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SrGrafo [2013-04-26 00:45:53 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
mmm its been a while since I made a critic, but I might make one cause I am not agree with the other critic.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="16" height="16" alt="" title="damphyr"/> In vision, 2 point of 5 cause I dont find the artist trying to reach something different, its more of a training of the animation with the music.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="16" height="16" alt="" title="damphyr"/> Originality 1.5 of 5, the story is not extra different from any other story of love, its the background music what takes a bigger roll.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="16" height="16" alt="" title="damphyr"/> Technique 3 of 5, as an animator I can see the work added here, so I might recognize that there was some time dedicated to the frames, and specially there is not so many frames repeated.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="16" height="16" alt="" title="damphyr"/> Impact 2.5 of 5, just for a little moments where the animation fit exactly with the song, there was few moments that made a notable change.
This critic was made with the best intention, and should not be taken personaly -u- its a good work, and this is my opinion, and in all the cases, like the artist said there, its a wip, and mostly a test.
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doggysocks In reply to SrGrafo [2013-04-29 00:25:25 +0000 UTC]
Ah man good critique
I totally agree. I like the animation but they could've gotten more creative.
Thanks fer writing a real critique unlike the other one haha..
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SrGrafo In reply to doggysocks [2013-04-29 03:07:50 +0000 UTC]
thank you, means a lot ouo
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Lizie56698 In reply to SrGrafo [2013-04-27 02:40:57 +0000 UTC]
now I understand
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bocodamondo In reply to SrGrafo [2013-04-26 10:39:48 +0000 UTC]
but yeah you are right this is nothing original. a typical cheesy love story that has been done to death. i only cared about the animation to make it look as best as i can. but thanks for the review i appriciate it
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SrGrafo In reply to bocodamondo [2013-04-26 13:49:32 +0000 UTC]
I know it was a practice, and for a practice it was really good done
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bocodamondo In reply to SrGrafo [2013-04-26 10:26:29 +0000 UTC]
"specially there is not so many frames repeated."' thats not true. there is barely any key frame repeated.....
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kalebsanders007 [2015-11-12 08:04:29 +0000 UTC]
yep thats what the army brings you
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krioss [2013-08-20 11:09:58 +0000 UTC]
very awesome animation, i really like it ^^
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nia33690 [2013-06-12 20:09:28 +0000 UTC]
thats so sad
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Miivei [2013-04-28 01:54:45 +0000 UTC]
wooow!!
how many frames did this taek you?
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kuroyoBEAST [2013-04-27 03:50:15 +0000 UTC]
aaawwnn ,this is awesome
andthe story is so sad ;//A//;
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RikkuHanari [2013-04-26 04:44:47 +0000 UTC]
wow...really emotived...;u; I want to see finished < D
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bocodamondo In reply to RikkuHanari [2013-04-26 10:33:09 +0000 UTC]
i'll try to refinish it. it will probably take some tiem though
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AkameMiyuki [2013-04-26 00:52:31 +0000 UTC]
nobody cried here.......*sub*
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IslandxInxThexSun [2013-04-21 18:12:04 +0000 UTC]
That was so sweet and sad and beautiful.
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TigerLily409 [2013-04-20 20:37:55 +0000 UTC]
AWWW!!! THAT WAS SO SAD YET SWEET~!!!!
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TheMAM [2013-04-19 16:54:59 +0000 UTC]
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NyteShay [2013-04-19 04:29:15 +0000 UTC]
This song is from somewhere.....idk where tho
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dragons4life [2013-04-19 00:57:33 +0000 UTC]
you did great and yes it still needs work but you did great keep it up man.
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