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Published: 2014-10-03 04:13:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 619; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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Description Enter patisserie:
A line of nobodies leads
me to my cashier’s right
dimple.

                    One cookie please.
                    That’ll be 69 cents.

I fumble for my
wallet, coins jangling
to the tune of Sin
atra love songs &
the cashier winks
at Nobody.

                    A kaleidoscope of maggots slip
                    n slide down my glissando guts

A torrent of  c r u m b s
hails in my oesophagus.
The cashier autographs his number
on the receipt.   My cell phone gets
a boner.

           I staple Crayola cocoons
           to my forehead & crunch
           my saccharine treat.

Several nibbles later I
return to the queue of
idiots that aren’t us &
two whomevers gossip
about Nothing in front
of me & as the cashier
says next, this weather
makes my feet cold.

         Pineal butterflies flap their wings
             Hurricane Devin demolishes
                 skyscrapers & anthills &
                       momandpop
                      pastry shops

I puke.
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Comments: 8

angelserum [2017-07-01 10:17:31 +0000 UTC]

i'm sorry i'm commenting on so many of your works all in a rush but i really adore adore how you write and just the way you display your thoughts throughout stanzas if that even makes any sense i love the succession of images presented like that

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ChloroformBoy In reply to angelserum [2017-07-01 12:31:46 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad you enjoy them i forgot about a lot of these poems

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angelserum In reply to angelserum [2017-07-01 10:18:00 +0000 UTC]

 i really love the phrase glissando guts too what a lovely phrase 

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Daghrgenzeen [2014-10-04 12:00:47 +0000 UTC]

Agreeing with the previous commenter; excellent piece.

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ChloroformBoy In reply to Daghrgenzeen [2014-10-05 08:43:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you cute lil seal

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Daghrgenzeen In reply to ChloroformBoy [2014-10-05 12:27:49 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome. ^^

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saltwaterlungs [2014-10-03 20:16:49 +0000 UTC]

Awesome imagery and word choice. I can picture this scene really well.

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ChloroformBoy In reply to saltwaterlungs [2014-10-04 03:02:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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