Comments: 12
lightengray [2011-10-28 21:58:34 +0000 UTC]
Yeah...didn't have anytime to look at any deviations til today.
Anyways, there's like...so much going on here, but written in few words.
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BookWyrm144 In reply to lightengray [2011-10-30 02:59:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. What did you think of the end?
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lightengray In reply to BookWyrm144 [2011-10-31 04:10:03 +0000 UTC]
I thought it was brilliant. It sent shivers down my spine.
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ShineeSerenDipity [2011-10-23 03:53:01 +0000 UTC]
Such a vivid description for such a small but monumental moment and this captures it perfectly. Amazing work! Fantastic attention to detail, and second person makes it all the more realistic. Keep it up!
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BookWyrm144 In reply to ShineeSerenDipity [2011-10-23 20:42:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked my first attempt at second person.
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ShineeSerenDipity In reply to BookWyrm144 [2011-10-23 21:02:03 +0000 UTC]
This was your first attempt? Wow, you've done very well! I couldn't tell!
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BookWyrm144 In reply to ShineeSerenDipity [2011-10-23 21:42:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!^^
I've never really given much thought to second person until lately.
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