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Published: 2014-01-29 05:34:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 5599; Favourites: 184; Downloads: 10
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Grief. Death of a home,Β fall of another home. Rushed departure, final goodbye.

Fire. Twisted metal and rubble. Crushing, burning pain. Flickering light.

Darkness. Hand holding hand, pulling, fleeing.

Falling. Flying.



I noticed on maybe the fifteth rewatch of the scenes with Optimus in the cavern that his right pauldron had been totally torn off, Primus

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DragonArtMaster22 [2021-10-28 16:43:17 +0000 UTC]

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KawaiiJosie [2021-08-03 22:19:10 +0000 UTC]

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LiviOVJ [2016-07-24 04:37:48 +0000 UTC]

I love this.Β  Especially since Smokescreen would go to all kinds of extremes for Optimus.Β  One could almost interpret this as Smokescreen's ascendance to primehood, but that never happened because that's not in Smokescreen's character.Β  Rather, Smokescreen would lift Optimus up with him.Β  I'm done being corny now.Β 

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BrookRiver In reply to LiviOVJ [2016-07-25 18:16:17 +0000 UTC]

I saw a couple of Youtube people going "blahhh smokey was screwing around on the throne in darkmount so he's not worthy of primehood" and I was like "just let him be a dumb kid for a bit, okay, he's had enough to chew on"

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LiviOVJ In reply to BrookRiver [2016-07-27 05:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Exactly!Β  Especially since I'm sure Orion would've had one or two childish moments himself without the Matrix, given the chance.Β  I've always felt that the Matrix kind of weighs down its bearers with all the wisdom it contains.Β  Arcee mentions that "primes are built [to be stoic]", so I bet that if Smokey got the Matrix he would've been just as serious as Optimus, especially given the way he would have received it.Β 
Also, Smokescreen being silly on the throne is one of the highlights of the movie, in my opinion.Β 

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MiniKoontzy In reply to LiviOVJ [2019-06-01 21:08:49 +0000 UTC]

And need I point out that the original Thirteen included Amalgamous the Shifter, who was basically a lovable, shape-shifting, hooligan prankster with a spark of gold according to the TF wiki. And the wiki even says the Phase Shifter was Amalgamous's item, so I see more than a few connections there....

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femtransfan [2016-07-14 12:57:44 +0000 UTC]

what's a 'pauldron'?

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BrookRiver In reply to femtransfan [2016-07-14 17:34:19 +0000 UTC]

It's the shoulder guard thingies. See OP's shoulder?

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femtransfan In reply to BrookRiver [2016-07-14 19:01:22 +0000 UTC]

oh.

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KatPerson098 [2015-05-24 05:31:04 +0000 UTC]

I CAN FLYYYY

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BrookRiver In reply to KatPerson098 [2015-05-24 18:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Fun note: he does the "flying down" thing twice! And he (kind of) dies both times!

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KatPerson098 In reply to BrookRiver [2015-05-24 19:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh my. X3

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Sampel-16 [2015-03-01 19:40:34 +0000 UTC]

Looks great but it also looks like smoke kicks Optimus

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Crystalwolfdog7 [2014-11-13 06:16:16 +0000 UTC]

i feel a feel cringing... Β 

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w2seh [2014-07-02 17:48:36 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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BrookRiver In reply to w2seh [2014-07-03 05:07:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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NovakCat [2014-03-17 01:19:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow...this is amazing. And also very sad. Poor Optimus.

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BrookRiver In reply to NovakCat [2014-03-17 01:53:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
Such is the fate of the Prime...

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HellboysLady [2014-02-12 03:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh My this is epic and sad at the same time.

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BrookRiver In reply to HellboysLady [2014-02-12 04:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

Pretty good description of the portion of the show this was inspired by, too.

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HellboysLady In reply to BrookRiver [2014-02-12 06:55:49 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome and you should be proud.

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JACKSPICERCHASE [2014-02-04 10:40:01 +0000 UTC]

So brilliant~ aaagh, the feels~ QAQ

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BrookRiver In reply to JACKSPICERCHASE [2014-02-06 02:23:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

And yep, so many feels. Soooo many feels...

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Misstridd [2014-01-31 15:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Good idea !! I really like your idea . Good job ! :3

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BrookRiver In reply to Misstridd [2014-01-31 15:55:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Leathurkatt-TFTiggy [2014-01-30 05:08:28 +0000 UTC]

He was in seriously awful shape at that point, poor guy.Β  But Smokescreen was there for him, so that was certainly a good thing.

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BrookRiver In reply to Leathurkatt-TFTiggy [2014-01-30 05:15:39 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. Have to feel for Smokescreen too, he had to sit and watch as his hero slowly dies, unable or prevented from doing anything to help him. Good thing everything turned out all right in the end!

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Leathurkatt-TFTiggy In reply to BrookRiver [2014-01-30 05:17:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh indeed, especially with Starscream getting his comeuppance in the end.Β  XDΒ  I will admit, I have loathed Starscream since 1984 and I always will.Β  His voice actors, however, are just awesome people.

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MiniKoontzy [2014-01-30 00:31:42 +0000 UTC]

Pauldron? What's that?

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BrookRiver In reply to MiniKoontzy [2014-01-30 00:47:38 +0000 UTC]

Shoulder armor. Wouldn't be quite accurate to say that his shoulder got torn off; that arm is still operational.

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MiniKoontzy In reply to BrookRiver [2014-01-30 02:15:10 +0000 UTC]

OOH. Ok thanks. I've just never heard that word before.

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SentinelSpockNimoy [2014-01-29 12:29:09 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaawwwwww, poor Optimus. (Cries)

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BrookRiver In reply to SentinelSpockNimoy [2014-01-29 12:38:55 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. :'-(

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SentinelSpockNimoy In reply to BrookRiver [2014-01-30 03:45:24 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me, or is he almost never happy about anything.

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BrookRiver In reply to SentinelSpockNimoy [2014-01-30 04:20:41 +0000 UTC]

He certainly wouldn't be happy about being mortally wounded, but yeah, his smiles aren't too common. Makes 'em all the more precious.

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SentinelSpockNimoy In reply to BrookRiver [2014-01-30 13:21:06 +0000 UTC]

I know. I just wanna randomly run up and hug him.

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Hardtreads [2014-01-29 08:39:39 +0000 UTC]

OMP! Such a brilliant idea... but them feels.

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BrookRiver In reply to Hardtreads [2014-01-29 11:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
I ended up rewatching the scenes with Optimus in the cavern several times to draw the injuries he'd sustained. It got worse every time. Feels indeed.

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Hardtreads In reply to BrookRiver [2014-01-29 17:30:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome c:

And yah, he sustained A LOT of damage!

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MiniKoontzy In reply to Hardtreads [2014-01-30 00:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Well what'd you except, getting BLOWN UP like that?

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Hardtreads In reply to MiniKoontzy [2014-01-30 09:22:10 +0000 UTC]

xD KABOOM!

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ArsenicalLady [2014-01-29 05:37:30 +0000 UTC]

...Is that guy dead?

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BrookRiver In reply to ArsenicalLady [2014-01-29 05:47:20 +0000 UTC]

No, but he will be.

...and of course, in proper Optimus fashion, he'll be right back to kick Decepticon aft. Doesn't make his slow andΒ painful demise any less depressing, though.

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ArsenicalLady In reply to BrookRiver [2014-01-29 05:58:26 +0000 UTC]

Ah, yes. I forgot it's a cartoon; heroes seem to come back a lot.

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