause I dont find the artist trying to reach something different, its more of a training of the animation with the music.

e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="16" height="16" alt="" title="damphyr"/> Originality 1.5 of 5, the story is not extra different from any other story of love, its the background music what takes a bigger roll.

e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="16" height="16" alt="" title="damphyr"/> Technique 3 of 5, as an animator I can see the work added here, so I might recognize that there was some time dedicated to the frames, and specially there is not so many frames repeated.

e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="16" height="16" alt="" title="damphyr"/> Impact 2.5 of 5, just for a little moments where the animation fit exactly with the song, there was few moments that made a notable change.

This critic was made with the best intention, and should not be taken personaly -u- its a good work, and this is my opinion, and in all the cases, like the artist said there, its a wip, and mostly a test.

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doggysocks In reply to SrGrafo [2013-04-29 00:25:25 +0000 UTC]

Ah man good critique
I totally agree. I like the animation but they could've gotten more creative.

Thanks fer writing a real critique unlike the other one haha..

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SrGrafo In reply to doggysocks [2013-04-29 03:07:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you, means a lot ouo

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Lizie56698 In reply to SrGrafo [2013-04-27 02:40:57 +0000 UTC]

now I understand

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SrGrafo In reply to Lizie56698 [2013-04-27 04:01:22 +0000 UTC]

o uo

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bocodamondo In reply to SrGrafo [2013-04-26 10:39:48 +0000 UTC]

but yeah you are right this is nothing original. a typical cheesy love story that has been done to death. i only cared about the animation to make it look as best as i can. but thanks for the review i appriciate it

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SrGrafo In reply to bocodamondo [2013-04-26 13:49:32 +0000 UTC]

I know it was a practice, and for a practice it was really good done

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bocodamondo In reply to SrGrafo [2013-04-26 10:26:29 +0000 UTC]

"specially there is not so many frames repeated."' thats not true. there is barely any key frame repeated.....

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DancrewProductions [2013-04-25 22:00:23 +0000 UTC]

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Wow. It's...It's just sad. The girl lost her true love. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Sad)"/> I hope she's alright.

The animation is good. Can't wait to see the finished project.

I kinda like the music. It's sad and touching. But It was the most beautiful things I've ever heard in the history of love.

I wish I could be a better animator, But I gotta practice first. I did so good on my Flash Animation Class back in High school. I got a better grade on it as well. But The problem is I haven't done animation like forever. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/> And that's the stinkin' part. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>

Anywho, I hope you'll do great on your animation and I hope you do your best as well! ^_^

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kalebsanders007 [2015-11-12 08:04:29 +0000 UTC]

yep thats what the army brings you

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kalebsanders007 In reply to kalebsanders007 [2015-11-12 08:06:15 +0000 UTC]

nah but this could be used today err its too late dang!

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kalebsanders007 In reply to kalebsanders007 [2015-11-12 08:06:42 +0000 UTC]

But at least he made a sacrifice for his country...

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krioss [2013-08-20 11:09:58 +0000 UTC]

very awesome animation, i really like it ^^

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nia33690 [2013-06-12 20:09:28 +0000 UTC]

thats so sad

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Sigfriedofgaea [2013-05-10 13:13:39 +0000 UTC]

So sad...

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JiMxLoNeWoLf [2013-04-29 03:35:25 +0000 UTC]

well i like it . ... for being a test is pretty good.

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Miivei [2013-04-28 01:54:45 +0000 UTC]

wooow!!
how many frames did this taek you?

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kuroyoBEAST [2013-04-27 03:50:15 +0000 UTC]

aaawwnn ,this is awesome
andthe story is so sad ;//A//;

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RikkuHanari [2013-04-26 04:44:47 +0000 UTC]

wow...really emotived...;u; I want to see finished < D

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bocodamondo In reply to RikkuHanari [2013-04-26 10:33:09 +0000 UTC]

i'll try to refinish it. it will probably take some tiem though

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AkameMiyuki [2013-04-26 00:52:31 +0000 UTC]

nobody cried here.......*sub*

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Blasian-Parkour [2013-04-22 12:06:34 +0000 UTC]

that was beautiful

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IslandxInxThexSun [2013-04-21 18:12:04 +0000 UTC]

That was so sweet and sad and beautiful.

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TigerLily409 [2013-04-20 20:37:55 +0000 UTC]

AWWW!!! THAT WAS SO SAD YET SWEET~!!!!

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UltimateSkyeler13 [2013-04-20 05:36:39 +0000 UTC]

*

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UltimateSkyeler13 [2013-04-20 05:36:13 +0000 UTC]

:iocnmingtearsplz:

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electric-cloudsXIV [2013-04-20 02:16:15 +0000 UTC]

OMG THAT WAS SO SAD //CRAIS!!

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TheMAM [2013-04-19 16:54:59 +0000 UTC]

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Naruttebayo67 [2013-04-19 12:40:12 +0000 UTC]

good animation my friend, and nice music too

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NyteShay [2013-04-19 04:29:15 +0000 UTC]

This song is from somewhere.....idk where tho

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AlruunaDream [2013-04-19 03:24:27 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome!

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dragons4life [2013-04-19 00:57:33 +0000 UTC]

you did great and yes it still needs work but you did great keep it up man.

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